Val d'Aosta Vignette (Short Story) - 1/27/2006 11:11:39 AM
“In Cogne, happiness is measured not in gold, amica, but in that which warms the heart and delights the senses. Per favore… enjoy, remember cold nights, fine food, and cioccolati hand-made for you by eternal friends.”
Yup that just about sums up happiness..well done Kevin you really have the perfect surname all of your work stems from you wondrous heart/Hart...bravo!
Vesna*
Vesna
Val d'Aosta Vignette (Short Story) - 1/27/2006 4:17:06 AM
I'm sorry, but I don't "get" it. Or maybe I do. Are you implying that the chololate is not sold but given? Strange, if that is the case. Or maybe I am just not sensitive enough to understand.
Val d'Aosta Vignette (Short Story) - 1/27/2006 2:17:31 AM
For a first this is very well done Kevin!!
Looking forward in reading more!!
Love Tinka
Dark and Stormy (Poetry) - 7/13/2013 7:57:34 AM
The stormy sea seems to have swallowed up many a sailor's poem.
Ron
Crystal Promises (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 9:26:48 PM
"One word glance" really sums it all, nice writing...
Be always safe,
Karen
Crystal Promises (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 3:08:24 AM
Very nice writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss
Punk Poetry (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 9:31:47 PM
Whipped it real good. Great job taking us back. Lots of different images here. Hugs,
Sheila
Punk Poetry (Poetry) - 7/30/2008 9:49:34 AM
Ah!
This is delightful!
I'm generally not one to use exlamation marks, but ...
AH!
Wonderfully refreshing.
Manifold Black (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 3:09:27 AM
mmm..unique..as always..you truly have a unique style..
Vesna
Cara Mia, Please (Poetry) - 4/5/2008 12:13:01 PM
What a beautiful, sad write.
Enjoyed reading.
Amira
At the Crown and Anchor (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 12:14:47 PM
Different but soul satisfying. Brinks to mind my lost cocker spaniel Joy and others who have gone before me. Will read your things as they appeal to me and help with my depression.
Ship That Never Came In (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 12:13:29 PM
Mine sank with loss of hubbie Tom on Aug 17 07 after 17 years. It is so lonely without him still and I do my devotionals daily by reading poems such as you write and inspirational ones to help me through grieving. Thank God for good authors like you are.
Manifold Black (Poetry) - 11/28/2007 12:28:33 PM
very well penned Kevin!!
Love Tinka
Manifold Black (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 6:14:13 PM
Hard as rock and as descriptive, longings! Bless you!Jasmin Horst
Cara Mia, Please (Poetry) - 7/19/2007 10:11:37 AM
Great offering!!
The "Cara mia made me think many years back...I was playing the leading roll in a play.....ver serious play it was...called "The Ring"...and Each time my knight said the words "CARA MIA MY LOVE"...I use to burst out in laughter.....not sure if it was the pathetic look on his face or the way he said the words...but I just could not handle it well....lol!!
At the end we had to cover it up with a few extra lines to set my mind straight!!
Love Tinka
Surrealistic Pillow Revisited (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 12:33:44 AM
The dialogue between two people is riveting. Leaves me waiting for more.
At the Crown and Anchor (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 11:42:52 AM
Enjoyed the read....good to read you again!!
Love Tinka
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 6:52:36 AM
wow, well done and so easy to relate to, well put
Glass Paragraphs (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 6:47:47 AM
i like the feel of reality in your work
Punk Poetry (Poetry) - 9/16/2006 7:56:06 AM
I Love it! On my space I have a written "I Miss the Ramones" and boy do I! Thank You for this! It was great! Joey would have loved it!
Lori (Poetry) - 9/16/2006 7:48:33 AM
It touches me in a way that most people will never know. I stumbled across your poem and I am so glad I did. To all the "Lori's" who have been there, we thank you.
Surrealistic Pillow Revisited (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 9:32:52 AM
No it isn't easy..but we're all here for you..
