art. (Poetry) - 8/18/2020 3:41:25 AM
I enjoy your writing
never stop writing!
m
nothing more. (Poetry) - 8/18/2020 3:40:43 AM
well said
never stop writing!
m
deep breaths. (Poetry) - 8/18/2020 3:39:32 AM
well done!!
never stop writing!
m
deep breaths. (Poetry) - 8/9/2020 12:10:07 PM
I love this poem, it's filled with wisdom and hope.
deep breaths. (Poetry) - 5/13/2020 2:58:13 PM
An inspiring read, this reminds me of a quote I heard recently, "Just keep swimming". Yes, it's from the movie Find Dory, but I feel like it still applies. Sometimes we don't know where we are heading, but this doesn't necessarily mean we are headed down the wrong or incorrect path. Keep aspiring for greatness!
deep breaths. (Poetry) - 5/6/2020 8:45:32 AM
A great metaphor for taking in the good and expelling the bad. A lesson for everyone to take to heart.
Ron
deep breaths. (Poetry) - 5/5/2020 2:10:56 PM
Breathe in.
Breathe out.
Those deep breaths
are what life's about.
Just breathe.
apathy takes me. (Poetry) - 3/28/2020 10:22:12 AM
Perhaps a cry for help. With all the opportunity there is, there is little time for apathy in a changing world.
Ron
apathy takes me. (Poetry) - 3/28/2020 8:46:56 AM
An ambiguous ending to an ambiguous tale.
Captured well. Peace to you, dear lady.
apathy takes me. (Poetry) - 3/27/2020 8:45:41 AM
Yes indeed, a life caught in the flame, may it forever burn. Interesting poem.
nothing more. (Poetry) - 3/8/2020 5:59:41 PM
Inspiring...
ode to growth. (Poetry) - 3/8/2020 5:55:43 PM
Yet I wish...great piece.
long drives. (Poetry) - 3/8/2020 5:54:50 PM
So simply written yet the words say so much. I love your work.
long drives. (Poetry) - 3/7/2020 9:30:43 AM
A relaxing long drive does wonders for one's mental outlook....
long drives. (Poetry) - 2/28/2020 2:11:45 PM
I think a good long drive is far better than slitting one's wrist while sitting somewhere alone.
Ron
long drives. (Poetry) - 2/25/2020 9:12:31 AM
Drive on, and drive safe.
nothing more. (Poetry) - 2/22/2020 1:25:21 PM
Your gratitude comes shining through for having made it this far. May you continue to have beauty, peace and calm.
Ron
ode to growth. (Poetry) - 2/18/2020 9:25:36 AM
Without the "slings and arrows of outrageous fortune," we wouldn't have the experience that is required to mature. Briefly and poetically stated, you have shown us.
Ron
nothing more. (Poetry) - 2/18/2020 7:52:48 AM
We have to be happy and like ourselves before we can truly love someone else. I've told my kids and G-kids, the best advice I can give them is to live on your own, and by yourself for awhile. It's the best way that I know, as to how to get to know who you really are. Once you know yourself, and like who you are, the rest comes a little easier.
ode to growth. (Poetry) - 2/16/2020 9:20:04 AM
You got that right. You can't ignore or wish away those things that hurt us, physically or emotionally. We have to deal with them as best we can, and the scars are a reminder of what was, and that we survived to be here now, and can shine a light on the darkness.
living in a dream. (Poetry) - 2/11/2020 9:20:13 AM
Filled with delightful thought. But there is an underlying question of whether or not it is real.
Ron
indecisive. (Poetry) - 2/6/2020 9:10:47 AM
Writing can be cathartic, and good therapy. It can be writing for wellness, so keep on writing, and stay positive.
indecisive. (Poetry) - 2/6/2020 2:31:26 AM
A realistic poem. We all have scars. Some we like to write about, but some we don't.
Sandie
that afternoon. (Poetry) - 2/4/2020 12:02:38 PM
A unique way of befriending something that may not be healthful in the long run where the light is the best way to go, always.
