Adopting Daisy Mae (Short Story) - 11/12/2024 8:02:12 AM
I have a million things to say about Daisy Mae! Starting with there being something compelling about her….THAT is real, because the minute I saw the angle of her eyes and the breadth of her forehead, her very short legs and arms, the curly, curly hair…I felt drawn to her…and THEN, without even reading your writing, I saw her standing, facing the corner, and got an ‘instant’ pang of her being sent there (because back in my day — I’m 74 — that was our discipline measure taken). I can absorb an enormous amount of the nature of your soul, Michelle, in how you have written and personified this doll. Beautiful soul you have. My mother surrounded herself with her dolls when she became single and elderly. They each had names and they indeed carried friendship personalities and spoke to her spirit. She ‘loved’ them as family. I understand. This story is so very happy, mostly because you were entirely capable of making me love your Daisy Mae and how primal and real is your ability to love her yourself. THIS is what carrying the flame looks and feels like. You’ve got it. ~~ djl
Digging Deeper (Short Story) - 2/17/2024 4:18:56 PM
Just wow, Michelle. Your story and outlook are so very inspiring. I'm sorry to hear of your illness, but glad you are recovering, and in more ways than one!
Digging Deeper (Short Story) - 2/16/2024 9:16:36 AM
Love your story. It was déjà vu for me. I love the way you are recovering and on top of what you will do next. I believe you may fully recover to your old self, but with that appreciation of the little things that I had, too, as I slowed down and looked at the world differently--still do.
I was on top of my world at 20 when exploratory surgery disabled me. Yet, I walked out of the hospital with my hands and arms shriveled and impaired. I didn't carry the stigma of a wheelchair until 30 years later when things got tougher.
I ran into your office manager many times. And generally ignored someone who was either hurting from previous pain or an expected one. Especially when they were a colleague, or worse, my superior who felt inferior.
I might suggest that you roll down the window and call out to a passerby that you need help. For the 60 years that I've been paralyzed while driving alone, countless times I've had to ask complete strangers to help me. I never was delayed and people in general are most willing to help if they see that you need it. Like those people in the waiting room who jump to open the door.
Finally, you reminded me of the dental hygienist who followed me out to my car when I finally got back to seeing a dentist after 27 years. We discussed dogs and she supported me to make sure that I didn't fall like I did many times in those days while still walking. I didn't ask her because I walked in on my own. But she saw how I was walking and followed me out the door to help knowing that the parking lot was rough.
Ron
A Couple of Sisters (Short Story) - 12/22/2023 11:42:52 AM
Yes, those moments are precious and they don't last. So we need to gather them as often as we can. While I remember my mother one time with my cousin sharing a bed together at our grandparents' managed hotel, laughing and talking long into the night while my twin brother and I tried to get to sleep on the floor.
My sister and my mother had a rather adversarial relationship. But my sister helped her often during her years in assisted living and make sure she got everything done that she needed.
You made me remember the two years or so, when she no longer could email but could call me precisely at 4 PM on Mondays (her choice) and tell me who had visited and what she had done during the week, giggling in between, like a schoolgirl, so happy to read my words on her TTY.
Ron
A Couple of Sisters (Short Story) - 12/19/2023 8:16:23 AM
Stained glass windows of the soul. Michelle, you have condensed a relationship to its most common denominators. The eyes, the giggles, the joy, the love — a four-plex. There’s so much happening in a person’s face even with a SARS mask on…..the windows are showing who is there. I love this piece of writing about a topic and a relationship very universally identifiable and precious to me — Mother. You have painted that relationship with the very best colors, warm ones, authentic ones, colors that take hold of any one of us who have or had a loving Mother. And yes, savor the presence of the goodness, for the nurturing, the supportive care, the humor— the giggling together you tell of — THAT is shining some really bright light. For me, I miss my Mom answering the phone, “Joe’s Bar and Grill….”. Who does that? A great person who puts humor out for the sharing. I’ve still to muster the greatness of character to answer my phone like that……..but there’s still time for me, because I’m two somebodies Mother. ~~ Thank you for this story, Michelle. ~~ djl
Life Seen Through New Eyes (Short Story) - 11/24/2023 2:50:20 AM
Thank you for your beautiful eye-opener. Many more blessings to you throughout the holiday season.
Life Seen Through New Eyes (Short Story) - 11/23/2023 12:08:08 PM
So glad that you are thankful for what you have. We'll have so much. I'm amazed at what I have at this late stage of my life when all should've been gone.
Happy Thanksgiving!
Ron
The Garden Hose (Short Story) - 10/17/2023 8:59:05 AM
I shuddered to think of being showered with a garden hose, but you must be in a warm climate to have those lovely chameleons cavorting like that. Here in Texas we only have small geckos who show off their proneness with a orange web under their neck and change only from green to mud -colored depending upon their background.
I hope you continue to get a little sun every day because it is so rejuvenating. I do it in all kinds of weather when the sun is out. Long ago, I removed my tub so I can be wheeled into the shower every day. It's good to be clean, and from your story so good to be home. Write more about your experiences.
Ron
The Garden Hose (Short Story) - 10/16/2023 3:36:23 AM
Best wishes to you. May you continue to rediscover the beauty around you and enjoy life's simple pleasures which are treasures.
Life with Karen (Short Story) - 10/25/2022 3:05:18 AM
A riveting true story.
Six Days (Short Story) - 10/3/2022 2:53:27 AM
beautiful story, while reading it, i am reminded of our own island and the storms we had endured. i hope you and your family are safe.
Six Days (Short Story) - 9/27/2022 3:40:02 AM
May you ride out Ian as you did Irma. My thoughts are with you and anyone else in the upcoming hurricane's path.
Six Days (Short Story) - 9/26/2022 11:35:41 AM
You told your story so well I felt that I was there with you. But I've experienced some of the same thing, so it's easy for me to relate.
I've tried to tell other people that, from my experience asking for and getting help from strangers all my life, that people are basically good and helpful, even if they may have had some sort of "bad" background. And your neighbors surely proved it over those seven days.
We had four days of our power out a year ago, but we weren't in the street because the temperature dipped to about 15° and we Houstonians weren't used to that! Fortunately, I had a goose down comforter that got me toasty warm after about 1/2 hour of struggle under it.
Of all of our hurricanes, the eye of Alicia, in August 1983, a year after I bought this house, was the only one that put fright in my wife and I as it roared through the night and she used towels to try to sop up the water coming through all the windows. Our roof vent was our only damage, perhaps pulled out by a tornado like several of our neighbors. We lost power only four hours. But it was hard not getting updates on the storm.
