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Recent Reviews for David Arthur Walters


Wrecked by Success or Successful Loser? (Short Story) - 6/7/2023 11:19:36 AM
A lot of philosophizing going on in this article as well as analyzing one's self. Always a dangerous thing to do. By defining yourself as a Successful Loser, you have achieved that success in your lifetime now coming to a close by successfully losing. I am a critic like you and look around me to criticize what I see but never to the point where I become obsessed because I had to earn a living, too. I would call myself a successful cruiser because I have maintained a semblance of wealth while there were many requiring me to lose all financial wealth and get into a smaller space like my parents did over a period of 30 years from their early retirement. By not committing all the way to losing I succeed and therefore will leave this coil with the thought that my money has been well placed and will continue to grow even beyond my life, my success. If what I have written becomes famous, I hope it is after I die because I'm not sure I could put up with the pressure of success like that. it would be a real bitch for me. Ron

Animal Rights Protest South Beach (Short Story) - 10/15/2022 11:07:08 AM
On third reading, this is really good. It's great to get news from a local perspective totally outside of mine and many others realm. Not only the local news, but a big issue. And I don't mind your sidetracks. Your sidetracks are some of the best reading in the whole piece. I'm helping my partner with second thoughts about her Medicare advantage program rethink it and sign up with a group that I found gave top-notch care with very little monetary outlay. But you're right, for those who are willing to sink low enough, or are being forced into poverty by greedy capitalists Medicaid gives more health services for no money and low taxes to boot. Ron

The Bullshit People (Short Story) - 9/21/2022 9:51:56 PM
Be careful when you walk into those bullshit places. I'm glad Yannin has a "Fuck you" attitude to run the place. Sandie

Tracey's Secret (Short Story) - 4/26/2022 4:07:54 AM
Luck? I prefer synchronicity of chance. At least you had the chance to be graced by the phenomenon of Tracey Flagler.

Tracey's Secret (Short Story) - 4/25/2022 11:11:57 AM
I love the way you have segued into getting people interested in Tracy's Secret. And like everyone looking for fame, they are looking for that pot of gold at the end of the rainbow that you describe in the last line, one way or the other. ;-) Charlize Theron has been on my mind ever since I saw her in the talking pictures. Her beauty shone through like no other sculptured and refined movie diva. And then she did, Monster, and transformed herself into a serial killer, that cinched it for me. No other actor except maybe Billy Bob Thorton can transform into the character so well that you believe her. If Tracy Flagler (not her real name) next door resembles Charlize, you indeed have a pleasant morning just saying hello to her. BTW, your cover for Tracy's Secret contains a name that is little used, but the middle name of my squeeze. Am I finding a bit too much about who Tracy really is from that little clue? Ron

My Take On Needle Park (Short Story) - 4/24/2022 11:06:26 AM
Have I written that I really love the way you write? After reading this, why don't you write a script for the second coming of Needle Park? Hollywood seems to like to take successful movies and bring them back out again years later to make big bucks. I could just see Al Pacino playing an aging guru to the hilt! If experience makes good method actors, so does it make good writers. In your case, leaving the Midwest small town at 13 and living by your wits in Chicago, NYC, Hawaii, St. Louis?, and South Beach has turned you into one of the most experienced writers out there, your full memoir could be a bestseller. Like you, I came out of hard-working Midwest, but loved my home life, partly because of its freedom, leaving home to go to college at 18, confident of my future that turned around drastically at 20. Like you, my experiences include San Francisco during the Summer of Love. One brief weekend in Manhattan in June with Bobby Kennedy at rest in St. Patrick's Cathedral, wandering the streets down to a small park (Washington Park?) on the way to Greenwich Village to in where the park was filled on that very hot and gritty night with people very upset with both the heat and Bobby's assassination. Loving to escape back to Wisconsin, seven years in Almost Heaven, West Virginia. Three years in Old South Atlanta immersed in black culture and, the rest stuck in Oil City Houston, watching the hordes of immigrants move in and take over for minimum wage or less. Through it all, I stayed straighter than you. After I gave up smoking at seven I denied to share a lit joint with friends a few times and was not offered anything else, thank goodness for my square, just observing, ways. Only once while an associate professor at a party thrown for the birthday of a wealthy African student who wasn't even there, repeatedly approached as the only white person in the whole crowd, as a drug dealer there to give folks what they needed. ;-) Probably why my writing is not as enlightened as yours. LSD seems to do that. When I sat about 15 feet from Timothy Leary at a international conference in Toronto one day, I was amazed that his brain was not fried like the naysayers would suggest, but very lucid and willing to challenge his fellow panel member, Herman Kahn of the Hudson Institute. Don't mean to steal your thunder, just like to compare our experiences. Ron

Machines and Me (Short Story) - 4/15/2022 3:13:00 AM
A fascinating story! So, the brown rings in potato chips have a ring of truth to them.

