Someone Like Me (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 11:02:09 AM
Nicely done. Would I were the recipient of such a gift, Sasia. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 11:00:53 AM
Sasia. Thank you for making me look at myself via your verses. Love and peace to you,
Regis
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 6:42:06 PM
AAAAA-men!! You have expressed yourself beautifully -- made us see, hear, feel. . .weep! Your mom and dad would be so proud of you. No, ARE. They are looking down with awe!! Obviously, you got the best possible combination of the great traits each of them
possessed in abundance. Add to them your talent and flair. . .amazing!!! Love 'n' Hugs, 'Pea' <3
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 6/30/2004 9:33:29 PM
This is so moving! You did a wonderful job of expressing yourself and telling this family story through poetry. The ending was so hopeful, and positive, a great ending to this emotional piece.
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 11:37:49 PM
This is sad, yet packed with hope. Wonderful poetry.
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 3:59:22 PM
(((sasia)))
welcome to author's den, first of all, you're among friends
second of all, beautiful, moving tribute to your parents
i'm sorry for your loss--i know what it is like to lose a parent (mom died 14 years ago, i miss her, still)
(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. :(
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 3:47:51 PM
Sasia, I am so glad I stopped by to read this riveting, heartfelt poem! What a lovely tribute to your parents! They will live on, thanks to this write! I lost my mom 14 years ago (age 59), and I still feel the pain years later! Keep on writing! It will do you a lot of good; it sure has done wonders for ME! Well done1
(((HUGS))) and much love, your new Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 10:34:48 AM
Sasia, writing is an excellent way of coping. You're not alone in your feelings. I'm glad that you're willing to share them, and I thank you for doing so. It let's those who miss their parents know we have much in common. I miss mine, too, and I also write about my desire to see them again. Still it's a relief to know that they don't have to suffer anymore. Before my mother's death, I kept wishing that I could make her young again. She had lost the ability to do all the things she enjoyed most. My dad, like yours, also died a few years before her. He was in great pain. His every breath was labored. When he died, I thanked the Lord that he didn't have to suffer anymore.
Even so, I dearly miss them both, and that feeling won't go away.
Love and prayers,
Patty
My Father and My Mother (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 10:11:48 AM
Beautiful heartfelt write, Poet!!!… Peace thru those wonderful Memories!!!…Thank you for sharing them.
Someone Like Me (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 11:33:22 PM
Very nice piece, Sasia. Thank you.
What Goes Around Comes Around (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 8:49:30 AM
Thank you for sharing this magnificent offering, Sasia. Love and peace to you. Regis
What Goes Around Comes Around (Poetry) - 6/24/2004 6:38:20 PM
Although I read this delightful story/poem whenever you first posted it, I have just sat down and started my reviews. I had to write this review because as a parent and grandparent this write is a timeless treasure, Poet!!! It should be posted at every school and in every child’s bedroom!!! It was an absolute pure joy to read!!! Thank you for posting this priceless piece.
P.S. I did make a copy of it and took it to my eldest son’s home, and stuck it on the frig!!! They all got a kick out of it!!!
What Goes Around Comes Around (Poetry) - 6/24/2004 10:01:20 AM
Sasia, enjoyed reading this very much! Funny how we as parents end up sounding like our parents did years ago. I am looking forwrd to the day when my kids say in disbelief "I sound just like my dad!"
Looking forward to reading more of your work. I invite you to read my poem 'This is Fatherhood?'
Anthony
What Goes Around Comes Around (Poetry) - 6/24/2004 9:26:45 AM
We all deserve our Bill of Rights Sasia, and the title of your poem. The first time I heard it was from a convict in the joint. "Wbat goes around comes around. All that goes up must come down." I was impressed by it then and now. But less so now. For there are always shades of grey nad this is so emphatic a saying that it is not always true. Loved the admonitions. And most things do happen this way. Bill
Someone Like Me (Poetry) - 6/24/2004 5:39:12 AM
Very nice, just as I am sure you are.
Someone Like Me (Poetry) - 6/24/2004 12:43:21 AM
You offer in this poem seems very worth accepting. It reveals a hurt filled with love ... waiting for her someone to take the call. Hugs. Bill
Someone Like Me (Poetry) - 6/24/2004 12:11:09 AM
Beautiful rhythm and rhyme in this wonderful poem!
A joy to read!