And then, five years ago, Harvey dumped all that water on us. Our rain gauge said we got 42 inches in about 10 hours. Except for shorting out one circuit in the low part of our drainage requiring the fire department to come and wander around when they should have been out rescuing people, the water flowed from us down the street to flood many others. Tragic for those who lost their houses and all their belongings. Some, their lives.
My publisher and my cousin have left Tampa recently for higher ground. Prepare all you can, batten down the hatches, and stick this one out like the others. I've learned from tragedies on the highways that it's not a good idea to get out in the traffic jams.
Ron
Ice on the Fairway (Short Story) - 4/14/2022 3:57:44 AM
A beautiful story!
Ice on the Fairway (Short Story) - 4/13/2022 11:47:11 AM
I've had so many angels help me, but they were real life people who went on their way they were going before stopping and helping me. None were mysteries.
You reminded me of the high school cross country meet in Madison Wisconsin run on a golf course that had no snow, and fortunately, no ice. As I ran on the course in thin clads, my skin grew colder with each step and my insides grew hotter as my running, especially downhill, slammed through my legs all the way to the top of my head on the concrete like frozen ground. I was so happy to get back in the car to go home. We lost.
Unfortunately, my twin brother, a better runner than I, was with us for the three-hour drive to Madison and return, but he didn't run, suffering from a bad cold. The coach's car was overheating, so he shut off the heat in the car on the way to the meet and all the way back. When he took us to our house, Roger was bent over in pain and could barely get out of the car. With no angels to save him except our dad who took him immediately to the hospital emergency room, he nearly died that night from pneumonia. He required lung surgery a month later to remove scar tissue.
Fortunately, he is still playing golf up into October each year after losing his wife to a freak accident where she fell from a second story condo on Key Largo where they spent three months in winter. Just wrote that he was reconsidering golfing this year as spring approaches.
Ron
Grandma's Pearls (Short Story) - 1/18/2022 8:48:56 AM
That was really nice of your Hubs to restore your grandmother's pearl necklace. And they look great with black at any occasion you would wish to wear them. Something close to your grandmother like you were to your mother. A far better gift than just buying something to give to you. Giving you his heart and labor of love putting them back together.
My grandmother and grandfather fished for clams for the button industry in the early 1900s in Indiana. She had a pouch with black pearls from the clams. Most of them were a bit misshapen. My mother, who passed away two years ago like your mother, had them, and I believe, that my sister has them, now, to pass on down to the women in our family. They have no value, but are priceless when matched with the pictures grandma gave me of their times on the river.
Ron
Grandma's Pearls (Short Story) - 1/9/2022 10:38:29 AM
What a precious gift from both your dear husband and your dear grandmother to treasure! You are one lucky woman! The pearl necklace looks beautiful!
Sandie
Grandma's Pearls (Short Story) - 1/8/2022 1:03:56 PM
“Oh my gosh” is my reaction to this pearl of a necklace tribute, Michelle. Every bit of this reveal belongs on you along with that beautiful gift, your sensitivity, connectivity, wide-open ability to love this much, to be able to express it in a way that brings the pearls around my very own neck, and causes me to be happy for you being with a man like your husband. What a pair you must be. I like the name ‘Shelly’ for Michelle, I like that your ancestors treasured their treasures and thereby conscientiously and lovingly put the note with the gems. I like the bravery your husband had to risk your response being ‘the opposite of what he wished for.’ That is courageous by itself. You told this story impeccably. Even that solitary line = “That was 99 years ago.” Striking treatment of that fact. You hooked me from the get go, and I was so invested in the way you told this story, my washing machine could be overflowing and it would have to wait. I’m still crumpled from losing my mother to Alzheimers, the most severe it can get including personality change as well as complete loss of mind. I resonated with your pain of ‘her scent,’ ‘her belongings,’ the memory of her. My mother gave me the richest parts of my character. When she died, I felt like an orphan at age 64. Now, 6 years later I spend a long look at my favorite picture of the love and light in her eyes. I hope that for you, too, Michelle. ~~ djl
Grandma's Pearls (Short Story) - 1/8/2022 4:13:54 AM
A loving gesture from your husband in stringing together a beautiful tribute.
A Return to Greatness (Short Story) - 6/3/2020 11:05:59 AM
And, it was a commercial achievement, spearheaded by an immigrant and opens the door for free enterprise in space. With the reminder that the Apollo program used thousands of small contractors across the nation to provide the many elements that made up the Saturn system and the Apollo capsules. We must engage other enterprises and continue to include other countries in the peaceful and prosperous expiration and careful exploitation of what going to outer space requires.
Ron
All I Need (Short Story) - 6/2/2020 4:06:11 AM
i read this with much agreement to what you have said. and i also believe that we as human beings should collectively stop the continuance of this behavior. will we, i doubt i will live to see it.
budd
All I Need (Short Story) - 6/2/2020 3:25:05 AM
There should be racial profiling for all applicants in law enforcement to weed out racists. Any breach of misconduct whatsoever should not be protected.
The Girl with the Pretty Green Eyes (Short Story) - 3/10/2020 9:19:14 AM
It certainly is an inspirational story. What Chianti Nevin experienced. It would be nice if all children had teachers or counselors through school who would help them overcome their fears or understand why they might be bullies and have that corrected before they reach adulthood.
Ron
The Age of Consent (Article) - 3/6/2022 11:38:40 AM
A great article pointing out the problems in the Olympics that never seem to go away.
However bringing her to the US is no guarantee. US athletes, knowing it or not, have been drugged just to get that extra edge, too many times. And what happened to the US gymnastics team is a big disgrace and should have been stopped immediately. Instead, continued for many years, barely with the approval of coaches brought here for freedom from Romania.
Ron
The Age of Consent (Article) - 2/19/2022 2:55:07 PM
I agree completely. The anguish on that poor girl's face is piercing.
She is much too talented to be sacrificed on the floor of drugs. How do you mend a broken heart?
Taken: Jessie's Story (Article) - 12/30/2015 6:50:30 AM
A heart wrenching situation that should not be happening the 21st century.
Ron
Taking Back Control (Article) - 9/12/2015 7:20:42 AM
I agree with you, Michelle. This problem will take a hundred or more solutions to contain and reduce. But it must be done. Let's start with 10,000 signs placed at schools, shopping malls, and wherever people assemble in large numbers: "This area is under surveillance. Shooters and troublemakers will be filmed, caught, and prosecuted." It's a start.
