The Moment (Short Story) - 3/24/2014 4:34:05 AM
Although I've played the piano and piano accordion, I've not been much into music with instruments. So the story initially did not appeal much to me. However, I soon noticed that you do something very well that I did not, and that is character development. Finally, your setup was perfect for the first evening concert by the orchestra for the Titanic. Since it is still some time before the orchestra played on while the ship sank, this could be the first chapter of an interesting historical novel.
Ron
The Moment (Short Story) - 3/22/2014 5:22:08 PM
great ending
budd
