Four Crows (Book) - 12/12/2005 10:07:57 AM
Sounds very cool. you're books sounds interesting. I'm going to give them a read
I'm Sorry...Love Anne (Book) - 12/12/2005 10:06:57 AM
Sounds like an awesome story. Definitly going to pick it up. I'm always looking for new authors.
I'm Sorry...Love Anne (Book) - 10/23/2004 10:20:26 PM
THis sounds awesome, Excellent cover too...
God Bless
Michelle~
Saying Goodbye (Short Story) - 12/11/2008 6:58:15 PM
Departing is the toughest thing but it makes the heart grow closer to your loved ones in other ways.
Sedona (Short Story) - 7/26/2004 4:22:55 PM
enjoyed the read
Sedona (Short Story) - 7/21/2004 9:01:50 AM
Terrific stuff; love the imagery in this! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Sedona (Short Story) - 7/21/2004 4:44:43 AM
Wow, it sounds like a beautiful place! Great imagery. :-) April
Saying Goodbye (Short Story) - 3/22/2004 11:39:17 AM
Sad story; but very well done!
I'm Afraid of Dying (A love poem) (Poetry) - 9/1/2010 4:59:19 PM
u hit the proverbial nail on the head...pun intended...e(ii)e think everyone should write a yearly death peom oar autobiographical eulogy...get close enuff 2 kiss the grimreaper's cold lips...then enjoy every breath of aliveness & life's euphoric-bliss in all the secret place's only poets know about...what a great death-defyin' leap in2.....
I know you (Poetry) - 9/1/2010 4:48:15 PM
a very thought-provokin' peom...eye imagine the "you" inside your poem as one's inner subconscious or inner twin-self....who is our constant shadow...whose qualities we instantly recognize in a soul mate if we are lucky enough to find one....a great poem 2 read & reread again & again.....zalute...poeticallyours...m.&orf
A taste of death (Poetry) - 12/16/2009 2:37:24 AM
Very powerful, Andrea.
Betrayed (Poetry) - 9/27/2009 12:38:11 AM
Andrea, I read this as a graphic description of the strongholds of sin and the results of surrendering to its fabricated beauty...only to spiral downward in despair once bitten. Great writing! Blessings...Frances
A taste of death (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 5:30:29 AM
"Trust in the Lord with all you heart
and lean not to your own understanding.
In all ways, acknowledge Him and
He will direct your paths." Prov. 3:5-6
I'm Afraid of Dying (A love poem) (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 7:07:20 PM
WOW! This an ultimate THE EXIT poem.
A choice we don't have.
But a fate we will all have to face.
Where does the soul go to?
Love cannot be seen.
It cannot just be erased.
Hate is not seen but it has its disguise
Where is it? Why do we feel so strong
about something we cannot see with our human eyes?
So what does dying really mean when we don't know about the unseen?
One day we will be able to tell. Are you prepared for heaven or ....?
Amen
I know you (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 6:01:14 PM
To know yourself you must dig deep into your inner feelings. Feel that is what you did here. Nice write *********
A taste of death (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 5:59:32 PM
Depression is pulling at you and taking you down. Not a nice thing to go through but can be tackled with positive thoughts and some counseling from others. It is sometimes like death has taken over your body and you need to readjust to real life again. It sometimes takes much time and depression can never disappear altogher. I fight it each day. A stuggle it can be too.
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 5/3/2008 8:50:33 AM
Hi Andrea, I read your poem,"Embers of Nairobi", I found that it carried one all the way to Nairobi in the flowing form in which your writing reveals all the colors and sensations of that land. Well done!
Please feel free to visit my site in the "den".
A taste of death (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 11:01:41 PM
This is a powerful piece. I love the original descriptions. Gripping work~
Sheila
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 6:10:29 AM
Brilliant imagery. Wonderful, inspiring!
A taste of death (Poetry) - 10/1/2006 3:12:49 PM
A wonderful choice of words and very skillfully used to evoke the emotions you wrote about ... You are good ..Thank you I liked your poem ..Peter Addo
A taste of death (Poetry) - 9/18/2006 3:56:39 PM
I've been there and you did a good job of explaining what it feels like. The image of "A cloak hanging upon no shoulders" is masterful.
I know you (Poetry) - 7/2/2006 5:16:15 PM
I love your poem Andrea, I would love to have seen it end: For inside of me I felt and knew you before you were even born......
Homeschool
Betrayed (Poetry) - 12/12/2005 10:09:30 AM
Great writing.
I know you (Poetry) - 9/29/2005 6:04:13 AM
Another great one.
Touching the depth of my heart.
amira
Dear Friend (Poetry) - 9/29/2005 6:03:19 AM
Excellent write.