Taking Back Control (Article) - 9/11/2015 7:27:38 AM
A well-written and cogent argument for dealing with those that might cause harm, with a gun or not. With the Affordable Health Care Act or Obamacare, I believe there is more treatment for the mentally ill available. It makes no sense to lock up the mentally ill in prisons, or, as we used to do, in state hospitals. Good treatment is a right way to go, but it is terribly expensive, especially when drug addictions become involved.
My concern is for the so-called mentally sound who seem to get caught up in cults that tend to rule their lives. So many seem to be willing to do terrible things following the leaders of the particular cult that they adhere to, whether it be a religion, an ideology, or a misplaced patriotism. All are very dangerous and include a lot more of the population than the mentally ill.
Ron
Taking Back Control (Article) - 9/8/2015 10:53:56 PM
You've certainly made a strong case based on your own experience. It's a good platform for lobbying.
Making Sense of it All (Article) - 12/17/2014 10:47:43 AM
Some very good points to ponder. From what little I know about it from the few people that I know that are faced with it in their families, mental illness is a terrific problem to deal with...Always has been… Lobotomy was considered a good treatment just a half-century ago. The current trend towards social Darwinism of deregulation and "free enterprise" endangers the unfortunate in many ways.
One correction. I believe the statistics show that the world is becoming less violent. The problem is that, with the Internet and cell phones that give everyone the ability to be an on-site reporter, we get far away news in a nanosecond. Our brains are incapable of distinguishing between the immediate danger and one that is far away and remote. I see many people suffering from unnatural fear as a result. Buying a gun is not an answer. Many think it is.
Ron
David and Goliath (Article) - 6/8/2010 9:47:46 AM
A most meaningful, apt, and timely article, Michelle. I completely agree with the sentiments you have shared within. Love, hugs, and best wishes,
Regis
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 3/11/2007 3:45:26 AM
My thoughts and prayers go out to you. Loosing loved ones is hard, and trying to handle their loss, plus the other problems involved can be overwhelming. Try to remember all the good times you shared and let God be a source of strength to help you. They say God never gives one more then they can handle, but I sometimes wonder why he gives SO much at one time. Bless you........M
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 2/14/2007 7:52:03 PM
I sincerely sympathies with you in all you went through. It calls for sympathy, but it also remains a major source of inspiration on how to handle similar situation in a more positive way.
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 1/2/2007 4:30:36 PM
That is a lot to take all at once. I suppose it doesn't help to say be thankful for the times you had? No, words are never enough. I have shared my pain in an article called "Awake in the Mourning," which I would love to share with you if you're interested. Let me know. My father's death when I was 14 changed my life forever. Goddess Blessings to you.
Monette
Guard What's Left (Article) - 10/9/2006 4:22:07 PM
Amen, Michelle. You and I are on the same page. Love and peace,
Regis
Life After Charley (Article) - 9/18/2006 2:07:11 PM
Michelle, this brought tears to my eyes. So many lost every thing, some lost their lives . It was a terrible heart rendering time in Punta Gorda. We got help quicky from people every where and it was gratefully received ! Life after Charley has almost returned to normal, but its lessons are deeply embeded in our hearts , FOREVER. Please thank your friends , because they and others did make a difference here......M No one in tampa should feel guilty , Everthing is preordained..
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/17/2005 5:42:31 AM
Dearest MICHELLE, I'm truly sorry for the pain you have suffered. However, I'm at awe! that God allowed you to use your gift to write, to share this experience with AD members . I pray your strenght in The Lord. Betty.
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/15/2005 10:11:01 AM
So terribly sorry for your losses, Michelle. I lost my father almost five years ago, and I still miss him terribly, as does my still grieving mother. And I truly hope better times are ahead for you.
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/14/2005 11:10:15 PM
Michelle, I am so sorry for the Hell you have been going through, you are in my thoughts and prayers
God Bless
Michelle!
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/14/2005 7:37:05 PM
That which does not kill us still hurts like Hell. Take all the time you need and know that we shall give you a joyous "welcome back.".
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/14/2005 10:33:45 AM
Hi Michelle,
I am so very sorry that you had such a heavy load to carry. It always seems that troubles come in clusters. Yes, indeed, they do make us stronger, and I believe they are usually followed by happier times.
May it be so with you.
God bless.
C.J.
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/14/2005 9:24:55 AM
Hi, Michelle...
I have been wondering where you have been; I am sorry to learn of your troubles...God be with you during this sad time in your life; you are indeed in my prayers!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Keep me and Karla in yours??? please???
That Which Doesn't Kill Us Makes Us Stronger? (Article) - 7/13/2005 4:58:56 PM
Dear Michelle, I am so sorry for your losses and my heart goes out to you in sympathy. I will not till you any of the old platitudes cause I know from experience they don't help, but maybe knowing your friends here miss you and look for ward to your return will. Take care and see you soon.
Felix
Life After Charley (Article) - 8/22/2004 6:32:04 PM
Michelle,
One thing I've observed, coast to coast, when a disaster strikes we're all one family. We stick together and help. Thanks for sharing an intimate reflection of your friend's observations.
Cynthia
Life After Charley (Article) - 8/20/2004 8:34:35 PM
this is a heartbreaking situation
God Bless
Michelle~
Life After Charley (Article) - 8/20/2004 10:48:18 AM
wonderful story, michelle! thanks for sharing!
Life After Charley (Article) - 8/19/2004 12:57:31 PM
Thanks for sharing Michelle!!
Love Tinka
A Place Where Grandmas Go (Poetry) - 11/12/2024 7:15:09 AM
Very personal and engaging portrayal of this closeness of your grandmother. The enchantment is contained in these details, for they are as unique as the woman herself, that you selected the trinkets of her personality and character, as well as the era in which she lived. Thank you for this sentiment and ability to convey what someone can mean to another. My twin grand daughters are six years old. This makes me want to be a better grandma to them, so thank you* ~~ Diana (djl)
Bug Friends (Poetry) - 1/11/2022 2:46:36 PM
Every creature here has a purpose but I do hate roaches.
Bug Friends (Poetry) - 1/10/2022 7:59:46 PM
Each bug's life is a miracle from God. They each come into this world for a purpose. A cute poem, Michelle!
Sandie
Bug Friends (Poetry) - 1/9/2022 2:07:16 PM
Your poem has a few bugs in it, but I like it anyway. ;-)
We swat them, spray them, poison them and are irritated by then in many ways. But without them, the underpinnings of the whole ecosystem, we would die.
