a beginning (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 12:21:32 AM
I cry every time I read this, I can feel your words and your passion.
More than Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 12:19:19 AM
This is so beautiful it breaks my heart, I can't help but read it over and over again.
like the rain... (Poetry) - 7/28/2004 8:26:07 AM
Gary, this is a very nice piece
For Her (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 8:18:49 PM
So much said in this little piece. (smiles)
a beginning (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 8:15:25 PM
I can feel the emotion in this, Gary. Good work.
like the rain... (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 8:13:07 PM
I, too, have an affinity for rain. Good expression here.
like the rain... (Poetry) - 3/28/2004 6:59:34 PM
"It's raining on Sunday". Yes, lightening revealing the truth, even when I don't want to see it. G, I know you understand.
like the rain... (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 9:27:34 AM
I have a lifelong passion for rain... referring to it as having 'wisdom' and later describing that it 'whispers' zoomed
straight into me... poetic, yes.. and so true. I know this is a sad moment in your piece...the melancholy and your writing of the rain is blissful
and beautiful... moving. katy xox.
like the rain... (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 12:39:38 AM
this is soft and lovely, tks
like the rain... (Poetry) - 3/6/2004 5:22:21 PM
Wonderfully melancholy...and full of the pain of lost love. May you find reprieve and solace...all good things to you...
like the rain... (Poetry) - 3/6/2004 5:19:47 PM
A great sense of longings...
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Desire (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 1:31:18 AM
She will one day find you, as you have found her.
