Quantum Dawn: A Journey of Human Evolutionary Paths (Book) - 7/19/2021 10:51:04 AM
I have written both nonfiction and fiction in this genre. So I congratulate you on your first novel delving into human evolution via technological manipulation.
Like 1984, any prediction that you may write in your novel dated 2088, however true it might be, will probably not be on target like 1984 turned out to be.
I have posted here, and will soon have the short story published in an anthology, Unidentical Twins, a subject which I am familiar with because I am an identical twin.
https://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewshortstory.asp?id=65134&authorid=3918
Your excerpt takes great license with literary words but makes little sense to someone based in science and logic. So I'm beginning to think that your book is more fantasy and magic than science fiction. And you have one of my pet peeves. The first two uses of its are incorrect because they are possessive. The last use that can be pronounced, "it is," is correct.
Ron