Ron
Bug Friends (Poetry) - 1/7/2022 8:43:14 PM
Excellent, this needs to be evangelised, gardeners are sowing wildflowers not mowing their lawns and letting them become mini meadows to attract the native Bugs and bees.
All That I Have (Poetry) - 11/25/2020 7:09:20 PM
Yes indeed thank you God for the soft nights and wonderful poets who know how to express it. Thank you for sharing, this great verse Michelle.
All That I Have (Poetry) - 11/24/2020 6:24:09 PM
Now I lay me down to a thought of thankfulness. Beautiful, thanks for sharing.
All That I Have (Poetry) - 10/30/2020 11:22:40 AM
A beautiful way to sneak in a Halloween poem doesn't look like a Halloween poem… Clever.
Ron
All That I Have (Poetry) - 10/29/2020 4:39:35 PM
Gee everybody is talking about spooky things, I am going to hide in my bedroom and to the angels sing...-e-
All That I Have (Poetry) - 10/28/2020 7:31:58 PM
A lovely and heartfelt prayer that evokes the sweet innocence of childhood. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Michelle,
Regis. 🌺🌸🍂🍁🌻
Reflections of Time (Poetry) - 3/17/2019 8:28:57 PM
Sweet! And it seems to me there is much wisdom expressed via your verses, Michelle. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis.
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 4/6/2017 6:49:02 PM
My friend I just read this and am sobbing, literally sobbing. This was written as though you were right there and you took me there too. Who can even begin to understand the anguish of the poor animals who are victims of war? I keep thinking about the woman who came to my workshop and the story that she told about the little dog (her only friend) left behind in Afghanistan. 30 years on, she couldn't forget and now that she has shared her story, nor can I. Thank you for your incredible writing and your beautiful soul. Only one with insight and compassion could write like this. Please keep sharing your unique gifting with the world.
Breathe (for my Dad) (Poetry) - 3/2/2016 4:39:11 PM
I hardly have words about this one. It is so intense with the sharing of his sad condition, and the longing to help him no matter what it cost. Precious, painful memories.
Love,
Connie
Your House (Poetry) - 3/2/2016 4:36:10 PM
It's amazing to me how the sight of a house we once knew, can bring so many memories and even recapture the very feeling of being there. You are excellent at painting the picture of that stirring feeling. Thank God for memories---and for grandmas and others who bequeath their love to our hearts.
Love,
Connie
A Place Where Grandmas Go (Poetry) - 3/2/2016 4:30:06 PM
So sweet, Shelly! I have only faint memories of my only grandmother, since she died when I was 5. In my memories, old ladies were fluffy and smelled of sachets. They always had hankies right there in their sleeves. But as far as personal relationship, I missed out on that. Yours sounds sweet and wonderful, just the kind of grandma I would have loved to have, and the kind I'd love to be.
Connie
He Does (Poetry) - 2/29/2016 7:11:29 AM
Very beautiful and absolutely true! You should write more poetry...I see that these 41 have been here for a long time without your adding any new ones.
"He Does" is truly calming, assuring, inspiring and encouraging. Thanks for sharing it back in 2006, before I was even a member.
Connie
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 2/29/2016 7:06:59 AM
So heartrending, Shelly! I like that you called her "his girl" That's what we are to our pets. Are we their owners, or do they own us? My little Lacey certainly orders me around!
this sad story really tugs at my heartstrings. Thanks for sharing it through a dog's eyes.
Connie
Hers (Poetry) - 2/29/2016 6:59:42 AM
You got it! One of earth's best comforters is a dog.
Connie
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 1/5/2012 7:49:10 PM
How did I miss this beauty about a little doggy...makes me think of rufuz who is now gone, not dead, just gone...e
Farewell (Poetry) - 6/9/2011 6:01:39 PM
Oh Michelle, this is so lovely. You have such a gift for the soft and flowing poems.
Hugs,
CJ
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 6:40:08 PM
Beautifully written poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 7:47:43 AM
This is a beautiful write, Michelle - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 6:28:22 PM
I enjoyed this walk Michelle...and when I read your bio...I was impressed with the wisdon gathered withing from "grandma"...well done dear lady.
Allen
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 5:26:03 PM
Wow spiritually touching as we look for answers on this long hard road of life.
Fee
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 4:15:09 PM
There is one path, but many detours. Thankfully the Prodigal son was much loved. Simple and profound faith beautifully expressed, Michelle...
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 3:17:37 PM
Splendid poem, Michelle! you've been long gone,welcome back!
Eileen
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 12:05:54 PM
WONDERFUL WRITE WITH GREAT IMAGERY. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 11:28:17 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Michelle! Describes to the letter how His love conquers all...
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 10:01:41 AM
A poem that is beautiful in its simplicity. A delight to read.
CJ
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 9:31:02 AM
What a lovely poem, Michelle. So comforting.
The Gavel (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 9:01:28 AM
Very well done! Concise truth and relief is palpable throughout.
Journeys (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 8:49:16 AM
Sweet and meaningful sentiments, Michelle. Thank you for sharing them. Love and blessings,
Regis
The Gavel (Poetry) - 6/17/2009 2:33:22 PM
I wish to commend you for writing this strong and emotional write. Such power and strength in your words.
Legacy
Farewell (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 11:27:51 PM
Six years ago next month, I lost my nineteen year old son in an accident...and there are times when it pains me as though it was yesterday...this write is beautiful...and came to me at a welcome time.
The Gavel (Poetry) - 4/19/2009 8:57:26 PM
And a strength you didn't know you possessed. Concentrated power! Well done, Michelle...
The Gavel (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 10:00:56 AM
Honest and thus very powerful. My words will not do justice to what you express here, Michelle. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The Gavel (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 5:50:19 AM
An eloquent poem, powerful, and one that truly has staying power.
CJ
The Gavel (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 8:07:58 PM
This is strong and filled with all the emotions of love found lost and found again.
Fee
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/6/2009 6:35:52 PM
I love the tone of this expressive write, Michelle. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/6/2009 10:12:50 AM
A beautiful moving write!!
Love Tinka
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 1:55:44 AM
This is an excellent poem.take care
Rings (Poetry) - 2/4/2009 3:00:09 AM
Great poem.take care
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/4/2009 2:58:19 AM
Excellent and touching poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 11:53:20 AM
Coming full circle in such a spiritual leaning leaves one to ponder if life ever really ends or just reaches a new plateau.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 7:21:56 AM
A compassionate, loving eulogy to loss, in powerfully rendered lines, Michelle, ones that touch a reader's heart ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 5:34:02 AM
What a true but poignant write that so sums up the feelings and thoughts when we lose someone we love. Very nicely done Michelle.
hugs
Fee
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 5:25:44 AM
A truly beautiful and moving poem.