Vesna:)
Surrealistic Pillow Revisited (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 12:03:19 PM
Warm hugs...someone one told me I was Bipolar and I did not even know the meaning of the word....thanks for sharing....insightful read!!
Love Tinka
Surrealistic Pillow Revisited (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 9:51:39 AM
if anyone doubts it is real, they should have a good dose of it, they would become believers
Punk Poetry (Poetry) - 6/14/2006 6:59:54 PM
oh, yes. this is right. you took me back a ways, to days spent on skateboards, boombox in hand with a bad brains tape glued in the tape deck. the roir album was the soundtrack to my youth in them days, with every sunday afternoon spent at cbgb's hardcore matinees. now i'm older,though not much wiser, and the cold thought hits me that our gods are dying off. joey and johnny, wendy o., and most of all, the great joe strummer. sometimes i wonder if those years of my youth were wasted; then i read something like this, and i realize i was part of something bigger than myself, and i wasted nothing.
thank you for this poem.
Punk Poetry (Poetry) - 6/14/2006 12:49:55 PM
I'm pogoing away to this one Kevin, good work, like the concept brings back lots of happy memories...Hey ho! Lets Go!
Paul;-)
Fast Food Poetry (Poetry) - 6/12/2006 8:07:00 PM
I once evesdropped ,(not intentlally, mind you) but that's exactly what they were talking about was english-potery, while eating,,how funny, this is way to cute to keep to oneself,,,great share,,thanks for the few mintues of laughter,,, and being a cater and enjoying reading poems,,I can realte to this proably in a different sort of way,,clea
Glass Paragraphs (Poetry) - 6/12/2006 8:02:39 PM
a connection that we all probably have, yet, scared out of our wits to admit,,,oh, I think I just did,,great write,,,first I've read of yours,,I'll readm ore when I have alittle more time,,thanks for the share,,,
Qasida (Poetry) - 6/9/2006 2:44:25 PM
Peace & Love,
Dove
Barbara (Poetry) - 5/31/2006 11:34:19 AM
You have captured vital essence here.
Love it!!
Amy
Barbara (Poetry) - 5/30/2006 4:02:51 PM
My this is quite a story and you've managed to convey your feelings with such creative and symbolic words. My best, Gloria
Glass Paragraphs (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 9:31:57 PM
Glass Paragraphs pours the red, such a clarifying poem! Would not at all have the same taste if it were white wine...Glass Paragraphs is such a palatable poem with a pleasing bite! Decipher's very well, Kevin! In vino veritas...in wine there is truth!
Sage
Glass Paragraphs (Poetry) - 5/20/2006 6:22:13 PM
I can relate to the sentiments expressed via your verses, Kevin. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Glass Paragraphs (Poetry) - 5/19/2006 7:43:03 PM
This is sumptuous verse. What a decadent and piquant treat!
Rocking Horse Boats (Poetry) - 5/5/2006 1:50:21 AM
Well written Kevin!!
Love tinka
Rocking Horse Boats (Poetry) - 5/4/2006 7:38:05 PM
I enjoyed the visuals in this poem. It reminded me of my brother who was a seaman. Beautifully written!
eT
Fast Food Poetry (Poetry) - 4/11/2006 1:48:46 PM
This is very unique, which alone is great. The idea of fast food poetry reminds me of the beret-wearing poets in cafes who take themselves far too seriously- great title and poem.
Fast Food Poetry (Poetry) - 4/10/2006 7:54:56 AM
Wow, that was filling. Time for another helping.
Fast Food Poetry (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 1:29:26 PM
clever. very clever. (i'm not a fan of food myself)
Fast Food Poetry (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 2:44:20 AM
Lol Ditto Cyn on this one..eat your heart out!!
love Tinka
Fast Food Poetry (Poetry) - 4/5/2006 9:11:43 PM
Can Emeril put a little 'BAM' on this? May all poets forever EAT their own words with leftovers to share.
blessin's Bro. Kev,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Drinking Alone (Poetry) - 3/30/2006 5:32:36 PM
During World War ll drinking was social now it is hard drugs which is much more damanging to the mind. This is the runination of our country and it goes on in other countries as well.
