When A Poem Will Come.. (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 3:11:57 AM
Portia, you are a true poetess. Your poem shows that you are no stranger to inspiration. Lovely work.
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 3:55:58 PM
You have recalled and shared the experience very effectively via your verses, Portia. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 6:12:01 PM
I can so totally relate to what you express through your verses that it makes me "dizzy" in a good way. Thank you, Portia. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 9/14/2013 3:26:51 AM
You sound like a very young dreamer,yet the message comes through the same.
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 7:27:42 AM
Fantacy at it's best...thanks for sharing your fantacy...the moon and the sun just do it for me!!
Love Tinka
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 9:26:16 PM
Lovely, Pure fantasy, Or is it.... enjoyed this Pierre.
Sometimes I Feel (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 9:22:20 PM
upon entering into sleep we relinquish the free movement of our bodies,
the realm of sleep can be scary for some maybe this is why we have nightmares. Interesting Poem Pierre.
As If sharing A Secret (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 8:39:48 AM
Nice. I especially like the fact that you connect with the reflection of your own inner thoughts. M.True
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 7:17:21 PM
Like a wistful stargazer, sharing her secrets with the moon. Well penned! M.True
When A Poem Will Come.. (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 10:57:48 PM
Very telling. Many liken the writing of poetry to the bearing of children, although I cannot attest to the whole of that matter. But a direct connection to a poem and/or the act of creation can be very strong. If you are compelled to write, do not stay your instincts. M.True
A New Meaning (Poetry) - 7/24/2013 11:56:38 PM
Change is always the last thing and the first thing we want to do. And as they say, change is the only constant! Write on!
A Lonely Tree (Poetry) - 7/24/2013 11:48:37 PM
I enjoy the story poetry. You are painting scenes for us. M.True
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 7/18/2013 9:37:04 PM
You are finding a voice in your art. Understanding poetry makes many things possible. Takes y9u many places. Excellent piece. M.True
Thestream (Poetry) - 7/18/2013 9:26:29 PM
Your poetry has a very natural feel to it. The pace is music. The ending a crescendo! M.True
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 7/18/2013 9:20:31 PM
Came for a visit and am most pleased to have done so. Your visions are pure and flowing. M.True
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 5:53:40 AM
Portia you have a very real and uplifting connection with nature and mysticism coupled with a lovely poetic gift.
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 5:52:21 AM
Portia this poem is so soothing and very beautiful.
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 3/6/2013 6:53:46 PM
My, My, them faries do get around.
Gentle poem of etherial delight.
Walt
A Lonely Tree (Poetry) - 3/6/2013 6:51:49 PM
Shed not a tear for that lonely tree Portia. Spring will renew life itself.
Walt
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 1/30/2013 10:26:57 AM
This one sparkles with creativity and mirth. Simply lovely starlight fantasy.
Ron
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 1/30/2013 8:53:42 AM
Very lovely poetry Portia!
So softly soothing and melodically intoxicating.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Moonbeams Reach For Me (Poetry) - 1/30/2013 7:19:05 AM
A true flight of fantasy...travel safe.
Cheers,
Dan
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 1/28/2013 9:18:18 AM
Marvelous poetry with great metaphors. How often does one think of their own independence and what they add to a world that lacks the cohesive love for each other.
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 1/28/2013 8:38:09 AM
Very in tune with the night and very pleasant to read.
Ron
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 1/28/2013 7:06:29 AM
Portia, I really like this poem, it breathes in the night air of the big city.
Cheers,
Dan
The Calm and Quiet Night (Poetry) - 1/28/2013 4:55:09 AM
sleep oh wonderful sleep and none to distrub it
budd
Mom, You Are.. (Poetry) - 1/27/2013 9:22:56 AM
Share these most intimate moments with your mother and know that most breast cancers are cured and the women that have them live long, productive lives after. Your poetry is helping her a lot––keep writing.