CJ
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 4:53:26 AM
Very nice, sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Farewell (Poetry) - 2/2/2009 8:30:49 PM
Very touching. Soon you will hear the words your loved one would say, to any situation or doubt you may have and it is truly a beautiful thing. Thank you for sharing. Be Well.
Rings (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 8:00:56 PM
I truly appreciate the wise philosophy that your share here via your verses, Michelle. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Rings (Poetry) - 1/30/2009 6:25:58 AM
This poem is both beautiful and eloquent in its simplicity.
CJ
Rings (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 5:54:33 PM
A really exceptional poem, Michelle. So much beauty and truth in so few words.
Rings (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 5:27:11 PM
I love how you write! It has made me realize I am on a ring as well.
Lots of medical problems right now. I have been finding it hard to cope with. Bless you for writing this poem!
Love,
Beckers
Rings (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 5:15:38 PM
Nicely expressed and filled with a sincerity and understanding that life is something special to be savored.
fee
Portrait of a King (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 7:21:56 PM
I'll vote for that cat to be our next president! He looks honest and me has good cat sence!
Assurance (Poetry) - 7/22/2008 11:16:44 PM
Michelle,
Pets are Gifts from GOD.
Thank you for sharing your GIFT!
John Michael
PS: Got this in the mail today - I will share it with you.
have you ever wondered about the
abbreviation A.S.A.P.? Generally we think of it in terms
of even more hurry and stress in our lives. Maybe if we
think of this abbreviation in a different manner, we will
begin to find a new way to deal with those rough days
along the way...
So when.......
There's work to do, deadlines to meet;
You've got no time to spare,
But as you hurry and scurry-
ASAP - ALWAYS SAY A PRAYER
In the midst of family chaos,
"Quality time" is rare.
Do your best; let God do the rest-
ASAP - ALWAYS SAY A PRAYER.
It may seem like your worries
Are more than you can bear.
Slow down and take a breather-
ASAP - ALWAYS SAY A PRAYER
God knows how stressful life is;
He wants to ease our cares,
And He'll respond to all your needs
A.S.A.P. - ALWAYS SAY A PRAYER.
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 5/6/2008 6:20:53 AM
Your eight simplicity things that give us pleasure are a joy to read and knowing that love, and touches complete you and fill up your heart and ours is a gift in and of itself.
Assurance (Poetry) - 4/19/2008 12:52:27 PM
Michelle, this is wonderful! I totally identify with your thoughts in this poem. Pets are gifts from God, created for our pleasure and encouragement. I often thank Him for my little dog; she's lively, as in leaping from the porch after she flies out the door, barking incessantly for a game of frisbee, and so many other things that are way too much for these old bones. But He knew exactly what I (and my Bill) needed, and I am truly thankful.
I just found this today, but I'm saving it.
Hugs, Connie
Hers (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 4:24:35 PM
Unconditional love is what it is, with a sweet little face to go along with it. Thanks for sharing this.
Leann
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 12:20:40 PM
Good reading even near Easter Season, am a cat lover and have gray cat named Seashore. Like poems such as this and it is done with your heart and mind. Keep on.
Hers (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 12:23:29 AM
This almost made me cry...
The wonderful things she gives you.
Those that it's so hard to find elsewhere.
Axilea
Hers (Poetry) - 3/27/2007 2:10:58 PM
A lovely ode to your pet. Well done!....M
Hers (Poetry) - 3/5/2007 10:07:23 PM
If she's anything like my Sass, she lives for the moment you return.
Love, Taylor
Hers (Poetry) - 2/24/2007 11:53:09 AM
Yes, Michelle. She loves you unconditionally; too bad not more humans could that. Sweet poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 8:09:13 PM
A truly captivating poem.......M
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/10/2007 6:17:07 AM
A pen unlike any other. Truly thought provoking, and delivered on wings of gentleness
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/9/2007 11:39:40 AM
This is the most poignant animal poem I have ever read. Truly an inspired flight! After reading it, one smiles, and nods to oneself in recognition of these feelings.
CJ
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/8/2007 2:03:26 PM
I wrote a haiku a while back:
"Dog is man's best friend.
D-O-G, when spelled backwards, is G-O-D.
What better tribute?"
(c) Karla Dorman.
This beautiful poem reminds me of God's agape love: unconditional. :) Well done, my (((friend)))!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/8/2007 4:10:22 AM
Though not a dog or cat lover I can truly appreciate other's love for these furry little creatures that seem to capture hearts completly as demonstrated by your wonderful tribute to your own little guy.
Fee
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/8/2007 3:42:25 AM
A beautiful offering Michelle!!
Love Tinka
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 9:34:37 PM
Great insight to the fact that our pets carry such great love for us and give great life to us when we need it most.
thanks,
randy
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 8:34:44 PM
"An eager friend who thinks I hung the moon ..." I especially love this line, Michelle! The whole poem is insightful and inspiring. Well done!
Love,
CJ
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 7:12:34 PM
Amen, Michelle...
Sometimes God sends us our little pets to show us the way through them. As I have said my little dog Blackie is so precious to me. I'll have to write something about him.:)
Blessings,
~Linda
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 7:08:59 PM
I think out four-legged friends do more for our morale and for our emotional stability than most people give credence to. It seems that they always know just what to do to make our day and to remind us that we are loved. Great write, Michelle!
Take care,
Sherry
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 6:50:23 PM
Beautiful write my friend, I sit here on the couch with my laptop and my little canine friend...Boomer who is a wonderful and dear little companion...touching write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B...
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 5:58:53 PM
Your little canine friend is indeed a fine messenger, Michelle. Delightful write. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 5:23:50 PM
This is a wonderful and heart touching poem.
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 5:16:47 PM
"I heard the whimpers of
an eager friend who thinks
I hung the moon"...well stated with such love. They are very special friends indeed.
Great write Michelle!!! Brought me a smile after a long day.
Love the pic too...she looks like quite a character :)
Edwin
Assurance (Poetry) - 2/7/2007 5:15:13 PM
This made me smile! It never ceases to amaze me how compassionate and kind our animal friends can be. Truly gifts from God. I have a seven-month-old black lab named Lucille, as well as two naughty-but-nice felines. They really make our house a home!
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 6:35:38 PM
awww, this is as sweet as it gets, Michelle. If only we could learn to love as unconditionally and as completely as our pets, I think mankind would be in a position to change the world. Very nice poem and tribute to your wonderful friend.