Fallujah Afternoon (Poetry) - 3/30/2006 5:27:29 PM
Yeap - nothing is gained but bitterness and hurt by all concerned -
It seems prosperity and world changes are made after a war - perhaps that is the real reason behind declaring war against another - who knows
Berlin (Poetry) - 3/30/2006 5:21:01 PM
All killing is wrong - although they justify WAR That is unfortunate
Berlin (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 11:48:11 AM
A sad reality these days my friend!!
love Tinka
Culloden (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 10:00:32 AM
A great offering Kevin!!
Love Tinka
Berlin (Poetry) - 3/10/2006 7:51:38 PM
Greed fodders war. Children leave as warriors faithfully honoring belief and return scarred and older than their ability to deal can cope. Scars....no one knows the real damage but them. This is a sad truth.
Thanks you .
Susan
The Alliterative Poet (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 1:52:49 PM
Now what more can I say??
You are good....."Alliterative Poet!!
Love Tinka
The Alliterative Poet (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 1:43:03 PM
What a wonderful time I had meandering through this maze of echo's. Ya did good.
The Alliterative Poet (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 12:58:28 PM
And there you have it.
We all start somewhere.
Enjoyed...
Portrait of Jessica (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 3:47:30 AM
you know your friend well, a great tribute.
Portrait of Jessica (Poetry) - 2/15/2006 7:15:49 PM
Enjoyed...Oh to be 16 again.
Portrait of Jessica (Poetry) - 2/15/2006 1:13:43 AM
Wow you tha poet and you/she know it..well done!!
Love Tinka
Fallujah Afternoon (Poetry) - 2/14/2006 9:13:39 AM
Profound...thanks for sharing!!
Happy Valentines Day Friend!!
love Tinka
Literary Romance (Poetry) - 2/7/2006 7:13:23 PM
Wow! This is truly romantic. You make the pages dance.
Literary Romance (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 6:46:53 PM
As Bob would say, "Turn the page."
Working Through College (Poetry) - 1/31/2006 8:58:12 AM
One helluva write...with killer imagery Kevin!!
Love Tinka
Working Through College (Poetry) - 1/30/2006 4:08:18 PM
Hell of a trip you took me on here, Kevin S. Hart. Didn't quite know whether to laugh or cry or cuss, finally just settled back for the ride. Reminds me of one I wrote . . . Prodigal Father.
Lori (Poetry) - 1/25/2006 4:21:35 PM
touching read
Lori (Poetry) - 1/25/2006 12:19:30 PM
Absolutely beautiful!!
Love Tinka
Lori (Poetry) - 1/25/2006 4:50:42 AM
You are very emotional-charged and is evident in this poem. This poem is heartfelt and well-expressed of your love and pain. I think this is well-done.
Lucky Star Sandie May Angel :o)
Lori (Poetry) - 1/24/2006 9:37:29 PM
elt this and i would not change something that comes from the heart. There is nothing like expressions from the heart and impressions go no where. This is marvelous to me so with that said God bless.
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 8:59:59 PM
You've penned some great lines here; I especially like the coffee similie and the Little Boy Blue/Little Red Riding Hood analogy. I found myself nodding the whole way through... Whew, I connect. Good work, Kevin.
Tami
Ship That Never Came In (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 4:56:38 PM
a well crafted allegory of a man who is alway being tossed about by life's turmoil ...
Stutters along
a battered sheet in the wind
Eyesore, heartache, drunken liar…
he believes is his destination
powerful image
Ordinary Man (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 12:38:33 PM
Just have to love it!!
Love Tinka
Ship That Never Came In (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 10:52:46 AM
Funny how I clicked on this. I didn't think you were actually going to repost! (smile!) But I can't take credit for anything my dear Brother. It's the tried and true networking of being parts of various poetry groups, seminars, and readings both past and present that showed me how to pick a poem apart, and see it as a moving picture show. All I shared was an interpretation of what I saw in this, and YOU dear friend are the one who had the foresight to re-create something I only appreciated.
