Lux Mori (Book) - 10/27/2017 5:53:06 AM
Too little information for me to determine if this is science-based fiction or a fantasy. That is very flashy video but doesn't say much about the story. Great artwork. Without an excerpt I can't assess your writing either. From the devastation shown in the artwork, the atmosphere may be modified by no oxygen producing greenery and food may be impossible to obtain, dooming the people underground to starvation.
Ron
The Art of Grief (Poetry) - 10/27/2017 7:11:19 AM
Beautifully written and delivered. The way that you describe grief as a skill or an art is new to me, so I learned something new by reading your poem. Previously, I thought that grief was something that came upon us in an emotion. And that grief could be overcome by concentrating on routine and moving forward in life. But I guess that won't stop grief from coming back in dreams.
Ron
The Art of Grief (Poetry) - 10/27/2017 6:30:29 AM
There's nothing that hurts more than losing someone, and we all handle grief in our own way. Excellent write.
The Art of Grief (Poetry) - 10/27/2017 4:22:35 AM
Very touching. For me: "Grief is like the ocean; it comes on waves ebbing and flowing. Sometimes the water is calm, and sometimes the water is overwhelming. All we can do is learn to swim." Peace... r
The Art of Grief (Poetry) - 10/27/2017 1:44:51 AM
grief is like this, well penned
The Art of Grief (Poetry) - 10/26/2017 8:55:05 PM
A fine poem of love and loss. Well done.