Machines and Me (Short Story) - 4/14/2022 12:04:04 PM
What an amazing story of your early life. Unfortunately, you never became Horatio Alger, capitalist of renown, buying Pepsi stock or otherwise. But I'm glad that the father you ran away from was able to bail you out when you couldn't, yourself. I had it so much easier, but loved all kinds of work at low pay. Smashed my finger between two bowling balls setting pins in high school. Had a fellow coworker at a mobile home factory with a death wish driving his jalopy to roll it over every week for the case of beer at stock-car races. At the state fair saw him flying through the windowless windshield about 40 feet in the air in front of the grandstand as everyone, including me, watched in horror, landing on a hood of a car in the infield and sliding down like a sack of potatoes. Only to be seen on the midway the next night with a beer in hand, still walking and still drunk. Heard later that during a construction job, he sat down during lunch propped up against the rear duals on a dump truck, probably fell asleep, and the dump truck backed over him, killing him dead. My twin brother, who ripped the finger badly on an exposed nail as they lifted a wall to the side of a mobile home floor in that same factory, but was back to work the next day. During my three summers there, I only got a sliver of steel from driving screws in my eye, being irritated to hell with my newly bought ("moneybags" my father called me) contact lenses and had to have it surgically removed (don't blink!) with a scalpel as I tried to keep steady. I also got large forearms like Popeye from pounding thousands of nails and a red rash on my arms from carrying rolls of pink fiberglass insulation that no one else would carry and then staple it to the top of the walls with great flourish. So glad the day that it wasn't cancer-causing asbestos. Although it was in the floor tile I chipped out badly to replace. After college, Roger worked many jobs, but his first at a pot and pan factory where he was responsible for machine safety, had a woman who refused to wear pullbacks on an aluminum stamping machine, have both of her hands cut off. Ron

The Ballerina, The Model, and The Bartender (Short Story) - 4/3/2022 4:53:16 PM
More noble than he thinks, the bartender is responsible for his wife's strong comeback.

The Ballerina, The Model, and The Bartender (Short Story) - 4/3/2022 11:10:20 AM
Assuming that the story is true, it's a very good one. People often marry opposites because they each provide something the other spouse does not have. I like how you quelled your bartender friend's obsession with faggots. And yes, a dramatic change in life like those two women experienced, usually leads to a breakup of marriage. I experienced that kind of change, even though I came out rather functional than disabled, so many couldn't tolerate me being disabled in their minds. In counseling, my wife of three years told the minister counseling us that she had, "bad dreams of putting my socks on in the morning." I made my own breakfast, and drove off 20 miles on a busy freeway to work, while she stayed in bed another hour before getting up and driving off to her retail store job. We basically worked in different worlds. But it was my creeping disability that split us up. Ron

Doctor Shot (Short Story) - 3/21/2022 11:43:04 AM
Hello! I am Ron's friend with hand pain (and shoulder, knees, feet, etc) and I do have RA. I have had lots of injections that were not fun but brought great relief. I totally enjoyed your story, especially since I relate to the assistant in the office. I worked as a LVN in an office that ran chronically late. Love your story telling abilities!

Doctor Shot (Short Story) - 3/20/2022 10:50:23 AM
I love how personal and realistic you make your stories. This one rambled from a complaint about being a patient (waiting for the doctor) into being a willing collaborator with her over your age-related pains that she took pains to relieve. I tend to agree with you on the discussion about Latino singers who have larger audiences than most American singers. However, while you charmed your audience in the waiting room with your knowledge, your attitude quickly turned them off. I'm glad you wrote it though. Not afraid to write the good, the bad and the ugly. Sue me for that quote, Sergio! I'm going to forward this to a fellow AD member who has been suffering pain in her hands recently. Unfortunately, she may not be able to get to Miami. Ron

Epistle to Demon Raptor (Short Story) - 8/23/2021 11:31:06 AM
I searched for your essay, Grammar, but did not find anything. But I do find this article to be quite humorous and yet quite telling of a certain segment of our society who likes to hide behind overblown self-importance that clearly indicates someone with an inferiority complex who fails to show his/her true identity for real fear of reprisal. Cowards all. The initial purpose of a pen name or pseudonym by brilliant commenters like yourself, was to keep them from being identified and either tortured and murdered by the powers that be who would go at any length to prevent the truth from getting out. Thanks for revealing Demon Raptor for what he/she really is. A bumbling writer with no sense of grammar. I'm sure glad I knew my grammars before they died. ;-) Ron

Epistle to Demon Raptor (Short Story) - 8/21/2021 8:01:05 AM
The image is of a relatively harmless vegetarian rat found in South America, a "delator."