Ron
A New Meaning (Poetry) - 1/26/2013 12:58:57 PM
Wonderful allegory. I would only suggest: “My [shell] peels off like a slough,…"
Ron
A New Meaning (Poetry) - 1/26/2013 8:17:59 AM
Portia, you are on that wonderful voyage of discovery...never allow yourself to march to beat of someone else's drum. Keep discovering.
Cheers,
Dan
A New Meaning (Poetry) - 1/26/2013 3:57:44 AM
A wonderful journey of self discovery. Well penned and enjoyed.
A New Meaning (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 12:18:58 PM
Love this elegant poetry
When Will You Come (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 11:22:02 AM
It looks like the sparks will really fly when he comes to you.
Ron
A New Meaning (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 7:37:49 AM
just bask in the glow of this new briliance and let it warm you
budd
The Queen (Poetry) - 1/24/2013 4:23:13 AM
indeed you will and your plan is so beautifully written...pmedlin
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/24/2013 4:18:49 AM
interesting write portia...nice flow and great title...enjoyed...pmedlin
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 2:13:04 PM
Your title drew me in, Portia, and this work has a fitting tone and authentic sentiment beautifully aticulated through monochrome overlays of images giving voice to the muffling of that resounding silence. I, too, find the writing process endlessly fascinating and much food for thought. Kate xx
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 1:56:12 PM
Reads more like a moon strain poem. You've tended to dwell on the darkness, while the moon provides a certain light.
Ron
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 8:08:50 AM
Portia, your poem flowed nicely from verse to verse leaving much to think about...Nicely done.
Cheers,
Dan
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 4:03:23 AM
Lovely Procession Portia
Coffins & Death Knells
Play Steven Tyler for Me
Vickie
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 3:43:22 AM
there is much to be read here and enjoyed
budd
A Moon-stained Poem (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 3:13:33 AM
Very well written with many wonderful metaphors
The Queen (Poetry) - 1/22/2013 12:24:10 PM
Wow! That sounds like a plan worth carrying out. I sure hope your mother understands.
Ron
The Queen (Poetry) - 1/22/2013 6:00:12 AM
a mom would surely love to hear this
budd
Footprints (Poetry) - 1/22/2013 5:00:11 AM
this has a lovely message Portia
Thank You for sharing your beautiful
"Footprints" vision...
Seaweed Sand Castles
& Sunkissed Cheeks
Vickie
The Queen (Poetry) - 1/22/2013 4:57:40 AM
ahhh I am a mother, and I suppose a Queen
over my family brood :) ...at one time that is :)
I like this awesome line:
"I will shine
With my own individual lustre."
it's empowering & beautiful,
and you do shine Portia!!
Embracing The Sage of You
Vickie
When A Poem Will Come.. (Poetry) - 1/21/2013 11:26:59 AM
I see a creative flowering in your words unfolding.
Ron
When A Poem Will Come.. (Poetry) - 1/21/2013 8:49:13 AM
I think a poem came, Portia! This is the first I've read by you, and I like it a lot. Lovely thoughts! Perhaps to your own mind will come that "intoxicating" excitement of loving your own accomplishment, putting the right words on that blank sheet....may it happen many times as you continue writing!
Connie
When A Poem Will Come.. (Poetry) - 1/21/2013 7:46:45 AM
Portia, when a poem comes it means that you are slowly, gracefully finding your 'poetic' voice, and your voice will continue to grow each time you face that blank sheet of whiteness.
Cheers,
Dan
A Lonely Tree (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 11:32:46 AM
An interesting personification of a tree. Methinks the raging storm made you cast your own feeling onto the tree, that you felt was in peril. Many trees lose limbs to winter ice and storms, but the fact that it had lost its leaves meant that there was less for the wind to get hold of and bring the tree down.
Ron
A Lonely Tree (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 11:08:18 AM
What an absolutely cool poem...love it!
Cheers,
Dan
the Lighthouse (Poetry) - 1/18/2013 3:35:49 AM
it beckons you to your own personal safe harbor
budd
A Never-ending Story (Poetry) - 1/16/2013 7:46:01 AM
thank you for this write
budd