Ron
that afternoon. (Poetry) - 2/4/2020 8:10:53 AM
You got that right. We do need darkness to appreciate the light. Glad you made it back from that dark abyss.
art. (Poetry) - 1/26/2020 9:14:09 AM
This poem begs an image. So I wonder if you could come up with an appropriate one and post it? Your poem also seems to be chiding someone for rushing their art. But I don't think that the muse when it appears allows one to stop and consider… Instead, there is a compelling thrust of creativity that must be let out or lost. Better to have created with it than to have it lost forever. I believe that some of the greatest art was made from momentary surges of energy that could not be stopped by anyone asking for restraint.
Ron
art. (Poetry) - 1/25/2020 8:42:55 AM
We're all a blank canvas when we're born, and I think I've been repainted more times than I can remember. But still, I'm ready for a new coat of paint. It covers up a multitude of sins.
music melts. (Poetry) - 1/17/2020 10:08:51 AM
Feelings nicely expressed.
Ron
music melts. (Poetry) - 1/11/2020 6:33:34 PM
Very sweet declaration. Enjoyed.
Sandie
blurry vision. (Poetry) - 1/10/2020 6:47:52 PM
Sad and thought provoking poetic thoughts! We just had our Bible study this morning and the topic was "Growing in the Valley" or in other words trusting the Lord during the down swings of life. This time of year can be very tough especially just after the Christmas season. Hope and pray your on the upswing at this time. Blessings, John Michael
it is me. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:37:48 AM
compelling read, well said
Never stop writing !
m
limitless love. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:35:50 AM
Lovely sentiment, well expressed
Never stop writing !
m
time has gone. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:32:23 AM
whatever the cause; moving on is not always easy,
Never stop writing !
m
clear skies. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:28:59 AM
umbrellas are good and not just in rain
Never stop writing !
m
the good. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:28:12 AM
Never stop writing !
m
being alone. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:27:10 AM
being comfortable in our own skin is the beginning of healing, I have found
Never stop writing !
m
feel it. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:25:53 AM
powerful, evocative words
Never stop writing !
m
pressure. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:24:49 AM
Never stop writing !
m
old friend. (Poetry) - 1/2/2020 1:23:27 AM
I enjoyed reading your post!!
more, please
Never stop writing !
m
old friend. (Poetry) - 12/25/2019 9:53:19 AM
Old songs certainly do bring back memories. Glad I have so many.
Ron
pressure. (Poetry) - 12/19/2019 11:48:43 AM
We all can relate to stress. But the last two lines, referring to slashing one's wrists, or drowning underwater, are indeed, distressing.
Ron
pressure. (Poetry) - 12/16/2019 9:35:12 PM
Sounds ominous. Pressure we all bear in different ways. Interesting poem.
feel it. (Poetry) - 12/16/2019 8:51:22 AM
If you don't feel it, you're only fooling yourself.
great smell. (Poetry) - 12/15/2019 4:54:57 PM
Rain cleanses the air the streets, the trees, the grass
it refreshes our outlook if we let it
it restores our faith if we are attuned to it
it clears our thinking when we need it
it feels great on our face when we seek clarity
it turns a kiss into magic
when it is shared with the one you love.
Does it also smell great?
Oh hell yes.
the good. (Poetry) - 12/13/2019 10:28:50 AM
As ready as I am, last night my mouth got so dry that I could hardly open it to call for assistance. I tried keeping my mouth closed and breathe just through my nose, but that has always been difficult for me. So you struck home quite literally as I sensed the distinct possibility how I will breathe my last breath. Because I physically can't anymore.
Doing good every day until that time comes. Lovely poem confirming that sentiment.
Ron
the good. (Poetry) - 12/12/2019 9:22:37 AM
We're born to die, and that's the cold hard truth. It's up to us to make the best of our time here, and be the best we can be.
clear skies. (Poetry) - 12/11/2019 10:36:48 AM
Experience is a good teacher, a good preparer for the future. Reminded me of countless times that my words were mistaken and storms of first anger, followed by regret, came and went. But one thing we must understand as writers, exposing ourselves to the Internet, is that we must have developed an umbrella for the deluges that will surely come.
Thanks for clearing the air.