Capt. Blight's Skum Skow (Short Story) - 8/19/2021 9:35:30 AM
What a relief from the way things are going, even little hurricanes that come along occasionally while the water in the Atlantic keeps silently arising, making the underpinnings of all those posh time shared high-rises doomed to take a World Trade Center plunge. With more on the way… In the meantime, keep bringing down Amazon's Kindle paradise. Looking forward to more good humor from bilge mouth Capt. Blight. Ron

Capt. Blight's Skum Skow (Short Story) - 8/17/2021 2:32:23 PM
As Popeye, Peepeye and Poopeye (Popeye's three nephews) might or mightn't say, "ARRRR-ARRRR-ARRRR!, Cap'n! This be most amusin' stuff." A pip of a binnacle barfin' biots-breathin' account, ta be shoor, matey. An' a lubberline-sight better'n anything we got on the Goom Schick (sic) Leakin' Lena, hitched up at the Moloka'i Public Pee'r (sic)!" And now, 'scuse me...we gots ta man the watch, skim th' skuppers an' maybe splice the mainbrace a few more times before we leave Port (or anything else drinkable)! Cinseely, Cuthbert Cuddahoody Carbuncle Master a'the Goom Schick (sic) SS Rachel Equity

South Beach Bloodbath (Short Story) - 7/25/2021 4:11:55 AM
Your living novel does indeed breathe and pulsate with realism.

South Beach Bloodbath (Short Story) - 7/24/2021 2:27:05 PM
I'm like Ron, I'm a little confused whether this is a crime/drama that you are writing, or that it had happened to you some time in real life. At first, when I read the first and second paragraphs I thought it was a real documentary, but then later in the chapter, I thought, "Oh, so is this a crime/drama story?" - but one thing for certain, the story and the event was convincing to make me think I was reading a real event that has happened. Even up to now, I still don't know if you were referring to a real event that has happened. This is really good stuff! Good writing and very convincing! Sandie

South Beach Bloodbath (Short Story) - 7/24/2021 10:59:53 AM
I'm trying to figure out if this is a true story, sure reads like one. You call novel, making it fiction (based on the truth?). And it begs a sequel or second chapter because your protagonist (you?) "… knows how it happened." I've lived in this quiet neighborhood, kid friendly, for 38 years. During the period when houses were vacant, the house across the street had a Volkswagen stolen from Rice University, being stripped in the garage. A nine-year-old boy walking home from the nearby elementary school was taken into a vacant house and raped. A female cop shot her female lover on a corner next to their apartment house a block away. When my partner sold her alteration shop to her partner, the woman was robbed and beaten on the head, making her half crazy, roaming the neighborhood, muttering. The apartment house behind my house became a hotbed of drug dealers. Three houses down to the right where he lived with some women, a 14-year-old illegal from Mexico stabbed a nine-year-old girl to death and escaped on a bicycle. Couple of years ago, one house up the street had suspicious renters. Next door, an old guy liked to sit out in his garage in the evenings with the door open. Drive-byers sprayed the house with bullets and killed the old guy as collateral damage. When a neighbor's three pit bulls attacked my dog and one of his kids who let them out pulled the dogs off of him, the guy came by, with a teardrop tattoo in the corner of his eye and told me, "My dogs are territorial. Sorry that my kid let them out. But I'm just fine and can walk the street anytime. But right now, my partner doesn't like her next-door neighbor and her kids. There goes the neighborhood! Ron

South Beach Bloodbath (Short Story) - 7/24/2021 7:56:12 AM
Interesting, David. I am not much of a crime writing fan, but I always find the violence endemic to certain parts of Florida worthy of note. And that is not to say that Florida has any sort of franchise on extremes of illegal behavior, but for some reason Florida is always an interesting topic of vicarious Americana for me. I'll be back to read more, I'm sure.

My Urge to Gratuitous Violence (Short Story) - 11/9/2020 11:17:19 AM
My father was not violent like yours. I could see why if your mother died when you were so young. But when I got on my father's last nerve, he did, once or twice get violent with me. But I deserved it. Like you I was passive violent. Always sticking my nose in where it shouldn't have been and taking chances that later would have considered me to be "accident-prone." In reality my best defense, not cowardice, but carefully considered retreat… Sometimes slow, and sometimes fast, save me from corporal punishment many times when I stepped where the gods had not ordained. But it is about your behavior. Your writing, is provocative and violent in that respect. But I enjoy that kind of well thought out violence over waking up bored with existence every day. And there's nothing better than literary violence to perk one up. One of your steps into that realm would be nice to read here--I didn’t. Ron

Maskateers Assassinated! A Coronavirus Novella (Short Story) - 11/3/2020 8:16:52 AM
Salutations to Author Poet David Arthur Walters. Health, Peace and Wisdom. I have enjoyed the reading of "Maskateers Assassinated! A Coronavirus Novella" ~ for its intriguing subject dealt ~ and for its refined satire. In reverent appreciaton, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Black Cats Matter (Short Story) - 7/11/2020 1:42:21 PM
all cats matter

Black Cats Matter (Short Story) - 7/5/2020 5:14:07 PM
Very nice and interesting story! My cats are my children and I treat them as such.

