The Foiling of Gorsfeld (Short Story) - 11/2/2013 6:52:27 AM
I don't read this genre… and rarely watch the movies. However, your story is very well written and true to the form. While the story, itself, is a very normal story of normal human existence, especially when a wealthy unwanted suitor keeps trying to press his indisputable power on some poor young lady who wants nothing to do with him. Disguising it as an elfin story creates an allegory.
I didn't miss the forbidden sexual alliance at the end. I did the same in my novel Alone?
Ron
Cavern Between Worlds (Short Story) - 11/1/2013 8:07:20 AM
very enjoyable and well penned
budd
