Sonnet on a First Draft (Poetry) - 1/24/2017 8:07:04 AM
You also missed a couple of possessive apostrophes. The particular pet peeve of mine. But as far as the phrases go, you have done the Bard well with these words, perhaps through several revisions.
Ron
Sonnet on a First Draft (Poetry) - 1/24/2017 6:32:47 AM
Is the first line supposed to be 'thee'? 'The' doesn't make any sense. Thinking and writing is an important confluence, as you allude. You've done well here. Peace. r
Sonnet on a First Draft (Poetry) - 1/23/2017 8:51:49 PM
Indeed, the creation of a poem can take us down a tortuous route. This did, however, seem to come with ease, and yes, I do feel well pleased. John