Black Cats Matter (Short Story) - 7/3/2020 9:23:54 AM
She sure was cute, I can see why you fell for Sheba and wrote this wonderful story of her visit with you. I like black cats the best. I rescued one, one time when it was was coming around our house and attacked by two big dogs who are having fun with her by throwing her up against the wall. There was black fur on the brick wall as evidence. She was only half grown like Sheba. When I interrupted the dogs' fun, she ran around the house and hid under our cars. When I got my wife, the cat had already left to hide under other cars down the street to probably, her home and safety. I never saw those dogs or that cat again. Always dogs running loose, along with cats, in our neighborhood. My wife thought her Lhasa Apso, Toby (Tobias McCracken McMuffin), was lonely, and we had a mouse infestation in our new neighborhood. So, she found a half grown gray and black striped kitten that immediately begin dispatching mice to her delight, even playing with them in front of her, like the dogs had played with the little black one. Anyway before long, she was peeing at the front door wanting to get out at night and was soon discovered to be pregnant. I told my wife, and she agreed, to get rid of the problem at a shelter. For a couple of years after my wife left me (not over pets) the carpet by the front door still stunk to high heaven! Ron

02 Substack Interviewed on Political Prejudice (Article) - 2/14/2025 4:39:45 PM
You're definitely going to run into limited degrees of reasoning and far less levels of accountability in our present AI-driven times. Might get better in the not-too-distant future, might turn into something a lot more horrifying. Enjoyed the thought-provoking read.

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01 Interview with Pubisher Substack;s Intelligence (Article) - 9/5/2024 9:54:55 AM
I had to laugh while reading this. Noticing the repetition in the responses led me to believe that it was artificial intelligence rather than a human being answering your questions. All that I can summarize from the discussion is that all AI is prejudiced according to its creator, a human being. And I think you clearly pointed out that any software that is pretending to be a human being can be hacked and altered to do whatever the originator or hacker wants to do, like the perfect slave responder with a very human voice. Ron

Should I Trust the Police? (Article) - 5/13/2023 12:33:02 PM
Wow! What a nasty situation. I sure hope this guy is all mouth. But you really can't tell. You certainly have given the police enough to investigate and find out if the guy is for real. I don't know what I would do if I were in your position. People have threatened me but not with "a gun to my head." Based on what I hear all the time about mass shooters. This guy seems ripe for coming to the gym with an assault rifle and making good on his claims. And then all the gun toting congressman can send their "prayers and condolences," for your fast recovery if you are still alive. Ron

The Ruination of a Successful Loser (Article) - 2/15/2023 8:31:06 AM
I identify with you because I was alone for many years until I hired someone to take care of me and make sure that I got to work that I began to hate even though I was very good at it until I retired. During those years I was alone I encountered many people, some of whom stayed with me temporarily without paying rent. I enjoyed their company but we didn't become fast friends except for one or two, now thousands of miles away like my family. Some of them dying every day now. Shuffling off this mortal coil. My father, a truck driver wanted me to go to college, but then bragged about the value of being a simple truck driver with many stories of trucking that he never wrote and a love of sports teams that was his avocation until he found golf and casino gambling for jackpots on one armed bandits. Why did I just write this? I don't know, but like you, I write because I find it fun and it makes me happy, even though my books have not sold, so I give them away. You wax quite philosophical and I like that even if you are no philosopher reject. I caught that disease a long time ago and found it much better than religion's repetitive dogma dragging one into scripture after scripture with promise of another life after a miserable life of confessing, praying, giving and cheating on the rules. Ron

The Ruination of a Successful Loser (Article) - 2/8/2023 4:22:41 AM
Hi David, just picked this article up on my e/mails. Good to see you are still on top form---I agree with your thoughts here 100% But I could never express my thoughts like you do. I look back with great pleasure at the fun we used to have on 'UKauthors' and 'Thought Cafe' that seems a long time ago. Hope the sun shines on you again and your undoubted talents. My very best wishes to you... Gerald Finlay--Gerry.

Private Equity Firm Sponsors Health Care Clinic (Article) - 7/10/2022 9:15:47 AM
A great exposé and ways to deal with greedy capitalists don't care about product or service, only ingenious ways of creating profit. I have found that one way to cut through the call center is to send an email through the website, if that's possible. They usually respond positively within a day or two. Ron

Suggestion for Amazon KDP Look Inside feature improvement (Article) - 6/12/2022 10:07:35 AM
My publisher who no one knows about features a look inside that can be altered by a simple request. Here on AD, I post whatever I like of the book. But interesting to watch your discourse with Amazon. And certainly an interesting way to promote your really interesting story that was long forgotten. Ron

