Unrequited Love (Part One) (Short Story) - 9/13/2015 11:57:11 PM
"Unrequited love" so often turns lethal. You've captured the cat-and-mouse stalking which escalates, along with the emotional upheaval.
The Practical Mind Of A Woman (Poetry) - 3/23/2015 5:54:13 AM
Beautifully written and points out the difference between the way most men and most women look at relationships. This results from the innate differences in male and female psyche that will never change. Somehow, in spite of this, young people still marry and have children, although it is often reversed these days to, have children and then marry. And then, of course, divorce because they originally married and had children for all the wrong reasons.
Regardless of the situation, guilt often follows the act, like in the last line. It would be nice if guilt and doubt didn't have to enter the picture.
Ron
Is There A Cure? (You Decide) (Poetry) - 3/22/2015 7:06:59 AM
Many have written that men and women fall in love differently. I think women commit far more to love than men, and are hurt more when it doesn't work out. That's what I get from your poem. A love so dependent that losing it is tragic.
Ron
I Have My Eye On You (Poetry) - 3/21/2015 4:41:58 PM
VERY WELL DONE... enjoyed...
I Have My Eye On You (Poetry) - 3/14/2015 7:12:03 AM
A story poem with some pizzazz. Are you always this easy? I sure hope you can read people better than the way they look. But then you seem to have a sixth sense about what's right for you in this very confident write.
Ron
A Love From The Past (Poetry) - 3/13/2015 4:47:56 AM
Quite a story poem! I certainly hope it's true. After 20 years, I danced with an old classmate at our reunion. Six months later, we were married. Three years later, we were divorced. She didn't really know me. It wasn't my decision to divorce. I was comfortable with the way she was, not the way I thought she should be.
Ron
A Bittersweet Ending (Poetry) - 3/12/2015 8:08:30 AM
Like you wrote, it's much better to have broken it off now, rather to have been married and have to go through a divorce.
Ron