Thanks just the same for the kudos, I appreciate you and all the others here in this equal-opportunity Authors Den. (Don't you wish everybody was as accepting as we all seem to be my friend?)
blessin's
cynth'ya
Ship That Never Came In (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 9:31:14 AM
Remnants of the past and illegitimate erasure. I like this one, Kevin. When you have spare, read my Lighthouse and Starve the Ravens and 19th Century Muse posted in my den. They have the ship theme. I love your line
"Mortgaged his future
for a ship in a bottle."
Nice poem. Almost sounds like a memoir.
Sage
Ship That Never Came In (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 10:08:44 AM
I see many poems hiding in this vessel. Tells many stories. Almost series-like. blessin's Bro. Kevin,
cynth'ya
Ship That Never Came In (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 9:41:53 AM
Oh mine just sank...on this Friday 13,....hubby lost his job...grrrrr!!
Thanks for this very fine offering
Ship That Never Came In (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 3:32:42 AM
Man, we seem to be on the same page today, I posted a poem eerily similar. Good.
Ship That Never Came In (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 3:59:45 PM
Sad, isn't it how those in the bottle can't seem to see beyond the fog. Even a two by four on the back of the head doesn't help.
Good writing.
Elizabeth
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 1/11/2006 9:34:33 AM
Such is life....keep on keeping on!!
Love Tinka
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 1/11/2006 7:13:46 AM
Yes, I'd say this is a wake up call, alright. No need crying over spilt milk. Mop it up and poor yourself another glass. I know its easier said than done - but trying makes one feel a whole lot better. Great remainder!
God bless, Kevin!
Sandie.
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 1/11/2006 3:48:51 AM
been there done that..now you need to say EHOUGH..and start living..YOU gotta do it ..no one can do it FOR you..OK
Great piece..a wake-up call to many in the same scenario..
Vesna
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 1/10/2006 4:07:16 PM
You have crafted some great lines. I especially like the image of the bitter coffee chasing away a wasted night.
Karina At Eighteen (Poetry) - 1/10/2006 3:48:27 PM
You make the reader sift hard for the meaning, whether it is intentional or just lack for descriptive sapphic words. The giveaway that this is a sapphic poem is first this line, "Artificial progression into a woman’s world" and this line "Attractive opposites, polarity reversed." In any case, I love this poem, because it has a dynamic sapphic thrust to it, why I suppose you repeated a few lines. Nice meeting Karina At Eighteen, Kevin.
Sage
Carefree Castles (Poetry) - 1/10/2006 3:40:20 PM
And the beat goes on. Sometimes it doesn't seem worth it, but when you think of not waking up in the morning, the troubles somehow don't seem all that bad. Snap out of it, if you can.
On A Tear (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 12:42:01 PM
But, Jesus, God, think of the poetry
This state, what it creates
been there done that..and yes the creativity explodes after the implosion subsides..
saved this one..
good work K
Vesna:)
Mistaken Prophets (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 12:39:41 PM
Sounds like Iraq..the description fits..both spiritual and secular..interesting..you'd be very interesting to chat with..
exceptional piece..
Vesna :)
Ordinary Man (Poetry) - 1/3/2006 4:53:14 AM
The aura in which you deliver this one is excellent.
Ordinary Man (Poetry) - 12/31/2005 4:11:50 PM
"...Rumrunner fever in an old Hill Country bar,
Nachos and beer will get you pretty far
At the place by the river, everyone’s a star..."
Aha! I remember that place by the river in the Hill Country! Down the road a piece from where I used to live. Thanks for the memories.
Whistle Stop (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 10:03:33 AM
Thanks for sharing Kevin!!
Well written piece!!
Love Tinka
Whistle Stop (Poetry) - 12/28/2005 2:58:39 PM
Sad refrain heard all over the country, mainly the west though. Progress. Do away with the old and made something new to take you back there. Progress. (&$%$.$()&#!.