Undue Process Aborted (Article) - 5/17/2022 9:21:23 AM
To my knowledge, you are not a politician or a lawyer, but you've made a great case of why the Supreme Court is no longer acting in the benefit of our great democracy. Along with the Senate, artifacts of the old Kingdom our government was modeled after. I've heard there are other leaks as well. A uniform national law protecting abortion would do away with all the state laws that are starting to force women to have to cross state lines to get an abortion in a state where it is legal. The poorest can't afford that. What is lacking in the Supreme Court is a sense of empathy. The Supreme Court is overloaded with ideology and lacks empathy. What the 21st-century needs to solve its problems are not the old ideologies that have failed over and over again when history repeats itself and God is always on the side of the winner, but a whole new perspective. In the long run, and shorter than anyone thinks, women will rule our world, and it will be a much better, less testosterone driven, place. Ron

Criticism of Russian Invasion Censored by Facebook (Article) - 4/16/2022 10:13:32 AM
It's always great to read you because of your far-reaching knowledge and writing ability. It is strange that sometimes those who claim to be advocates for freedom of speech, will still draw the line when it comes to freedom that affects their sensibility. And thank you for some of the blowback I've been getting about Ukraine and its small but effective, Nazi element. And certainly, if he is truly lying about UN defined criminal warfare and genocide, the Russian Ambassador to the Security Council should not only resign or be banished. Hanged by satirical comment. And eventually, come to trial at an international court for war crimes. NATO, and the US, I have been tiptoeing because, their entry into the war would bring nuclear strikes much closer to reality. The US committed a war crime by dropping two nukes on Japan when they couldn't retaliate like we did for December 7, 1941. Incidentally, have you noted that Putin is now whining, "foul," over the rest of the world providing superior defense weapons. He will really wine when missiles start hitting Moscow like they've been hitting Keiv. Ron

Is DocShareTips a pirate site? (Article) - 1/12/2022 10:57:46 AM
Delaney (Support Desk) Jan 5, 2022, 11:32 AM PST Hi David, Thank you for your reply. To clarify, Scribd is not affiliated with DocShare. Scribd can only process DMCA notifications for items hosted on scribd.com or slideshare.net. Best regards, Delaney Copyright, Abuse, & Privacy Specialist Scribd, Inc.

Are You A Computer Toy? (Article) - 8/24/2021 11:59:06 AM
A truly enlightening rant that I am very familiar with. I am constantly fighting with the windmills of upgrade and find them most disturbing because they tend to reduce my productivity rather than increase it, the apparent objective of the powers that be. You can count me among your admirers for your easily read, if wordy, articles on many subjects showing that you are not just a "dumb dancer" but a literary elite. One that I find quite refreshing to read rather than the usual dumbed down pap that constitutes most literature and art to the point of comic book level geared to the shortened attention span of the multi-tasker productivity of none. Firing off less than 150 character thumb texts to an audience of billions. I know of someone like Kristin. He is Richard, he is the nephew of my partner. On occasional times that I have been in his presence, wishing to talk to him. He has always had his nose in one electronic device or another. Barely able to even speak. His plan was to become a computer game coder. Lo and behold, he recently got the highest score on the test all seniors in our great city have to take. He is off to Austin on a full ride. While his parents worry. Afraid the kid has no social maturity at all. I think he will go berserk and flunk out, becoming a country singer. ;-) I must admit that I always welcomed, "just-in-time technology." For I am like the antagonist in that classic novel, Dune. You saw him floating with his brain fed by upgraded electronic devices that kept him alive and in all the spice that he needed. Without all this umbilical cord of electronic and electrical equipment all around me, I would be broke and in a nursing home hell, if not already dead. Ron

Traffic Counts - KDP Community (Article) - 8/19/2021 10:54:33 AM
I did not finish although I got about two thirds through before stopping to give you praise for this article that I can see why some of your articles or stories have such high readership here on AD. Thankfullly, clearly shown to mere bronze lifetime members like me. I thank you for tackling Amazon and revealing some of its elusive, seamy side for the rest of us to ponder. Frankly I don't have the time to enter forums. Not even the Roundtable here very often anymore. And you are dead right about pseudonyms. Forums are like chat rooms where everyone is hiding behind some overblown pen name like the Ling Ding. Mostly introverted underachievers who don't write well, but are easily offended if you find out who they really are. Hiding behind princely names with pauper purses. So far I haven't fallen for the "Pay for View" approach to marketing and so many of the other scams out there that unsuspecting. I'm very grateful for those people will buy my books and then make a review of them that is honest and straightforward. I certainly do like constructive criticism and try to give it to authors and away they will understand. But you are right in pointing out that there are so many crazies who think they have the next great manifesto to spew who will jump on any forum and blast anyone who criticizes them with vile language. Most do not get away with it very long. Keep writing this good stuff and stay out of the Delta crowds, I hear their infectious. ;-) Ron