Ron
clear skies. (Poetry) - 12/11/2019 9:22:07 AM
We feel pain when someone hurts us, and we should feel pain if we hurt someone, or at least feel ashamed of ourselves.
clear skies. (Poetry) - 12/11/2019 7:14:49 AM
Clear skies indeed, How they come at a price, as you so insightfully lay out in this fine poem.
it is me. (Poetry) - 12/9/2019 11:33:53 AM
If one is sidetracked by the presence of another, is certainly good to hear when that influence is gone. Thank goodness, good riddance.
Ron
it is me. (Poetry) - 12/7/2019 3:40:56 PM
I think it's important to live alone before we live with another person. We have to learn how to live with ourselves first.
time has gone. (Poetry) - 12/7/2019 7:11:54 AM
Your first five lines are really cold. The last five lines are a big improvement, but your ex will remember the first five lines. That's just my opinion. It's nothing personal. But I really miss your hands, your voice, and your nuances. ==smiles==
time has gone. (Poetry) - 12/7/2019 6:42:08 AM
I have an old friend at this very moment that is experiencing "moving on" and I am going to have her read this because she is doing well with it, but extra help, like this post, can always be good...-e-
time has gone. (Poetry) - 12/6/2019 8:59:18 AM
Sometimes,what was can never be again. And sometimes,it never was to begin with, but that's the chance we take.
limitless love. (Poetry) - 11/26/2019 11:27:20 AM
An interesting form of expression in a poem, but the idea of love spreading cannot be denied by anyone.
Ron
limitless love. (Poetry) - 11/25/2019 1:27:53 PM
Absolutely fantastic poetry! You spelled out what love is withiin your eyes, and I concur completely. Good work.
limitless love. (Poetry) - 11/25/2019 9:55:50 AM
Love needs to grow or it dies. I'm in for the long haul. Cool write.
limitless love. (Poetry) - 11/24/2019 6:35:37 PM
I like your style of poetry. It speaks volumes with few words.
The den needs more poets like you, Beth. You are a breath of
fresh air. You write like I used to write long ago when I was
single and dating. I spoke right from my heart. Today, sometimes my head gets in the way. Well done!
John Michael
limitless love. (Poetry) - 11/24/2019 3:46:02 PM
I love your optimism. Count me in for a huge slice of that pie!
Ed
great smell. (Poetry) - 11/24/2019 8:51:09 AM
A trickle of rain greats, grates, Greeks or greets your/my nose. ;-)
But since water has no color, taste or smell… Nobody knows.
I can still remember northern Wisconsin well water that always had a lot of iron in it and had a real metal smell and tang to it. Loved the taste of that water.
Ron
great smell. (Poetry) - 11/22/2019 12:26:05 PM
Yup! I was quite ready for the turning of the season, my friend.
love well. (Poetry) - 11/22/2019 2:46:06 AM
powerful read
Never Stop Writing
m
great smell. (Poetry) - 11/22/2019 2:45:22 AM
beautiful
Never Stop Writing
m
great smell. (Poetry) - 11/21/2019 9:13:54 AM
Not only is the smell of rain pleasing, I love the sound of rain.
great smell. (Poetry) - 11/20/2019 9:38:36 PM
Love this. I have alluded to "the smell of rain" in my own poetry and so feel a closeness to what you beautifully expressed here.
specter (Poetry) - 11/20/2019 10:42:54 AM
Engaging and soulful. Well done, Bethany. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis 😊👌🍁🌷💫
just something. (Poetry) - 11/20/2019 10:40:46 AM
And I feel that "something" is genuine love. A sweet poem, Bethany. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 😊🎵✏✨🙏
love well. (Poetry) - 11/20/2019 10:38:10 AM
Lovely sentiments about love and loving, Bethany. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis. 🍁😊🍂🌷
love well. (Poetry) - 11/20/2019 1:16:31 AM
Agree. But a nice bottle of chilled wine helps to put a little pzazz into the mix. Nice write. Sweet and concise.
love well. (Poetry) - 11/19/2019 9:42:36 AM
To love well, and to be loved well, that is all we really want and need.
love well. (Poetry) - 11/18/2019 2:19:21 PM
Absolutely, my friend! The last two lines says it all.
