The Moment and You (Poetry) - 2/2/2017 8:54:14 AM
What an exceptional poem! Still, it seems to lack that final read where tiny tweaks could transform it into a classic. Start with "This" Moment and You. Perhaps the "twilight" of my darkness. "Where" my imprisoned heart... The actual words should be yours.
It reads well.
The Moment and You (Poetry) - 1/28/2017 10:28:21 AM
this highly erotic piece I have greatly enjoyed to read thru because of its competently 3D presentation. Cheers, alex
The Moment and You (Poetry) - 1/27/2017 7:45:36 AM
A powerful expression of passion rekindled. I certainly hope that this time intuition is right.
Ron
The Moment and You (Poetry) - 1/27/2017 7:26:20 AM
Interesting write. I'm not sure I understood it, but interesting none the the less.
In the Knowing (Poetry) - 1/1/2017 11:34:27 AM
Exquisitely expressed how love emanates from the individual and not as a result of the pairing of two. That kind of love can only happen out of love for oneself, first.
Ron
In the Knowing (Poetry) - 12/31/2016 11:23:11 AM
well done!!
may 2017 be the best yet for you and your family
In the Knowing (Poetry) - 12/31/2016 11:19:05 AM
Beautiful. Love is like a fire burning, but when the flames die down, the leftover embers burn the hottest.
Michael D.
In the Knowing (Poetry) - 12/31/2016 7:39:10 AM
yes, this piece of poetry is just 90-60-90 or so in both respects. . . Cheers, alex
In the Knowing (Poetry) - 12/30/2016 5:03:57 PM
This is very good. Emotional, but with a purpose. Steadfast about what you want and believe. I liked this poem greatly!
Wrong Turn (Poetry) - 4/9/2016 10:57:55 PM
Such a powerful poem! You pulled me in and I felt every clutch, grasp, and tear. Welcome to the Den, Tina. Your star is on the rise.
Wrong Turn (Poetry) - 4/9/2016 2:19:35 PM
strong words here
Season's Change (Poetry) - 4/9/2016 10:43:19 AM
Beautifully rendered, my new found friend, and welcome to Authors Den. There is a quite not so subtle hint at reincarnation if I am not mistaken. Lovely poetry! Loved the photo . . .