Traffic Counts - KDP Community (Article) - 8/16/2021 11:46:05 AM
Aloha David, I just noted this 'post' of yours today and although it's always difficult to easily digest over well-articulated 5K words and respond meaningfully with any degree of appropriateness, overall, still there were several things that reached out to tickle my frontal-lobe. First of all (and overall), this article is quite interesting in its examination of the social-credit connections of Amazon (and the People's Republic). Much of it constituted meaningful insights to me. Personally (reference your remark that you do not write from motivation to personally gain), I myself do not write for those reasons either; for me, writing has always been an exercise in therapeutic verbal masturbation. That is, I write so as to get my thoughts down in concrete form and make sense out of my attitudes, feelings and reflections on the human experience. It isn't always easy to do so, given the constant interruptions we scribblers suffer throughout the day (wifely interjections, doggie demands, etc., etc, et-bloody-cetera...thank GHOD we don't have kids!). [I used typewriters for decades before I finally switched to a PC-based WP system, so I am quite experienced in this specific sense.] As for AUTHOR'S DEN, I am of the opinion that it meets my needs perfectly (for the above reasons), although its WYSIWYG software is endlessly frustrating and difficult to use (don't ask...this has to be brief). It's fine for my 'trivial/non-serious' writing exorcistic meanderings. My 'serious' writing occurs in other venues. Before the 'blog' became a standard for such a mixed bag of individuals, we writers took our craft seriously, but the 'blog' has now made everyone a 'writer' and in many cases an 'author'. The overall downside of that is that it has generally dumbed-down the quality of writing across the board and trivialises writing by allowing people who can't even tell the difference between 'your' and 'you're' to regard themselves as esteemed members of the guild. But so much for AUTHOR'S DEN. The larger down-side of all this is that writing by so many bloggers and 'unknown authors' has generally been so disregarded casually valued by others that it takes a near-Herculean talent/effort to rise above the banal dross and flotsam that now so pollutes our rather fluid medium. I have never found any of the 'community forums' of any real help. by the way. It's the same with most common-interest on-line 'forums' for like-minded people. Accessing genuine wisdom, expertise and knowledge therein is a daunting (and grossly time-wasting) process. I suspect the general IQ level of the whole is nothing to write home about, LoL. I hail and applaud your policy of being 'kind' to others and not indulging in the sort of snarky, visceral disemboweling that so many trolls (hiding behind their in-line anonymity) engage in, regardless of their clueless witlessness and nasty dispositions. I hew to the same policy (it's similar in spirit to the Hippocratic Code's injunction to 'First, do no harm...'). Kudos to you for being able to stay on the objective center track, despite any gratuitous nastiness that may be directed antagonistically towards you. Amazon as a whole is in so many ways that gargantuan, heartless and oppressive organisation so many of its detractors allege it is and their use of filter algorithms is an excellent exhibit of this. I personally have utterly given up trying to write meaningful, insightful reviews on books I regard as worthwhile, since quite often they are rejected by that (evil) algorithm used to screen such offerings with the typical 'form-letter' sub-menu flag that says you are violating one of its full page of no-nos (despite no use of scatological language or obviously egregious phraseology), leaving you to stew over what exactly the offensive matter is. It drove me crazy, so I finally stopped attempting to review anything. I have more valuable concerns demanding my time and attention. Regarding Luigi Faccuito and "If you do wrong long enough, wrong seems right", that seems to be a page torn directly from Messers Hitler & Goebbels (apparently the Italians learned much from Hitlerian excesses, eh?) I'll end this here simply because there's too much to really spend the time making comments on, David, but thanks for providing us all with some stimulating material to ruminate upon. [PS: "...follow a few easy steps and 'WALLAH!'". I'm going to assume that is an intentional misstatement intended to amuse, eh?] :))

Random Ramblings Introduction (Article) - 8/11/2021 11:35:38 AM
All the more reason that Amazon should be disabled by Congress before its monopoly takes over everything. I only put my books on Amazon because, for 90% or more of the reading public, they think the only source of books left for them on the Internet is Amazon. I wish the people were more tech savvy and quit doing what their friends are doing lazily, rather than getting some computer smarts on their own. A good example is those who are on Facebook because they think is the only way for them to have a webpage of their own on the Internet. Sad. Ron

The Roots of South Beach Chaos Revealed (Article) - 3/30/2021 1:02:51 PM
I was wondering how things were going for you in South Beach and I see, from your first-hand account, that they are not the way that we perceive them from out here in the hinterlands connected to the "breaking news" of the mainstream media. You see it to be much more of a political struggle than I do. And I didn't know that the primary frolickers were black. From the few shots that were taken of spring breakers, they didn't look to be primarily a black crowd. But I understand if Atlanta had banned freak week, that those revelers would look for somewhere else more accommodating. My concern was for you and the other residents of your neighborhood, since COVID-19 incubates nicely in crowds like that. Recently, many of the northern states have reported increases in the number of infections, probably due to young people taking advantage of spring break to break free from the confines of the pandemic and let off a little steam. Bringing the virus home to grandpa and grandma as a souvenir of their fun times. That's what it was supposed to be about. Preventing the spread of the virus by young people acting irresponsibly like they always do when given the chance. I'm so sorry to hear that your neighborhood was over run with despicable people fleeing from police enforcing a curfew. I'm still shot less and hoping to get one before the novel Corona comes to my neighborhood. But they just opened the floodgates to anyone older than 16, making it fat chance that this guy who is old enough and has an existing condition will ever get one in the crowds of those clamoring to get shot. Ron