just grand. (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:27:50 PM
excellent imagery
never stop writing
m
my room is blue. (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:24:05 PM
sadness well expressed
never stop writing
m
poison & grey. (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:22:15 PM
powerful, filled with pathos
never stop writing
m
running list. (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:20:11 PM
spot on
never stop writing
m
specter (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:18:05 PM
compelling read
never stop writing
m
wind to me. (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:14:55 PM
poignant read, filled with palpable longing
never stop writing
m
just something. (Poetry) - 11/12/2019 5:12:13 PM
very nice, good imagery
never stop writing
m
just something. (Poetry) - 11/10/2019 11:38:39 AM
You certainly have something going here. Something refreshing and real. Experiences we've all had and can relate. You gave me a good feeling.
Ron
just something. (Poetry) - 11/9/2019 8:49:03 AM
And this was something that was just special.
just something. (Poetry) - 11/8/2019 2:55:36 PM
Oh Bethany. I think you're onto something. Yeah, I'm pretty certain
you are somewhere inside the motherlode where all the good parts are located. Now if you need someone to sharpen your skills on ...
running list. (Poetry) - 11/6/2019 8:10:56 AM
I've got the same kind of list. It's running long and keeps growing.
running list. (Poetry) - 11/5/2019 6:27:13 PM
Did he get the message? Oh boy!
just grand. (Poetry) - 11/2/2019 12:00:55 PM
May your road be unending, and don't worry about the trees, they'll get re-leaf come spring.
my room is blue. (Poetry) - 10/31/2019 9:35:23 AM
"Blue, blue… My world is blue when I'm without you," words of the song comes to mind as I read your poem. Most of us who have been depressed can relate. The only thing incongruent is, "I'm getting old." Hardly true. And, the cadence and rhyme is not as good as that song, but I'm struggling with writing my latest poem today. The idea is to get the reader wanting to repeat the words, and repetition, like in most songs, works well when rhyming.
Ron
my room is blue. (Poetry) - 10/31/2019 9:07:55 AM
Cuddle up in those blankets,
and stay safe and warm.
Tomorrow the sun will shine,
and rainbows will chase away the storm.
my room is blue. (Poetry) - 10/30/2019 3:05:58 PM
I have a distinct feeling that you bloomed not long after you penned this wonderful poem, my poetical friend. Perfect poetry . . .
wind to me. (Poetry) - 10/30/2019 9:23:34 AM
Reminds me of the classic song, "The Wind beneath My Wings." I hope it's just poetic expression and not a memory of a real life experience.
Ron
wind to me. (Poetry) - 10/29/2019 2:46:40 AM
Deeply emotional poetry which has uplifting dreams or so it seems.
Very talented poetic expression that is moving and heartfelt.
I could go on...
John Michael
poison & grey. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 9:41:08 PM
Metaphorically speaking, of course.
Bad pizza does it to me.
wind to me. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 9:35:18 PM
I guess you now have two volunteers. =smiles=
wind to me. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 3:59:03 PM
Wonderfully thought out and exquisitely written . . . To say that I liked this poem would be a gross understatement!
just threads. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 9:17:02 AM
A rather old sounding, almost desperate, poem from a young vibrant woman.
Ron
just threads. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 8:31:21 AM
Another succinct rendering of the willing nature of our imagination to create and learn from. Beautiful allegory. Thank you for posting.
time has passed. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 5:05:18 AM
compelling read
Never Stop Writing
m
just threads. (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 5:04:40 AM
well done, lovely expressive work
Never Stop Writing
m
just threads. (Poetry) - 10/27/2019 6:57:01 AM
Never lose hope, weave a new rope. Beautiful poetry, Bethany. You have a depth of emotion and expression.
just threads. (Poetry) - 10/27/2019 3:20:11 AM
Your depth is a shine that doesn't miss the heart dear poet Bethany, thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry today.
train tracks. (Poetry) - 10/26/2019 5:07:33 PM
I've ben there. I've done that.
