Looking in the mirror (Poetry) - 9/15/2012 3:04:50 PM
I'm late in getting here, but now that I am I can say thank you for this offering of yours. You brought out the innocence of a young girl and her Barbie doll as opposed to today's world where insanity rules in much of the world, and I'm getting very worried about us here in America. Enjoyed your poem.
Looking in the mirror (Poetry) - 9/8/2012 4:45:50 PM
I enjoyed your poem's energy--it feels like the speaking voice in the poem is someone a reader can identify with and feel what she feels!
Tear Drop (Poetry) - 9/5/2012 4:39:49 PM
BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Tear Drop (Poetry) - 9/5/2012 3:58:54 PM
The last line sounds like a determined goodbye....be of good courage. This too will pass away.
Welcome to Authors' Den!
Connie
Endless Love (Poetry) - 9/5/2012 1:53:59 PM
This is very hopeful and encouraging, Carrie; I love it!
Tear Drop (Poetry) - 9/5/2012 1:51:25 PM
A very touching poem, Carrie; very emotionally effective and appealing. As a reader, I can definitely identify with the painful experience you write about.
Tear Drop (Poetry) - 9/5/2012 9:37:07 AM
Definitely time to move on. You are showing the signs of it already. Put it down in a poem and leave it there. More life ahead.
Ron
