Foreign Site (Poetry) - 6/23/2013 3:46:04 AM
thanks for sharing this write
Peace be with you
William
Lovely Lady (Poetry) - 6/20/2013 5:41:45 PM
Again, and sadly, your verses express a universal and timeless theme of this world/life, Carmen. Well done and thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Foreign Site (Poetry) - 6/20/2013 5:40:14 PM
A most apt, timely, and meaningful theme, Carmen. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Lily (Poetry) - 6/20/2013 5:38:36 PM
Very compelling and meaningful, Carmen. Your verses awaken thought and emotion. Thank you for sharing. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Foreign Site (Poetry) - 6/19/2013 4:22:42 AM
Your poem seems to describe someone who, with great danger and difficulty, came to this country, this shining the light of liberty, and having met with some compassion and mercy, persevered in spite of the possibility of deportation.
Correct me if I'm wrong.
Ron
When All Else Fails... and Mi Amor... (Poetry) - 6/18/2013 4:34:31 AM
excellent write Carmen enjoyed reading
Peace be with you
once upon a time New Yorker
William
When All Else Fails... and Mi Amor... (Poetry) - 6/3/2013 5:55:28 AM
Yes, when we look at all humanity, we are more alike than different. Taking risk and failure is in our nature. As is love, the mender of all things.
Ron