On A Tear (Poetry) - 12/28/2005 11:47:34 AM
very powerful poetry and thought provoking moments.
Please, señorita (Poetry) - 12/28/2005 9:52:23 AM
I have to agree very lyrical and well written I enjoyed the read.
Mistaken Prophets (Poetry) - 12/20/2005 9:39:12 AM
Well written Kevin....I think I know the meaning of this!!
Never to trust another smiling at you...it could be the devil himself!!
Love Tinka
Mistaken Prophets (Poetry) - 12/19/2005 1:33:14 PM
Mistaken prophets exclaim zealotry
Excuses conduct not prohibited
Permits everything that is alluded
Listen close; it is time to realize that
Well, you completely lost me with this poem and especially the ending. I liked the way you said it, but damned if I know what you said.
Karina At Eighteen (Poetry) - 12/17/2005 5:43:33 AM
SHe did made and everlasting impression on you my friend!!
She must be you one stunning lady!!
Thanks for sharing...!!
I like the way you created this masterpiece!!
Love Tinka
Last Week's Meeting at the Editor's Office (Poetry) - 12/17/2005 5:18:40 AM
"I’ll leave before my manners are clouded by judgment"
I can relate to the feeling you penned here!!
Well done!!
Love Tinka
Karina At Eighteen (Poetry) - 12/17/2005 3:45:40 AM
Have not the slightest idea what "form" this poem is, if, indeed it IS a classic form. Matters not to me anyway, it is the poem that matters and this poem matters. The repeating of certain lines within the structure of it is fasinating and eerily spellbinding. Oh, I almost forgot. I liked it.
Karina At Eighteen (Poetry) - 12/16/2005 6:14:29 PM
She was obviously breathtaking and made an everlasting impression which has been immortalized in your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift, Kevin. Love and peace.
Regis
Last Week's Meeting at the Editor's Office (Poetry) - 12/16/2005 4:19:47 PM
If you don't rhyme,
I don't have the time.
You catch my drift,
Or are you deaf. (or is that deef? Maybe daef?) Forgitaboutit.
Funny.
Please, señorita (Poetry) - 12/16/2005 2:53:45 AM
Enjoyed this wonderful and most lyrical piece...!!
Love Tinka
Please, señorita (Poetry) - 12/15/2005 4:07:31 PM
VERY intense and very bohemian in nature, at least to me, even could be called modern-day beat. Anyway, it impressed me because I have been that guy in the phone booth. Wonder where all the phone booths have gone to? Great study in abject failure and frustration as he tries what may be his very last chance to connect with anything resembling normalacy.
On A Tear (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 4:27:33 AM
Great poetry....well done!!
Love Tinka
Drinking Alone (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 4:22:50 AM
Make it a double...well written Kevin!!
Love Tinka
On A Tear (Poetry) - 12/10/2005 5:09:52 PM
Kevin~~very cool poem~~rock-on~~
~~martin~`
Cinnamon Moon (Sonnet XIV) (Poetry) - 12/10/2005 1:56:02 PM
Quite a hodgepodge of memories stand out within this poem, sonnet, if you will. You are very good at making words dance to your quill. Nice.
Sweet Olive (Poetry) - 12/10/2005 11:29:52 AM
I weep at the untimely death (murder) of trees, Kevin. Timely words in your verses. Thank you. Love and peace.
Regis
Rock And Roll Poet (Poetry) - 12/1/2005 10:50:48 AM
I wanna be a household name!!! This was such a funny, upbeat poem with a powerful underlying message. You are indeed
"A Rock-And-Roll-Poet".
Karen
Sweet Olive (Poetry) - 12/1/2005 10:48:10 AM
What beautiful words and imagery are displayed here. You are definitely a master poet.
Karen
Sweet Olive (Poetry) - 11/23/2005 11:01:43 AM
Hpoefully I am not mistaken...but this is a great ode to a very old tired tree....right!!
