Valorous (Poetry) - 11/30/2013 11:11:19 PM
I used to think that discretion was the better part of valor,
but now it seems that metaphor is at least 80 percent of it.
A very spiffy and enjoyable write!
Valorous (Poetry) - 11/27/2013 1:20:09 PM
The dance of love challenges the stars for brightness. This is a cool one.
Ron
Valorous (Poetry) - 11/27/2013 3:16:59 AM
very well written and much enjoyed
budd
There's Sunlight Here (Poetry) - 10/2/2013 2:21:07 AM
and hold unto it when you do
budd
Destined To Look Away~ (Poetry) - 9/30/2013 9:19:59 PM
So many in pain go unnoticed, unheard, unseen. For it is too much of an effort for many to just lend an ear for a few minutes. It is a chore to care. That's why you'll never find a self absorbed person who has ever completed suicide. Just my opinion and thoughts the poem provoked in me.
Damsel in Distress (Poetry) - 9/29/2013 7:29:24 AM
It's depressing to think that so many are sitting in that chair strangling a glass of forgetfulness that never seems to allow them to forget.
Brilliant insight into alcoholism.
Ron
Dreadful Existence of Being (Poetry) - 9/27/2013 9:21:41 AM
Somebody needs to get a life. Needs to stop looking inward and start looking outward. Helping others is a start.
Ron
Dreadful Existence of Being (Poetry) - 9/26/2013 9:31:50 PM
Interesting poetic perspective.
Interesting enough, I used to feel that way.
Then I met real people whom I could trust...
The rest is history...
Peace, love and blessings,
John Michael
the Wall, the Window, and the Door (Poetry) - 9/26/2013 12:22:11 PM
Paints a picture of desolation as dry as the desert and is closed in as a cave.
Ron
the Wall, the Window, and the Door (Poetry) - 9/26/2013 7:53:12 AM
You have a very creative inner voice. Let's hear more from you, Terry.
Destined To Look Away~ (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 4:57:28 PM
Oh my gosh...this is really spectacular! I am surprised there are not a ton of comments on this piece. I am in awe!
