Hidden Motive (Short Story) - 3/9/2014 6:34:55 AM
A great idea that is flawed in so many ways because of the improbability of events. I would suggest that you join a writing group and have others work with you to improve the story because it needs serious editing to make it more realistic and believable.
Continue to come up with ideas like this, make sure you work with others to improve the work and make it great.
Ron
The Opposite of Pleasure (Poetry) - 3/10/2014 2:25:15 PM
a distraction that has its own specific level of tolerance ...
The Opposite of Pleasure (Poetry) - 3/8/2014 1:53:09 PM
While I was growing through stages of life, I felt no pain. I still don't. Only joy for being alive and having the privilege of living.
Ron