I beat the system. I will never go back.
just threads. (Poetry) - 10/26/2019 4:52:34 PM
Ahhh . . . Wonderfully thought out and exquistely delivered to your fans, of which I am definately one. Love this one for sure.
time has passed. (Poetry) - 10/26/2019 4:41:20 PM
Wonderfully said, my friend.
time has passed. (Poetry) - 10/26/2019 11:43:04 AM
Your expression here is both adroit and lean, giving the reader both reality and metaphor with "time". There is as much depth in your subtext as the text, giving a duality of meaning. Bravo.
train tracks. (Poetry) - 10/25/2019 11:24:31 AM
Says a lot about what's going on in the poet's mind. Dark thoughts bring dark words. Working through to brighter times.
Ron
train tracks. (Poetry) - 10/25/2019 4:24:36 AM
congratulation for 5 month sober, not an easy feat to attain,
writing is often my life line as I travel through life
Never Stop Writing!
m
slipping down. (Poetry) - 10/25/2019 4:22:43 AM
poignant read, soul reaching imagery stirred
well done
slipping down. (Poetry) - 10/24/2019 5:08:32 AM
You have a valid point there, I'm thinking.
sea of blue. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:26:47 PM
Never stop writing
m
never want to leave. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:25:57 PM
well said
Never stop writing
m
baby blues. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:25:06 PM
filled with lovely and loving imagery
Never stop writing
m
keep driving. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:24:06 PM
powerful, filled with pathos
Never stop writing
m
lonesome slumber. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:22:42 PM
powerful, poignant read
Never stop writing
m
the peace that rests. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:21:44 PM
well said
Never stop writing
m
the peace that rests. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 4:33:41 PM
I can picture the movement throughout this very expressive piece of poetry. It's moves me in the right direction to want to write a continuation and a happy ending. Well done!
the peace that rests. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 9:06:13 AM
Certainly a wonderful way to feel as free as the wind. A youthful expression. Something that sometimes leaves us when the heavy burden of life bears down. But a remembrance of is always welcome.
Ron
sea of blue. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 1:06:48 AM
You have an interesting way of drawing upon the images and symbols of nature to inspire your work and the reader as well. Excellent.
the peace that rests. (Poetry) - 10/22/2019 1:05:49 AM
A moody, thought piece of poetry that inspires and it gets the reader thinking. Lovely work.
the peace that rests. (Poetry) - 10/21/2019 1:47:19 PM
You speak of a peace unending . . . I sincerely hope it remains within you.
sea of blue. (Poetry) - 10/20/2019 9:38:12 AM
Very philosophical. Metaphorical as well. Perhaps that is what is going on with the, "momentary pain," like being stung by the thorn of a cactus. I was confused with one line until I realized that you are writing about aisles rather than isles. Unless you really meant islands in the mirage of blue. Blue being a melancholy thought.
Ron
never want to leave. (Poetry) - 10/19/2019 11:49:57 AM
I really like the nuance of this. While I often have sat on a hilltop, particularly in autumn and thought I could discern ancient paths taken by animals first, and then by humans. It was those very paths that were widened for wagons and then, paved for the convenience of automobiles. From what I gather, you are fine with that. And do not wish to go back to an earlier time like so many others lost in nostalgia rather than facing the future.
Ron
never want to leave. (Poetry) - 10/19/2019 11:29:12 AM
You made it to where you wanted, and needed to be, so why not just stay there. I like that kind of thought . . .
baby blues. (Poetry) - 10/19/2019 10:02:53 AM
Absolutely stupendous poetry, Bethany . . . Loved every line.
baby blues. (Poetry) - 10/19/2019 9:19:35 AM
This is a powerful poem that jumps off the page with its
incredible wordsmithing. What a pleasure it would be to read
one of your longer renderings.
keep driving. (Poetry) - 10/18/2019 5:16:52 PM
We are who we idolize. Great write!
lonesome slumber. (Poetry) - 10/18/2019 9:35:39 AM
I think you have something more in mind than the ocean. We often speak of "drowning in sorrow." I believe that is what is going on. No one wants to be lonely.
Ron
lonesome slumber. (Poetry) - 10/18/2019 8:31:44 AM
An excellent poem. But it leaves me begging for more.
Welcome to the club, Bethany. I hope you enjoy your time here. I think you will fit in very well. With that smile, how could you not?
