A Face To Ponder Upon (Poetry) - 9/2/2017 5:23:41 AM
The root of suffering is attachment. To lose someone you love alters your life forever. The pain eventually stops, there are new people, but the gap never fully closes. This hole in your heart is the shape of the one you lost. No one else can fit it. Your poem generates empathy because most have lost someone that refuses to leave their heart. Peace to you... rlc
My Worship (Poetry) - 8/31/2017 5:40:40 AM
When you want something you've never had, you have to do something you've never done. The art of knowing is knowing what to ignore. The "I" in your poem seemed to be too distracted with the ephemeral allure of human wisdom. The heart is always the key with God. An earnest poem of some merit.
Peace... r
