Diana,a Lady in Waiting. Preview (Short Story) - 9/10/2016 12:41:59 PM
Your story reads like an article. As I read, I hoped that you are writing as someone who was close to the British Royal family and therefore, knowledgeable about details that no one else is. Instead, after reading your bio, I have to assume that you are just reporting well-known information and gossip about the situation. You start off with the conspiracy theory that Diana was murdered, but then don't put it in the story. I guess you have to decide whether this book is fact or fiction. From what I read, it's rehashed fact and the fiction is some half-baked conspiracy to follow.
Ron
