Does GOD Cry? (Poetry) - 7/4/2014 11:14:49 AM
I will always wonder. Your poem is outstanding!
KathyJ Parenteau
The Heart of a Child (Poetry) - 3/9/2014 9:44:58 AM
It's relatively easy to bring a child to adulthood. Makes one wonder why so many don't.
Ron
The Heart of a Child (Poetry) - 3/8/2014 5:08:45 PM
So true of what you've said. A child's love is so true, innocent, and trusting as well. They love us unconditionally, and we must return their love by our utmost love and caring for their feelings are so fragile.
Sandie
In Ethan's Eyes (Poetry) - 3/8/2014 12:10:26 PM
I like it when a kid isn't conditioned by his parents to be afraid of everything.
By the way, squirrels, trees, dogs, cats and fishes, along with bumblebees have no apostrophes!
Ron
In Ethan's Eyes (Poetry) - 3/8/2014 4:56:13 AM
Absolutely beautiful!
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 3/7/2014 5:36:57 PM
Profound and concise in very pithy substance, excellently expressing what many if us went through in this world. Brilliant last line.
In Ethan's Eyes (Poetry) - 3/7/2014 5:26:08 PM
Delightful and a very heart-touching write, a real blessing to read as you put the the LORD in it, birthing profound soul inspiration. Amen! Bravo!
In Ethan's Eyes (Poetry) - 3/7/2014 11:43:12 AM
Your grandson is so sweet and adorable!!! And so is this poem. I enjoyed!!!
Sandie
In Ethan's Eyes (Poetry) - 3/7/2014 10:33:11 AM
wouldn't it be great to still the the world in their eyes
budd
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 2/27/2014 9:42:35 PM
I can see how that could happen. Pondering, wondering, questioning life, afterlife, the here and now. Spirituality or none. It's all worth writing about. My thoughts. Love it.
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 2/27/2014 4:35:23 PM
to bad it wasn't made of clay ... that would work for me ..,
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 2/27/2014 4:14:25 PM
yes, good luck with trying to arrange the external world - seems to have a way of it's own. good capture here of that experience
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 2/27/2014 1:01:40 PM
as so many of us have
budd
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 2/27/2014 12:43:16 PM
I like the way this flows together.
enjoyed
I Often Ponder (Poetry) - 2/27/2014 12:40:15 PM
Happens like that every time, Steve.
when i die (2) (Poetry) - 2/22/2014 9:58:00 AM
Just as good the second time around.
Ron
when i die (2) (Poetry) - 2/21/2014 11:44:29 AM
My thoughts exactly.
Michael D.
I Like To Play With Words (Poetry) - 2/7/2014 7:58:25 AM
I feel the same way. And your wordplay is some of the best. I find myself rocking and rolling with this piece, ready to burst into song.
Ron
Three Geese & The Moon (Poetry) - 2/3/2014 12:38:01 PM
Just don't go looking at the moon when you're three geese to the wind. ;-)
Ron
Three Geese & The Moon (Poetry) - 2/3/2014 9:41:19 AM
nd thank you for all you write and share
budd
colors on white (Poetry) - 2/1/2014 12:35:03 PM
Ahhh . . . Red = the hot romance in the beginning. Yellow = the subtle cooling of the hot fires. Blue = Blue.
colors on white (Poetry) - 2/1/2014 12:24:48 PM
I'm clueless and colorless, except in my dreams.
Ron
Noah & the ark (Poetry) - 1/31/2014 7:21:14 AM
Right. I read this when I was a small child in Taylor, Arkansas, Read it straight outta the Bible.
For Ella (Poetry) - 1/29/2014 3:43:02 PM
everyone needs a friend like this
budd
For Ella (Poetry) - 1/29/2014 2:56:36 PM
I hope she gets to read this.
For Ella (Poetry) - 1/29/2014 1:41:56 PM
Sounds like a Leonard Cohen song.
Michael D.
you've earned your wings (Poetry) - 1/28/2014 5:12:25 AM
Very beautifully rendered, Steve. You have given your friend a lovely and grand tribute. She is smiling.