Take care,
Sherry
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 2:54:37 PM
Great to see you back, Michelle. A truly delightful poem - and what a joy Winifred must be! Yes, the muses sometimes shoulder each other out, but still, what a treasure to have two of them.
Blessings,
CJ
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 2:15:09 PM
This is so beautiful, Michelle, and such a loving tribute -- if only men could be so devoted! You have such a cutie in Winifred!
Much love,
CJ
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 1:28:18 PM
Awww loved this write my friend, reminds me of my little friend Boomer, she too gives loads of love, meeting me at the door, lying next to my feet at night to keep them warm, she is loving and affectionate, and don't require much upkeep, a fresh bowl of water, two feedings a day, snack treats for good behavior, three baths a week, and lots of love...pets are great, you've penned it well my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B...
Welcome back!
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 9:58:40 AM
Awwwwwww adorable..reminds me of my cat...he wants to play aal day!!
Love Tinka
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 9:00:11 AM
Michelle,
This touched my heart, for I also have a wonderful dog named Blackie. He's always there for me, no matter what my mood is, he doesn't care as long as Mommy is with him. I adore him. Love the pic too!!!!
Blessings,
~Linda
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 8:32:11 AM
Such sweetness, Michelle; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 8:19:04 AM
How sweet this is..Hugsssss
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 8:02:04 AM
Sloppy wet licks and blasts of bad breath...LOL, Oh, Michelle: this is priceless! Love this one. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 7:21:32 AM
Good to know we belong to them, they own us and they KNOW it...;) ed & RUFUZ (w00f)
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 5:59:58 AM
This is wonderful Michelle, such a pleasure to read and what an adorable Schnauzer. I understand this mutual love, I am owned by four toy poodles who give me such love and joy.
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 5:58:41 AM
Welcome back, Michelle.
Chrissy
Hers (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 5:38:17 AM
Part angel,
part imp with
an unfettered heart,
craving only to please.
They truly do, and your Winifred sounds like a marvelous imp angel, Michelle.
Time (Poetry) - 12/4/2006 4:56:13 PM
I love your writings, sweet Michelle. You do have a gift -- each poem is softly flowing with gentle and loving images. Very nice, very nice.
Love,
CJ
Enough (Poetry) - 12/4/2006 4:53:15 PM
Michelle, these thoughts are so well expressed -- you have a wonderful and loving heart. Excellent poem, excellent message.
Love,
CJ
Always (Poetry) - 12/4/2006 4:50:51 PM
This is tender, gentle and so loving, Michelle. I love how you write --
Love,
CJ
A Place Where Grandmas Go (Poetry) - 12/1/2006 6:54:07 PM
Oh Michelle how beautiful...I was just browsing tonight and stumbled upon this wonderful poem. It made me recall the scent of my own grandmother and recall so many fond memories, yes my grandmother awaits me in heaven. I want my grandchildren to think of me and remember in such fond ways as you've described in your beatuiful poem.
Blessings my dear friend,
Joyce Bowling
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 12:51:37 PM
Oh the Christmas was everyday. Just think what good there would be done in the world.
He Does (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 8:11:25 PM
Yes, Michelle, He obviously does ... as he paints on the canvas of your words. Jerelyn
He Does (Poetry) - 11/13/2006 12:10:19 PM
Picture perfect, while reading it i felt i was walking through those woods by your side,
lovely write,
thank you for sharing it.
Steve
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 11/13/2006 11:06:21 AM
Love it! You are amazingly talented!
He Does (Poetry) - 11/13/2006 11:05:33 AM
You paint such vivid, peaceful word-portraits... wow!
He Does (Poetry) - 11/12/2006 10:06:51 PM
L o v e l y <3 <3 <3
He Does (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 6:25:09 PM
Awwwwww... Wow Michelle, This was filled with great imagery, I had tears welling up in my eyes, reminds me of N.H. and our hikes! God's Blessings are so Bright and Warm and you were filled with them in your words, with your Views! Great pict. of comfort and natures warmth of colors! Warmest Blessings of Peace, Light, Love and WArm HuGs, Sheee -- I am tracking you, you aren't gettin' away that fast from me -- lol
He Does (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 6:16:47 PM
This brought tears to my eyes. Such a gorgeous picture and words to match. Thanks for sharing this Michelle. You're a blessing.
Chanti
He Does (Poetry) - 11/10/2006 8:33:31 PM
This is inspiring, Michelle; it is calming and spiritual. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace and all good things to you,
Regis
He Does (Poetry) - 11/10/2006 6:37:47 PM
god is always speaking to us, we just need to listen ...
an inspired gem, Michelle ...
He Does (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 6:22:54 PM
Beautiful write my dear friend...that still small voice is always reasuring and there to guide us...if we are willing to listen. I too have often wondered about and felt like the a grain of sand among the sands on a beach, but God cares for us all, afterall we are his children. Again, this is beautiful and written with perfection. Blessed me deeply.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
He Does (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 3:12:39 PM
Amen... ALWAYS God's calling card... assuring you of His special attention by fixing your gaze and mind on a vision of nature (usually)that you think has been organised and put on display especially for you personally! The line about the colours so fresh that they have not yet been named is knockout! Beautiful sentiments and expression. Bless you, K xx
Your Arms (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 7:19:46 AM
Very touching and poignant! He's a lucky man and you are a lucky woman to share such feelings.
He Does (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 5:38:21 AM
A truly inspirational poem. It makes one sigh deeply and with recognition.
CJ
He Does (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 1:45:20 AM
Awesome picture..........you are so to have such beauty around you!!
Love Tinka
He Does (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 8:32:02 PM
Wonderful work ,love the picture
He Does (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 7:19:08 PM
A lovely tranquil poem . God paints many colors for us. GREAT PICTURE ! ..........M
He Does (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 2:03:08 PM
Ain't it wonderful how good God is.
Louisa
He Does (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 1:31:40 PM
Well, 'He Does' and probably likes your poetry also. Me thinks.
Rusty
He Does (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 12:52:06 PM
I was on the bridge speaking out loud your words.
He Does (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 12:30:09 PM
Michelle
For sure he does..;-)
It's a slam dunk case...
Love and Blessings
Peter
To Start Over (Poetry) - 11/7/2006 8:29:39 AM
I know the feeling....
Well written.
MC
Always (Poetry) - 11/7/2006 8:28:20 AM
This is so sweet and romantic!
