I am a Universe of secrets! (Short Story) - 11/4/2017 1:17:30 AM
I'm thinking you've "ended" it where you want to, and this guy is up for more than a shave.
I am a Universe of secrets! (Short Story) - 11/3/2017 7:36:47 AM
That's quite an introduction for a guy getting ready to shave! ;-)
You are mastering the macabre with tales like this. Unfortunately, you leave the gory details up to the readers' imagination at the end. Quite frankly I'm not sure what is supposed to happen next, except that either the man's angel or his devil will win this one.
Ron
I am a Universe of secrets! (Short Story) - 11/3/2017 4:04:28 AM
an interesting start to what feels like a fine macabre tale, keep on penning it
Flowers for Caroline (Short Story) - 10/17/2017 2:56:06 AM
very enjoyable leaving the reader with a question they wish answered
Flowers for Caroline (Short Story) - 10/14/2017 7:16:40 AM
Indeed, who? Your story leaves more questions than answers. It doesn't end with a twist and doesn't really end.
I would suggest the word, danced, rather than scattered.
Ron
Raphael and the Cosmic Kickers - the new soul of rock! (Short Story) - 10/6/2017 6:08:27 AM
I'm not up on current rock music, so I'm not sure if Rafael was talking about Guns N' Roses or some other band. While I'm glad they're not into drugs and are really interested in the environment and saving us and the planet, the rest of the interview seem to be rather chitchat of little importance while may be of great importance to their fans.
I believe this might be better placed as an article.
Ron
Because I want to.... (Short Story) - 9/9/2017 8:40:09 AM
This article comes from a person who is sensitive to the insensitive world around her. Fortunately, social media that sometimes spreads falsehoods certainly has heated up social conscience about practices that certain cultures have and continue to have, including our own.
It certainly is time that we put aside ritualistic killing and eating of certain animals that is becoming an endangerment to them. We also have to put an end to abusive treatment of animals for our own pleasure. And worst of all, the mistaken belief that organs from certain animals have medicinal or potency powers… Driving them into extinction.
Articles like yours and a general public outcry is beginning to change practices worldwide so that every animal can live and let live.
Ron
A little bit of dust... (Short Story) - 9/2/2017 1:36:15 AM
While I don't believe in fairies, I do appreciate the subtleties of nature.
A little bit of dust... (Short Story) - 9/1/2017 8:43:48 AM
Afraid not. I certainly love the outdoors with all its creatures like butterflies and birds of great variety, but I don't have to conjure up imaginary creatures be happy in those natural places without meditation's help.
Ron
My soul yearns for Ireland. (Short Story) - 8/25/2017 5:03:21 AM
Without all that magical mythology, Ireland appears to be a rather dull, drab and sad place that has been neglected and not fully entered modern technological society.
On the other hand, when you visit, you may be disappointed by the widespread use of cell phones and other 21st-century gadgets and Internet like Facebook quickly replacing the pub as the local place of getting together for gossip.
To me, South Africa is a magical place. But then, I've never been there. ;-)
Ron
What does it mean to be free? (Article) - 9/16/2017 8:46:36 AM
In the experimental reality show, Naked and Afraid, two people, a man and a woman are dropped naked in a usually tropical location like Adam and Eve for 21 days… Generally the time it takes for one to starve without food. Most participants find their skills to be totally inadequate for their circumstances and find little food, shelter or even clean water during their ordeal. It is a humbling experience, but shows that, as a people, we must work together to survive, eat and drink every day. A very sobering experience.
Ron
What does it mean to be free? (Article) - 9/15/2017 9:58:49 PM
Very true! In very simple terms every human being needs to have right over her/his time and space. Slowly this is eroding. Governance was meant to focus and take care of issues beyond individual time and space and not individual time and space, but the world over it has not happened. Truly sad and frightening Are we ever going to be free?
