In Building the Wall (Poetry) - 12/6/2004 4:32:23 PM
Dear Keith...how well I know these feelings...and how well
you described them in these verses!
Have you read my articles on Depression, in AD?
Glad you're feeling better.
In Building the Wall (Poetry) - 12/6/2004 9:06:08 AM
i understand depression, i think many here do
Objectivity (Poetry) - 11/4/2004 6:01:41 PM
You meandered through many emotions
to a sweet finale! Well done!
Objectivity (Poetry) - 11/4/2004 5:48:39 PM
a well written account of objective subjectivity ...
Objectivity (Poetry) - 11/4/2004 12:00:00 PM
"...inject the shadows with your soft glow..."
Keith...that is supremely beautiful. I enjoyed the entire poem,
too, by the way.
Dark Goddess (Poetry) - 12/8/2003 8:04:51 AM
So very powerful!
Dark Goddess (Poetry) - 12/8/2003 6:13:26 AM
Imagery of anger and neglect.
Well written and constructed piece that tears away the veil of innocence.
Dark Goddess (Poetry) - 12/8/2003 2:31:39 AM
excellent poem ...
luv this image: " And when I learn to walk on my own
My first steps will be over your grave
Where I will stand forever
To prevent you from rising again"
Taste of Death (Poetry) - 12/4/2003 10:34:20 AM
well crafted poem. very well done.
Taste of Death (Poetry) - 12/4/2003 12:33:59 AM
excellent ending to this insightful poem ...
Taste of Death (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 7:56:06 AM
Hello this is beautiful the flow and rhyme is so excellent.
Dark Side of the Moon (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 9:20:00 PM
well done... like how it ends...
Dark Side of the Moon (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 12:41:33 PM
Unique and moving write. Enjoyed it.
My Instructions (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 9:30:40 PM
Scary and beautiful. Interesting acrostic. You don't, by
chance, own a gun, do you? ;-)
My Instructions (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 7:33:37 PM
Wow, this is soooo cleverly crafted...EXCELLANT WORK!
~Nikki~
My Instructions (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 7:43:41 PM
I love this style!
WOnderful job
The Infinite Woman (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 12:12:33 PM
I can see why Sylence so much wanted you to write your
lovely lines, and get a book out.
You are a deep thinker, as she is, and I admire the work
of both of you.
The Question (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 9:49:08 AM
She is one very fortunate woman to have you in her life. Your poetry is beautiful and intense. This is my favorite.
Full of Emptiness (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 10:58:17 AM
This is sad and leaves one feeling lonely. You penned this with great thought. Lisa
Full of Emptiness (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 10:14:40 AM
awesome write. expressed this well.
The Infinite Woman (Poetry) - 10/2/2003 6:50:30 AM
This is so beautiful..
I hope to see more and I will be the first to buy your up coming book.