Always (Poetry) - 11/5/2006 8:26:34 AM
A lovely romantic ode, Michelle ! .....M
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 11/4/2006 7:13:47 PM
A beautiful picture that set the poem upon a firm foundation.
Always (Poetry) - 11/4/2006 7:36:56 AM
Spoken as a true romantic...you have created an exceptional poet full of beautiful imagery and romantic visions.
Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Always (Poetry) - 11/4/2006 6:55:11 AM
Michelle
You are a born romantic...just like me..;-)
And ths is exceptional poetry of the highest standard..
Love the gorgeous graphic too
Blessings
Peter
Always (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 7:53:12 PM
Poetry at its finast. I loved the grace this pen shows.
Always (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 4:52:31 PM
love makes the world go round...........
and we all think we are the first to discover that lol
Always (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 11:15:08 AM
Beautiful thoughts well-shared via your verses, Michelle. Thank you for this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Always (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 6:04:26 AM
As "always" just beautiful. : )
Always (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 5:11:39 AM
How beautifully and simply written! This is a poem that will never age, neither will the love it so movingly describes.
CJ
Always (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 1:55:16 AM
Very well composed...being a romantic myself...I can feel this one!!
Love Tinka
Always (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 8:05:20 PM
A very warm from the heart poem
Always (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 6:00:38 PM
What a beauty this is! Fantastic write!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Always (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 5:46:18 PM
What a sweet wonderful expression of love that shows just how much you care for your lover. Well done.
Fee
Always (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 5:13:34 PM
Michelle, keep your pen offering images that sweep the heart clear and clean and make dance, the soul that shares its love.
Jerelyn
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 10/29/2006 9:30:42 AM
Very descriptive and poignant. You are a great writer.
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/23/2006 10:53:45 AM
W o n d e r f u l images, w o n d e r f u l poem. Like so many people, I find bridges fascinating, and trains even more so.
B R A V A !!!! 'Pea'xoX
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/21/2006 7:32:03 PM
Great poem! The imagery and descriptions are perfect. You are a very talented poet. Thank you for sharing your view of the world and for opening your poetic soul to us.
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 3:43:41 AM
You've painted pictures with your verse of an era long gone...Well done....M
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 1:44:51 PM
Reminded me of some scary tracks we used to cross in TN on our way to fishing. Great imagery
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 12:44:38 PM
One very fine offering Michelle!!
Love tinka
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 8:10:40 AM
Very fine write. You bring back the ghostly images very well.
Rusty
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 6:44:02 AM
(Clapping) This is wonderful, Michelle -- the imagery is flawless. One can almost hear the train roaring, smell the belching smoke as you've written. Again, a wonderful poem and I applaud you.
Much respect for your talent.
Love,
CJ
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 6:24:15 AM
A haunting poem that brings back that excitement and magic of the train - that late giant of travel. A fine and nostalgic flight. Thank you!
CJ
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 11:21:39 PM
Amazing as always Michelle, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 8:46:13 PM
This brought back so many memories. My dad and uncles were all railroad men, so us kids were all kind of familiar with tresles and such...
Great imagery, flow and rhythm in this piece, Michelle.
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 7:22:37 PM
This is my kind of story, Michelle, because I love trains. The old locomotives were a machine like nothing the world had ever known and feeling the deep rumble, as the train would go past, was pure excitement for me as a child. I was fascinated by the wigwags, those round disks with the red light in the center that would swing back and forth at crossings. When I was about three, when someone would ask me what I wanted to be when I grew up, I would say, "I want to be the man who wigs the wigwags." This is a wonderful poem and as you can see, you sparked memories of my childhood that I had long forgotten.
Take care,
Sherry
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 6:50:24 PM
The graphic compliments the images you painted that echo with the rails of yesteryear. Up here when they pulled up most of the old rail lines they converted them into hiking and outdoor sport trails, even four wheeler trails and people got to see sights that most had even known existed. Well done on this piece.
Fee
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 6:18:17 PM
Photo and verses very effectively complement one another, Michelle. I find the trestle so symbolic somehow, meaningful of more than the obvious. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 5:57:20 PM
The photograph is stunning and the poem so vividly completes the picture. Ed and I recently went to stay in a little cabin in the middle of the giant Redwood forest and took a steam train up the mountain. It was an old locomotive like the one you describe on a single track wooden trestle track. I literally had tears of wonderment running down my cheeks. Your poem brought it all back for me. Wonderful wonderful write!
Much love Chanti
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 5:51:02 PM
Awesome write Michelle!
BRAVA!
The Old Trestle (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 5:50:38 PM
What a spectacular picture!!! I could almost name this picture; "Destiny" - Yup! That's what it appeals to me.
Wonderful write as well! I enjoyed both!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 9:26:37 AM
This is a very moving and poignant work, Michelle. I'll be offline for a week or so but I will read and review more of yours when I return. Thank you for all your kind words.
The Void (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 6:48:19 AM
Very powerful -- the message and emotion is so heart-wrenching. My heart and prayers are with you, hon.
Love,
CJ
Thank You (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 6:45:10 AM
Michelle, your love shines through in this beautiful poem ... and I'm sure he's equally as thankful for his most precious gift, too. Very nice -- and my very best wishes to you both.
Love,
CJ
Layers (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 5:32:46 AM
Deeply touching and soul rendering. I can feel your anguish.....M
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 9:05:04 AM
This was a unique write, I love animals and have often wondered how they see things. I have a small house dog she is a terrior. I often catch her watching me as if in deep thought...great job.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Thank You (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 7:43:45 PM
A wonderful testament to one whos shared your heart. God is gracious...M
Time (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 5:30:27 AM
The poem is Beautiful ! Its gracefully flows into our hearts....M
Enough (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 5:28:07 AM
Enough is enough! Anger and hurt can tear families apart. Some times it takes a loved ones death to bring the family unit together again.( Thats what happened in our family). I hope and pray it will not come to that for you. Its a powerful write!....M
The World That We Know (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 7:01:12 AM
Nice work! It flows directly from your soul to the paper. I enjoyed it very much and will read more of your poetry.
The Void (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 6:07:04 AM
Powerful and touching ! A loved one who is far away, leaves an empty place in our lives, in our hearts.......M
Mirror (Poetry) - 9/20/2006 8:18:55 PM
Congratulations on describing the image we all face so well. I have a poem called "Images" which is in the same vein. I enjoyed reading this one. Remember, it's how we feel inside that counts.
Slumber (Poetry) - 9/20/2006 6:18:00 PM
I loved this. I have a poem called "Cushion Of Dreams"... I'll post it and maybe you can break your fall. Thank you for your kind words about my work. I enjoyed yours and will read more.
