The Dog (Short Story) - 1/11/2005 6:46:04 PM
I know you wrote this story as a horror story but this is the kind of story that might not scare me but I could tell this could scare some other people. I like the way it is written and you do have an original voice when it comes to horror. I would really like to see you play around with this one to make it a longer story. There is a novella crawling around in there somewhere. I speak as a writer of this genre when I say this, you know how to carry a scare.
The Dog (Short Story) - 8/30/2004 12:47:49 PM
LOL, I know this is horror, but I actually find it cute and funny! Good job
Heroes, All (Short Story) - 7/13/2004 5:55:24 AM
Awesome story! I'm not normally a science fiction fan but I couldn't help but get drawn into this one. I love the way you incorporated history into your story...it was very creative! :-) April
The Dog (Short Story) - 7/6/2004 11:20:25 AM
Steve, I love your writing style! You manage to keep me right on the edge of my seat! :-) April
The Best Part of a Woman (Short Story) - 6/30/2004 4:42:23 PM
I loved this story! Everyone knows what it's like when a relationship has unfortunately reached a different level. You've nailed it perfectly. Great job! April (and not that bitchy April LOL)
The Dog (Short Story) - 6/30/2004 3:51:34 PM
yikes! chilling story, steve! well done! sounds like the sweet little pomeranian i write about, but one who has gone bad! not a good thing when a dog goes bad on ya...
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
Appetizers (Short Story) - 6/30/2004 1:31:53 PM
man that creeped me out! LOL April
Appetizers (Short Story) - 5/8/2004 11:08:05 AM
Wow, this one twisted in a way I never expected, great job. The satirical dark humor of it was wonderful.
Carol
The Best Part of a Woman (Short Story) - 2/14/2004 8:19:28 PM
You had excellent voice and do well with dialouge. You have the gift.
The Best Part of a Woman (Short Story) - 8/16/2002 10:40:11 AM
Very strong characterizations for a short piece - interesting, telling details that create a believable relationship. Sweet and spooky.
The Best Part of a Woman (Short Story) - 8/4/2002 10:21:16 AM
great story. Needs some minor editing.
Example, following two sentences are redundant:
But time erodes us all. Time had worn April’s voice away for me.
The Best Part of a Woman (Short Story) - 8/3/2002 3:28:19 PM
This story is so incredibily fantastic! I loved it!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Appetizers (Short Story) - 7/17/2002 12:58:59 PM
YIPE. Good, scary read...kept me hooked. Great job!! (((HUGS))), Love, Karla.