They have chopped down some very old trees alongside the main road not very far from here trying to avoid more road accidents...and the day they did it I was so very sad knowing that a legend was no more part of this beautiful part of the world!! Those trees musta been standing there at least 200 years or more!!
Par excellence Kevin!!
Love Tinka
Sweet Olive (Poetry) - 11/23/2005 10:23:55 AM
Beautifully written. Rhythmic and vivid and full of heart. This is poetry at its best.
Doggerel Days (Poetry) - 11/19/2005 6:22:40 AM
Yes! Something about the way you construct this poem that makes me think of the "Beat" poets of days past. I alway thought the beats were full of it, but I did like a lot of their poetical madness. I like this one to, and it is NOT madness, Tinka. '62 Mets. Oh boy. I was living in Flushing in those days, five minutes foor Shea Stadium.
Doggerel Days (Poetry) - 11/18/2005 12:32:19 AM
Obvious madness well expressed.....lol!!
Well done Kevin...sorry had to smile reading that line!!
Stay cool and write right on!!
Love Tinka
Poor Poet's Koan (Poetry) - 11/11/2005 12:26:49 AM
Though provoking write!!
Love Tinka
Poor Poet's Koan (Poetry) - 11/10/2005 8:19:30 PM
And if your hand is empty can it be heard to clap without the use of its opposite...? Ed
Dead Morning (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 1:38:45 AM
Outstanding scary offering!!
Thanks for sharing...rather late than never....right??
Love Tinka
Dead Morning (Poetry) - 11/8/2005 5:26:37 PM
Ooooooooohhhhhhh! This is dark and scaryyyyyy!!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
Intellectual Opium (Poetry) - 10/7/2005 7:15:49 PM
Am in total agreement with you. - And, I hope I have
deciphered it enough to make that comment. Seriously,
it's a gem of a mental challenge.
And, yes, poetry may be trusted to serious matters.
Isn't that what we're into at this moment? - Bill
Intellectual Opium (Poetry) - 10/7/2005 10:15:45 AM
Most interesting!!
Love Tinka
Intellectual Opium (Poetry) - 10/6/2005 6:35:38 PM
i think your question answers itself ...
very interesting perspective ...
Weathergirl (Poetry) - 10/5/2005 12:45:56 PM
what wonderful talents you share...thanks..
Weathergirl (Poetry) - 10/5/2005 11:10:40 AM
hehehehehe...typical man attitude...and you say you do not watch much TV....liar!!
Thanks for the brief look into your mind...lol!!
That's called "Viewing abuse" hehehehe!!
love Tinka
Affair in Corpus Christi (Poetry) - 10/3/2005 9:36:50 PM
A :) nice abstract tapestry of words even though a little more introspective me thinks :)!!
Thanks for your visit to my DEN!!
Love Tinka
Harbor House (Poetry) - 9/27/2005 7:48:29 PM
opulent imagery graces this excellent poem ...
Harbor House (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 11:24:59 PM
Beautiful write, Kevin. Wonderful imagery - well painted. Sad state of affairs. Hope you are safe.
God bless,
Sandie.
Rock And Roll Poet (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 3:52:01 PM
LOL I think there's a little bit of each of us in this one.
Tami
Harbor House (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 3:49:06 PM
Terrific expression. I LIKE your style :)
Tami
Echoes and Confessions (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 3:46:15 PM
Great images and expression here. Just wow.
Tami
Harbor House (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 11:18:50 AM
Hauntingly beautiful write. Others need to read and comment.
Safe in Southwest Houston
Ron
Big Easy (Poetry) - 9/3/2005 10:09:50 AM
you've done it --- you've captured the spirit of New Orleans. Would that we could all play the 'blues' as she does.........down, but not beaten. I can hear Satchmo playing now. Well done, Kev
Joni
Big Easy (Poetry) - 9/2/2005 9:13:56 AM
Fats Domino (missing) was my first rock idol when I was seven or eight - oops, showing my age now - so even an ocean away I feel personally touched.
