Sunrise Like Sunset Dance Playfully Through Me (Poetry) - 11/17/2012 10:35:40 AM
Romantic and sweet. So good to know there are a lot of other romantics who refuse to give in to crassness and cynicism.
x:)x Phyllis x:)x
N: Jerry's right about the dangling eyes; maybe something like "with visions of your soft, tantalizing eyes?" Maybe w/o soft? Just a thought. Don't mean to meddle!
Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall (Poetry) - 9/22/2012 8:29:26 PM
Passionate and sensual and engaging... ...Well done, Chris. Welcome to AD. Love and peace,
Regis
Usually I Begin My Day With The Same Routines (Poetry) - 9/22/2012 8:27:57 PM
I really wonder how many of us feel the same way, Chris. Thank you for awakening thought. Love and peace,
Regis
Sunrise Like Sunset Dance Playfully Through Me (Poetry) - 9/16/2012 12:59:52 PM
You did have me coming and going… I'm not sure which because both sunrise and sunset are the same in your lovers eyes.
Ron
Sunrise Like Sunset Dance Playfully Through Me (Poetry) - 9/15/2012 3:15:35 PM
I had to laugh at this . . . "With visions soft of dangling eyes," as I visualized dangling eyes.
Other than that the sonnet is well-written and lovely. I'd seriously try to get rid of the dangling eyes though.
Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall (Poetry) - 9/14/2012 11:09:43 AM
Holding onto the life, and to the season. Love the way you brought this to life. Very beautiful.
