Our 'arry. (Poetry) - 8/5/2017 5:23:43 PM
I know of a butcher name of 'arry, or was it Larry or maybe Barry, no matter, now I have lost my train of thought...fun write to decipher...-e-
Our 'arry. (Poetry) - 8/4/2017 3:57:48 PM
Tough times don't last, tough people, do! God Bless you! JMD
A Poem (Poetry) - 8/3/2017 4:22:50 AM
A beautiful nature poem, richly rendered with unique symbols and images. I especially like the ending, so true, Nature does keep her secrets far from those who are not open to them. John PS: Need to get the formatting down into verses. I would read much better. JH
The Meadow (Poetry) - 6/24/2017 9:28:42 AM
You have a wonderful way with adjectives and adverbs in describing this wonderful occurrence on a beautiful day when the sun drives the night away.
There are a few flaws: its not it's, night's not nights, Daisies not Daisy's, teeming not teaming and whose not who's.
Ron
The Meadow (Poetry) - 6/23/2017 11:15:47 PM
A kind of prose poem with some wonderful imagery to cast poetic highlights across the page, matched by a few simple insights as well. Fine work. John