Great Poem, New Orleans is a city of music and fun, it will rise again.
Big Easy (Poetry) - 9/1/2005 2:50:26 PM
Thanks for this poem.
Howl At The Moon (Poetry) - 8/25/2005 3:28:19 PM
LOVE it, Kev. nice form and flow, and a really fun write. Well done.
Heavy Traffic (Poetry) - 8/25/2005 3:26:18 PM
great writing, Kev, and what a unique way of describing the situation. Go to the head of the class.
Bees (Poetry) - 8/22/2005 1:32:32 PM
Oh how much I loved this, beautifully written, and lovely to read this morning!
Reindeer
Bees (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 10:20:22 AM
lol- that last line made me laugh- you are right, the bees are busy for many reasons, and their sting can sometimes heal people, go figure!
Bees (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 2:45:40 AM
This poem buzzes! A fantastic descriptive write with a lovely little sting in the tail. Great work!
Chanti
Bees (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 10:42:34 PM
Oh the bees they DO be buzzin' in places where we gather. . . like roses and thorns, even metaphorically, bees must BE for us to enjoy the honey in our lives.
All things have purpose, your poem says this very distinctly.
blessin's Kevin,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Bees (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 7:02:06 PM
Adorable write about the life of bees. R
Thirty Four Lines (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 5:28:43 PM
I know nothing of style or grace or proper format when writing-
none the less this was a real nice piece of work
much enjoyed
Last Call (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 1:49:30 PM
Poignant piece, very descriptive.
Last Call (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 1:23:01 PM
i have seen a few last calls in my time...good poem
Beef Stew (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 3:55:11 AM
deliciously done
Beef Stew (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 6:14:06 PM
Recipe for a poem?
Ron
Beef Stew (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 4:05:38 PM
what a wonderful recipe for life...put the ingredients together, invite in the world, and see what simmers in the pot...you wrote a magical poem here kevin
Beef Stew (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 3:46:53 PM
Intriguing write. We've got to wonder about those busy friends and the going overboard, faded pictures and loneliness and what's really needed to fill us up. Now I'm hungry. :-)
Morning Pleasure (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 8:38:24 AM
Well done, Kevin....I should write one on a woman's shave(:!
Morning Pleasure (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 11:56:27 AM
Of the simplest things are cut a poem.
Morning Pleasure (Poetry) - 6/30/2005 3:55:18 PM
close shave's can be such a bitch...nice one Kev
Paul;-)
Howl At The Moon (Poetry) - 6/29/2005 4:42:47 AM
oh what fun! love to howl at a full moon myself...
Howl At The Moon (Poetry) - 6/28/2005 8:04:31 PM
excellent play fo words ...
Howl At The Moon (Poetry) - 6/28/2005 6:15:32 PM
It almost can be sung out like a song. Well-done!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Howl At The Moon (Poetry) - 6/28/2005 3:43:57 PM
good stuff/
clever, intellegen words and thoughts well written
good write
john+
Howl At The Moon (Poetry) - 6/28/2005 3:21:30 PM
Cleverly written. R
Stabat Mater (Poetry) - 5/26/2005 8:02:36 AM
well done
Jack Kerouac and Me (Poetry) - 5/26/2005 5:33:34 AM
Kevin, how succinctly you've captured the torment, the mania, the grief, the fear, the heartrending beauty of being a literary artist. No doubt Kerouac would have enjoyed you as a travel companion; indeed, you are one.
Slow Road (Poetry) - 5/22/2005 5:33:24 PM
the poetry highway curves and climbs depending on how well we accelerate upon it as we seek its destination ...
intriguing imagery ...
Slow Road (Poetry) - 5/21/2005 9:48:28 PM
Some very interesting images. Enjoyed.
Slow Road (Poetry) - 5/21/2005 8:37:48 PM
Wow..just outstanding, I love your thoughts here, excellently expressed,
Reindeer
Slow Road (Poetry) - 5/21/2005 6:17:50 PM
A poet is an expressionist.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Shopping (Poetry) - 5/7/2005 2:28:53 AM
Shopping for more than groceries, I see.