Very well done. Enjoyed reading.
Amira
A taste of death (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 12:05:30 AM
powerfully and skillfully penned ...
A taste of death (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 3:41:20 PM
Andrea,
You've captured the very essence of depression. Realistically. Honestly. POWERFULLY!
I've been there...(((HUGS)))
love, Karla. :(
A taste of death (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 7:15:33 AM
Excellent write, Andrea!
Peace.
A taste of death (Poetry) - 7/5/2005 10:30:56 PM
The expression of emotion in this write is fantastic and touches the core of depression; a state of death, without death. As dark as this emotion appears it is often the breakthrough of a new light :-)
I know you (Poetry) - 7/5/2005 1:32:34 PM
A mysterious journey into the subconcious soul
Peter
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 6/19/2005 10:20:24 AM
You create the ambiance of the place most effectively, Andrea. Thank you for sharing this beautiful offering. Love and peace. Regis
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 2/15/2005 2:49:17 PM
OMG, this is GORGEOUS! One EXPERIENCES Nairobi in your words--thank you, I have always wanted to go to Africa, ESPECIALLY Kenya.
Fantastic write--a keeper--thank you
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 2/15/2005 11:39:30 AM
you made me feel as though i was there; i would love to see nairobi, kenya! maybe someday if i ever get rich....*Sighhhhh* i can only dream...wonderful write!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 2/15/2005 9:20:26 AM
Ah yes!! I can relate to your prose. One really sees the face of God in the Serengeti. R
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 2/15/2005 6:25:23 AM
I really liked the descriptions you did in this piece and it made for an enjoyable read.
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 2/15/2005 2:32:17 AM
This is very nice. Your description has led me there. I enjoyed this very much.
M.Rose
Embers of Nairobi (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 10:43:48 PM
Superb prose! Thank you for sharing this very
colorful and exciting experience.
etw
Betrayed (Poetry) - 12/3/2004 6:42:31 PM
This put me right there anxiety fear and all. Great poem and message.
God Bless you and your family
warm and happy holidays and all days
Tracey
Betrayed (Poetry) - 11/30/2004 8:28:20 PM
lots of intense images and powerful conclusion ...
Betrayed (Poetry) - 11/30/2004 7:57:34 PM
Time does heal. Long poem and I read it all. This needed to be long. Mighty nice!
I know you (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 5:08:20 AM
Andrew, This is excellent!!!
...Michael
I know you (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 2:21:29 AM
I love this. Reality created by imagination.
M.Rose
I'm Scared (Poetry) - 5/16/2004 5:36:29 PM
Excellent! So open and free flowing which although some may say is not good...really is! :O)
~Nikki~
I'm Scared (Poetry) - 5/14/2004 7:38:28 AM
Andrew, this is exceptional writing.
You have the talent to take the reader
with you thru your verses and feel what
you felt as you write them. Awesome
write!
~Linda
Dear Friend (Poetry) - 5/14/2004 12:32:51 AM
"Dear Friend"
A sweet, innocent rendering of a heart.
Sensational write and made an incredibly beautiful read!
Gwendolyn
I'm Afraid of Dying (A love poem) (Poetry) - 5/14/2004 12:27:08 AM
"I'm Afraid of Dying (A love poem)"
A quite enjoyable write, thought provoking,
and emotionally filled read.
Thank you for sharing,
Gwendolyn
I'm Afraid of Dying (A love poem) (Poetry) - 5/8/2004 6:57:39 AM
Wow..this blew me away.
Excellent in all aspects.
I'm saving this, Andrew, and
I'm going to be reading your
works. You are an amazing
writer.
*Linda*
I'm Afraid of Dying (A love poem) (Poetry) - 5/4/2004 10:38:57 PM
WONDERFUL perspectives...great thoughts culminating in a beautiful poem!!
Moments (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 1:08:57 AM
I really enjoyed this. Especially the way you ended it. Great job.
Moments (Poetry) - 5/1/2004 9:44:52 PM
This was beautiful and deeply moving, I loved those last lines,
What have we done with our years?
When it is only in looking back
That we discover what we truly ached for
Were moments of time.
When we were at peace.
When we were safe.
When we were loved.
Reindeer
Moments (Poetry) - 5/1/2004 9:25:53 PM
From the cradle to the grave, you've summed it all up.
Dear Friend (Poetry) - 4/16/2004 1:18:47 PM
Thanks for sharing
this great write...
Trixie :)
Dear Friend (Poetry) - 4/15/2004 1:06:35 PM
excelled at pulling me into its depths.
Dear Friend (Poetry) - 4/15/2004 12:50:25 PM
This is a very thoughtful poem, honest and graceful, expressing the true emotions well.
