My Safe Place (Short Story) - 1/13/2018 7:52:59 AM
your story telling is fine, there are a few details that are not plausible as Rom as said before me, keep writing
My Safe Place (Short Story) - 1/10/2018 12:01:07 PM
The irony is her place wasn't safe after all. But I felt your story lacked the fear and terror that she would feel from the hot flames. Sweat would probably not allay the burning sensation on her skin, but she would probably die from asphyxiation before any flames reached her.
Ron
Masked Enemies (Poetry) - 1/14/2018 12:30:11 PM
Once we start to gather "friends" like these, it is time to examine what it really means to be a friend. And be more careful who we associate with.
Ron
Masked Enemies (Poetry) - 1/10/2018 7:19:54 AM
So much cruelty in the human race.
A Poem (Poetry) - 1/9/2018 2:11:22 PM
I write because I must. To not write would bring on the death knell.