To Start Over (Poetry) - 9/18/2006 1:46:45 PM
Well said .. Some times I think many of us would like to go some where and start over. Its so very hard to do. We can't escape what tomorrow has to offer......m
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 9/18/2006 3:01:28 AM
Written with lovely images and sensual delight. Well done ! .....M
Your Arms (Poetry) - 9/18/2006 2:58:22 AM
BEAUTIFUL, ! I feel the same way.........m
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/18/2006 2:56:53 AM
What a touching poem . The holidays seem to be a time for sharing with those less fortunate.. I hope you won !!......M
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/14/2006 1:28:15 PM
This is most soul-reaching, Michelle. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/14/2006 1:13:10 AM
A very unusual perspective that was most touching. Kathy.
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 8:43:35 AM
The winner in my opinion, Michelle, very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 8:42:29 AM
*tears*
O, Michelle, you've penned a heartbreaker! Excellent, powerful verse that will draw tears and prayers for the innocents.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 8:10:43 AM
So very very sad, and although you speak of war, this also reminded me of what many pets endured in Hurricane Katrina.
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 3:49:59 AM
Very intense spiritually and universally loving creater poem. Well done Michelle.
Fee
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 1:55:09 AM
Touching read Michelle!!
Yes tears are flowing!!
Love Tinka
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/8/2006 7:09:10 PM
Oh how I can relate to this one, I am an advocate for dog's and their protection!!! Good job!!!!
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/8/2006 7:02:10 PM
This was very touching, very sad and very real. I wish that all stories had a happy ending - perhpas this was the ending the pup wanted after all - tp be with her master. Great write, Girlfriend! I am in tears...
RM Green
Through A Dog's Eyes (Poetry) - 9/8/2006 4:30:13 PM
If not the Eagle, the neighbor you thought that you could trust. Life is very difficult and so very uncertain in many places on this planet. This is a touching piece, Michelle. I wish the world was a better place and that everyone could live in freedom and that there was equality for everyone, but we are a very long way from that and perhaps we have already seen the best of it. I rather imagine that our great-grandchildren will be living in some kind of slavery if they exist at all.
Take care,
Sherry
To Start Over (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 5:49:27 PM
IF? A very sweet thought, Michelle. I wonder why? I wonder so?
I enjoy your writing.
mfw
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 4:21:09 PM
As always a pen of many thoughts and emotions. You did poetry justice with this one.
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 11:04:15 AM
Too early for Christmas? We once had Christmas in July when our family couldn't get together during the winter because my younger sister was overseas. That was great fun, even without the snow...
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 3:42:22 PM
Fantastic write in my books, it encompasses all that Christmas stands for from the smiles of children to the joy of giving. Good luck and I think it is a marvelous entry.
Fee
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 10:29:33 AM
This certainly should win first prize. The poem embodies all that Christmas is about, just glows with warmth, and we can smell the fine foods and hear the feline hitchhikers. A truly delightful read.
CJ
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 7:42:49 AM
A winner for sure....got to love it!!
love Tinka
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 11:31:11 PM
Beautiful, wonderful poem that captures the true spirit of Christmas!! BRAVO! I wish you well in the contest! YOU GO GIRL!
RM Green
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 8:59:42 PM
To me this poem captures everything great about the Christmas holiday! I think you expressed it beautifully, Michelle. I wish
you the best with the contest!
Eileen
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 4:46:27 PM
A stunning poem, Michelle, good job! You make me long for the crisp snap in the air of wintertime and the warm smells that pour from the kitchen as the families gather to share their blessings and bounties with all who enter their homes. Truly the gift is in the giving more so than in the receiving and what better way to say Merry Christmas than to give to those who are in need. Good luck with the contest.
Take care,
Sherry
The Angels Are Here (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 4:41:34 PM
I think this is a delightful Christmas poetic offering, Michelle. Thank you for sharing it and best of luck in the contest. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Your Arms (Poetry) - 8/28/2006 5:01:07 AM
Perfection!
this is going into my library!
Vesna:)
To Start Over (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 3:17:40 PM
You have nailed the feeling most of us has sooner or later. I think only the truly brave, responsible and loving of us resist this urge to cut loose and call all those we have touched "collateral damage" in our search for solace. We know the pain and sense of rejection we would be guilty of causing in other's lives. Nice work.
A Road To Nowhere (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 3:12:59 PM
Awesome poem Michelle, I have no idea how I missed this, but its an amazing write, write on and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~
The Little Red Schoolhouse (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 6:50:18 AM
"Hopeful spirits would yearn for a world that encouraged their dreams"... and they still do, Michelle. You take us there, and I am now wearing granny blacklaced boots, an ankle-length princessline chequered frock with ruffle hem and a full-length apron. Ready and willing, now, to listen and learn!! It's never too late! :)) TY and bless you. A beautiful and carefully considered word picture. LOL Kate xx
The Little Red Schoolhouse (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 8:55:12 AM
E x c el l e n t !! Thank all that is good and holy for the ability to read and write. . .teachers who make it a pleasure to learn. Afraid a lot of teachers back then relied on the rod. Many weren't
qualified -- after all, it was just a buncha kids. Rapscallions, every one! Still. . .there are many times when a simpler, less
crowded life appeals. You have done a beautiful job of reminding us
about a national institution that, on the face of it, at least, could not have been simpler or more. . .I don't know. . .for those able to
go, such schools were more democratic? Plus no one assumed that
kids needed to be segregated by age. . .see how much thought you
have inspired? Great images, did I forget to say? Admiringly, 'Pea' <3
The World That We Know (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 7:50:24 PM
This piece reveals alot about your character. You have to be a very resilient optimist by choice. I appreciated the concise way you expressed yourself. One can only be concise when they have worked their way through alot of painful emotions to be able to speak it so clearly. Wonderful flow to your work as well that made it easy to read- not awkward or forced. Very nice.
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 8/5/2006 1:32:12 PM
I love how you start out 'whimsical' and end with 'seductive'.
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 8/5/2006 4:38:50 AM
Simply beautiful!!
Love Tinka
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 8/4/2006 6:06:53 PM
Michelle, the imagery in this one is splendid! I love the nature interspersed with passion and love. an exquisite poem I'mm saving!
Thanks for sharing!
Eileen
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 8/4/2006 8:44:45 AM
Simple pleasures are stopping by your Den and reading your words; a refreshing break, indeed. Thank you, dear Michelle, this is calming, beautiful, and going into my library!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
