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Recent Reviews for Free Spirit


Gratitude (Article) - 6/17/2014 5:10:11 AM
thought provoking article,

Titiksha (Poetry) - 5/24/2020 9:51:20 AM
I sense the loss of a love that was unrequited. We all make mistakes. It's learning from them that makes us better. Ron

Peaceful Mind (Poetry) - 6/21/2014 3:09:54 AM
enjoyed the read

Precious Jewels (Poetry) - 6/21/2014 3:09:07 AM
well said

Shringar Part 4 (Poetry) - 6/21/2014 3:08:46 AM
thought provoking

The L(o)ast Dream (Poetry) - 6/21/2014 3:08:05 AM
well done

Death of a Girl Child (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:14:11 AM
poignant, thought provoking read

Song of an Eagle (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:13:22 AM
good one

Temptations (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:12:39 AM
well done

The Elixir in the Cistern (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:12:11 AM
I like this

The Irony (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:11:35 AM
good one

The Power (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:11:11 AM
well done

Miss you my Valentine (Poetry) - 6/14/2014 10:33:20 AM
Nicely done. I could feel your heartfelt longing... write on!

Mistress of Solitude (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 3:00:58 PM
Beautiful!

Temptations (Poetry) - 6/11/2014 12:48:55 PM
I just had the perfect mango and understand this poem on several levels :) Write on! Chris

Its a Day's Life (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:38:24 AM
well done

His Last Words (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:38:02 AM
good one

Metaphor (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:37:29 AM
nice one

Nature's Will (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:37:07 AM
thought provoking read

Splash! (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:36:49 AM
I like this

Golden Wishes (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:36:36 AM
nice one

Devil's Workshop (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 9:36:20 AM
well said

Indian Flag (Poetry) - 5/28/2014 3:10:12 PM
well said

Her Voice (Poetry) - 5/28/2014 3:09:31 PM
filled with caring

Until your Time comes (Poetry) - 5/28/2014 3:08:36 PM
thought provoking read

Waiting!!! (Poetry) - 5/28/2014 3:07:44 PM
touching read

Work Hard My Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2014 3:06:38 PM
GOOD one

Flower (Poetry) - 5/24/2014 4:51:48 PM
nice one

Mistress of Solitude (Poetry) - 5/24/2014 4:51:15 PM
well done

Miss you my Valentine (Poetry) - 5/24/2014 4:50:42 PM
poignant read

As I Wait (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 3:21:27 PM
Poetry is ultimately music and you have music here. Beautifully done.

Shringar Part 4 (Poetry) - 4/26/2014 11:22:42 AM
Creates a lot of disconnected images. Ron

Age of Men (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 9:15:47 AM
If we lose sight from whence we came, we could never go back. Ron

Peaceful Mind (Poetry) - 4/14/2014 4:45:41 PM
...keep in mind that...like it or not...despite your doubts, moods and fears...you are strong! have a faith...and have a unique contribution to make... HAPPY EASTER AKSHAY!

Peaceful Mind (Poetry) - 4/14/2014 7:14:31 AM
It's good to have a peaceful mind, especially when the world is crumbling all about you. By back highlighting the text with that dark green makes it very difficult to read. Ron

The Power (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 12:05:54 PM
Much wisdom throughout this poetic piece. Well done Akshay!

The Power (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 11:52:10 AM
When it comes to memory. Some see life as half-full and seek to gain the other half, while some see life as half empty and try to get all they can from others. Ron

The Power (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 8:56:56 AM
I enjoyed going through each line. The structure of words is savory to the palates of the mind.

The Power (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 6:28:08 AM
Nice poem!! Sandie

Golden Wishes (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 5:35:05 AM
your niece is lucky to have you as her uncle. thanks for sharing.

Devil's Workshop (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 5:27:27 AM
wow! this is your first poem ever written? you are very talented. i loved reading your piece. welcome to the den. :)

Devil's Workshop (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 3:17:55 AM
I agree, there are many young people who are bullies, like in schools, and in public places. However, we should not forget those ones who are old enough to be others grandfathers and yet behaving like bullies towards young people, or even sexually molest the young ones. Most often these old folkies are overlooked by the public because they lived a long life and know how to cover their devilish deeds and present to the public in a nice persona so everyone would think they are nice people....until their deeds are discovered. There are a lot of nice young people who are being bulied by such old folkies because people pay respect to the old people but less to the youngs. When young people cries for help they are most often ignored and even publicly humiliated. That is why there are so many young people fall victims to the old folkies. Don't let age of a person fools you. Just because a person is old does not mean he/she is a good person. Don't get me wrong, I have a whole lot of respect for old people, because I, myself, was raised by my grandparents from my birth 'til about 7 years old, so I know the difference between good and kind old folkies and the ones whose minds are twisted. The twisted minds ones have never grown out of their bullying behavior since teenage years. We should all give credits for younger folks because they know kindness when they can feel true kindness. Sandie

Golden Wishes (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 3:06:17 AM
You are welcome Akshay to AD. Sweet your words in this poem , sweet wishes from the heart.JK