Right Now (Book) - 9/7/2018 7:23:38 AM
You bring a whole new meaning to the word, foresight. I thought of foresight just before I read where you wrote it in this excerpt. Certainly a refreshing change from the time travel stories out there. But I believe I have seen this kind of magic before and it certainly does prevent the kind of mistakes that we all make, make mistakes, when we make the wrong decision about something and then regretted later because we either acted or didn't act on the information we had.
I see you have good reviews on Amazon. Good luck with this one.
Ron
If You Believe in Love at First Sight (The Speed of Darkness short story) (Short Story) - 9/7/2018 8:45:29 AM
I dig the first part and find it quite interesting that you wrote from the viewpoint of a guy rather than the object of his affection--the disaffected girl. I could identify with that guy. But what I couldn't identify with was the werewolf. It certainly didn't make any sense to waste all of that conversation on a creature of someone's imagination that has been "covered" had nausea. But I guess there are people that love werewolf stories over and over like I'm hooked on the Walking Dead that don't exist either.
The paragraphing made it very difficult to read. I hope you can get the AD editor to correct that in the future.
Ron
And I Was Hungry (Radiant Shadows) (Poetry) - 9/8/2018 11:20:57 AM
Quite a lengthy poem of a vampire's lust when he/she gets hungry.
Ron
And I Was Hungry (Radiant Shadows) (Poetry) - 9/6/2018 11:22:33 AM
Great story from a Vampire's point of view!
But I'm really not certain if a vampire would feel for its victims because it has no soul. A vampire is just an empty-shell corpse survived by its victims' blood.
Sandie