Interview With CEO of Failed Writers Site (Article) - 3/10/2021 9:48:23 AM
Yes, my second POD publisher failed quickly because he was extremely ambitious and tried to be everything to everyone to the point where he made promises he couldn't keep like editing my second novel as part of his service. I trusted him and later found out that he did not do any editing at all even after postponing my book's publication for six months. he did introduce me to AD before failing and disappearing about 2003. So I returned to my original publisher, Angela Hoy and her small operation, BookLocker.com. She also publishes WritersWeekly.com an ezine with the greatest circulation of its kind on the Internet. She has challenged Amazon in court when it tried to take over POD publisher and won. And repeatedly pointed out so-called publishers and writing sites that overcharged, or up sold services, as well as outright scams. I have never heard of Helium, but you have told me more than I ever would want to know. Thank you for enlightening me of the continuing dangers on the Internet where we must read, unfortunately, the small print. Ron

These Damn Masks! (Article) - 11/19/2020 2:37:11 AM
You have said it all in your punch line: "They (Atheists) even laugh at the ultimate absurdity, the awful truth that life is a death sentence." It's odd, isn't it, that the more perspicacious you are about Life in this piece, the more you isolate yourself as the ultimate product of the "absurdity" you are a product of, for you are constrained to rely on "reason". If the ancients devised two gods, as you say, one for Good and the other for Evil (Do you mean the Yang and the Yin?) and visualize their playing out - according to you - eons hence in victory for the Good, finding ourselves perhaps at the start of a fresh cycle of combat, how might this drama affect the short span of life each one of us can lay claim to? Hypotheticals can only confuse the case in hand. We know nothing about the au delà. That's a constant. And that fear keeps us harping on some panacea - like those of the existentialists' - to outride the moment at stake. That's probably why the Yi Jing speaks of the myriads of ephemeral lives sacrificed for the churning up of the Jun Tzu (the Superior Being). Don't ask me why? It's as if the Scheme of Things Entire has gone awry and runs rampant wildly, needing to be held back: your image of the Rider on the White Horse ! You are far too intelligent and wise for our small world here. To avoid being absurd, I'd say perhaps abandoning Reason for good might be a solution in the long run. Who cares anyway what happens after we're gone? Let some one else bear the brunt. Is that why the Bhagavad Gita you pinpoint may also have wished for the safety of "detachment" in whatever we do, be it in the act of destruction or joy: "In heat or in cold..." Thanks very much for a well-balanced essay.

These Damn Masks! (Article) - 11/17/2020 10:59:39 AM
A very cogent and wise article about the value of the damned mask. Having been only out of the house once to get my annual flu shot, I have only worn a mask that my caregiver, an expert seamstress sewed for me about a half hour. Our household consists of her and me, and a single tenant who has no visitors. My caregiver greets people all day long with a mask on and requiring masks at her alterations shop. My sister, a very conservative Republican, was very grateful when my caregiver sent her several for her family. It is a wonder that life is progressing as well as it is with the ignorance of the electorate. Some so vehemently believing that their candidate is some kind Savior of everything. We do have a slow-moving government. A blessing when we have such dissension as we've had with a totally inexperienced failed businessman trying to run things for the people by making deals for himself. On the other hand, no one wants our government start giving out freebies to losers and slackers as though they deserved something for nothing. To my mind, everyone would benefit from a shot of intelligence: an inoculation against idiocy. And I would add that an inoculation toward violence as a way of solving problems. Masks work when it comes to limiting the spread of airborne viruses. Like you have said in your article, it's up to everyone of us decide how we are going to use that information and not fly off the handle every time we are questioned why we do what we do. Ron

Standing Up Against Sartre's Wall (Article) - 11/12/2020 11:41:13 AM
Well presented and left with the same questions about whether or not existentialism exists. I have read Camus, starting in high school with The Plague, appropriate today during our pandemic. And other books and articles by him. Also by Sartre. Perhaps the most clear in his writing about the absurdity of most of life and what it means to be an existentialist. I attempted to define the various philosophies in my doctoral dissertation. I find the philosophy of existentialism the simplest and most easy one to believe in because it does not force one do or believe ridiculous, absurd things. I also have read that the speedometer on the Boko Facel Vega Camus was riding in was jammed at something like 160 km per hour, or worse, mph. It was a French car, but may have been made before France adopted the metric system. Ron

