Occasional Score (Poetry) - 1/10/2015 10:50:08 PM
Well, Ron Hall (see review of these lyrics by Ron), do not know what to tell you since the last line of the chorus, to be sung at least twice, IS in fact the "hook" line. Of course, it may be hard to notice that at first since there is no music break, or transition riff to hear.
Occasional Score (Poetry) - 1/10/2015 12:39:19 PM
Great lyrics, just needs a "hook."
Ron