M.Rose
Shopping (Poetry) - 5/7/2005 1:26:19 AM
Very creative. Enjoyed.
Shopping (Poetry) - 5/6/2005 8:57:31 PM
What a slow, delightful tease! Love the double innuendo. Delicious...
Shopping (Poetry) - 5/6/2005 8:50:42 PM
Darlin'...where DO you shop for groceries. I need to pay more attention over the bananas.
Passionate...
Elizabeth
One Way Lover (Poetry) - 4/10/2005 4:45:25 PM
a wonderful heartfelt plea ...
One Way Lover (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 12:45:45 PM
Good luck, Kevin! Great title, good lyrics, I can hear the hook now!
One Way Lover (Poetry) - 4/6/2005 4:57:27 AM
These are great song lyrics, Kevin!
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
One Way Lover (Poetry) - 4/6/2005 4:47:39 AM
well done
Merlot (Poetry) - 3/26/2005 9:10:56 AM
i agree with JudeAce
enjoy in moderation the journey
really nice writing here
Merlot (Poetry) - 3/23/2005 2:59:02 AM
An inpirational buzz...why not?
M.Rose
Merlot (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 6:43:18 PM
the fruit of the vine can keep us aligned, in moderation ...
sobering imagery ...
Merlot (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 11:03:30 AM
i loved this...i quit drinking a few years ago (a millenium) but i still miss that feeling that came with just the perfect buzz
Merlot (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:30:20 AM
Now thats the spirit! I come from a winery family, so this rests easy on the palatte. Great stuff, Kevin...
Road (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:18:55 AM
Masterfully written. If we could look a little closer, we could see their shadows walking...
Road (Poetry) - 3/17/2005 5:08:08 AM
This one puts the old gray matter to work. Very good imagery. Excellent, actually.
Road (Poetry) - 3/16/2005 1:59:21 PM
this is so well written that it shocked me, coming with such a simple title, i was so pleasantly surprised
Road (Poetry) - 3/16/2005 8:54:04 AM
WoW! Kevin! This is awesome! (And I don't hand out compliments mildly.) I especially like the parallel in your form that echos the metaphor of journey. Also, the reiteration of your list and your correction of road to path shows a new maturity in your work. Bravo!!
Road (Poetry) - 3/16/2005 7:11:32 AM
enjoyed the read
ftp.alt.punk.archives (Poetry) - 2/9/2005 1:58:18 PM
Okay I will reread this but I think that I understand what you are saying. Each generation has its own code.
Where Did It Go? (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 2:59:55 PM
damn right!!!!!
excellent piece one for the boards!!!
take care
Where Did It Go? (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 7:50:22 PM
The question of fairness in the last stanza sums up the piece. No one has the right to judge another, but few things, if any, are fair.
Where Did It Go? (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 6:19:14 PM
I agree that there is none that should judge but they do without realizing what it does.
Where Did It Go? (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 5:22:57 PM
No one has the right to judge another. Good write.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 3:41:02 AM
yep, lyrical & cynical ...
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 10:45:43 AM
This one has some advice that should be heeded.
Lachrymae (Poetry) - 1/12/2005 2:10:51 PM
justin,
thank you, sir, first of all, for your service.
second, thank you for penning this magnificent tribute to our fighting men and women, and to those who served.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. USAF, 1983-85 (medic)
Lachrymae (Poetry) - 1/12/2005 4:13:22 AM
Excellent. Our troops deserve all we have. Where I'm concerned they will get it without hesitation.
Thank You, for your words and your service.
Lisa
Lachrymae (Poetry) - 1/11/2005 7:16:10 PM
Yes this is well written and I am sending you a hug for a great write.
Lachrymae (Poetry) - 1/11/2005 6:06:31 PM
This is superbly written! I will always give the military a pat on the back, they are deserving of much more!Thank you for your prior service!...Eileen