On The Useful Worship of Power (Article) - 11/4/2020 3:00:19 PM
Salutations to Author Poet David Arthur Walters, and to All that these words may read. Peace and Wisdom. "On The Useful Worship of Power" reminisces and paints a historic reality that leads the cerebration of our times on the road of social awareness. I have enjoyed the reading of a golden Scroll by a holder of a Quill that soars wisely safe blown by winds of knowledge. In reverent appreciation. Under the Light of Mother Poet, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Accounts Payable - My Life Past Due (Article) - 11/4/2020 8:26:44 AM
Greetings to Author Poet David Arthur Walters, and to All that may read these words. Health, Peace and Wisdom. "Accounts Payable - My Life Past Due", an article written in seven parts, is one that held my attention all the way to the last word. A cerebrating striking composition of art, intellectuality; and satiric literary geniality. Its unique style shows an amalgamation of great minds' Quills fueling the engine of its creativity; all adding to the hues used in this literary painting. The author of "Accounts Payable - My Life Past Due" is a natural recipient for a deserved Pulitzer. This glorious article would be more etchable on the readers mind if it would end on its penultimate part, "MY RECONCILIATION OF ACCOUNTS", thus leaving the last part: "I WAS A FRUSTRATED NEWSPAPER COLUMNIST" to be be expanded to become a another story. I think that if the author considers my suggestion, this article will fly with golden wings. Much gratitude to Author Poet David Arthur Walters for keeping the American Fine Letters and Literature glowing. In reverent appreciation, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Literary Labor (Article) - 9/8/2020 9:31:54 AM
I've always admired your articles and this one is particularly apropos. During the time of the pandemic, we have seen the wealthy gaining more wealth while the essential workers and wage slaves at the lowest echelons, exposed to the Coronavirus every day during their work, are still paid less than a living wage. Others are laid off, indefinitely, until it will be safe to come back to work. Some are already coming back to soon, creating unnecessary outbreaks. The measures by the United States government, primarily through the Federal Reserve manipulation of the money supply, as usual, have provided the most relief for the banks and corporations considered essential to maintain the economy. While the people who spend every dollar they get in the continual rat race we all are in, are cut off or delayed in getting meager funds for bare necessities. Most of us who write are in that category, like you have written, one way or another. Whether it be hard work or luck. You are right about how hard it is to get people to buy a writer's original work when there is so much "free," work available everywhere. The traditional publishing paradigm has broken down and the traditional publishers are losing control and going to the Internet with varying success. Many are closing their doors for good. I say, "good riddance." The big winner in publishing is not a publisher at all, but a simple transaction machine, Amazon. By undercutting competitors' prices and then buying them out, this monopoly seems to be the only place where an author can sell works anymore. And it takes an Internet presence of some substance before an author can reap the benefits of placing his name larger on books than the title. Louis Blanc's ideas bear looking at. Thank you for providing them to us. I have advocated for some time something like the WPA for all of the arts, providing pay for refereed productivity, duly edited and audited to avoid fraud, would enable artisans of all genres to proceed with their lives free from the constant worry about paying the rent, feeding themselves and providing for their families. The whole country would be richer for it and the economy would be much more stable with less unrest. Any writer that achieved fame and prosperity as a result, would leave the structure of the support funds by using income tax analysis. This would require more government workers, more editors and reviewers, auditors. All good paying jobs with benefits. What is wrong with that? If it is government's greatest function to provide safety and security for its citizens, shouldn't financial security outweigh physical security against hypothetical threats when continue financial insecurity leads to unrest? Is investing in "policing" citizens struggling to survive counterproductive? Ron

On Hawaii's Defective Coronavirus Dictatorship (Article) - 7/20/2020 11:28:03 AM
The novel Coronavirus cares not for laws, edicts or other measures that may or may not stand in its way of running through the population like the colds and flus do every year with varying chances of death. But even the most jaundiced public health official will agree that this virus is much more deadly than anything seen in a long time, except perhaps, Ebola. Scientific virologists have yet to figure out exactly how this one propagates or even can be controlled except by the seemingly value of masks and social distancing much greater than the generally thought of 6 feet. The easiest way is not to engage in public activity at all, thereby not coming in contact with the nefarious virus in any way. Since the economy of Hawaii is largely dependent upon tourism, and tourist activity and travel are one of the ways that the Coronavirus has been spread throughout the globe, it does seem wise to shut down tourism, at least for a while, until emergency facilities are able to take the onslaught of cases that can be expected if people go on doing what they normally do, socializing. You have given us quite a lesson on dictatorships. With quite a history from the Romans. But the last paragraph seems to sum up the situation regarding Hawaii. It is nice to see that the numbers for Hawaii are quite low, but according to early predictions for the entire US, flu accounts for about 8000 deaths per year. So far the Coronavirus has accounted for 138,000 and probably reach the predicted amount of 220,000 deaths before it is effectively stopped by a vaccination. You are right about the wealthy elite doing better than the lower echelons of the economy--wage earners and small business operators. While the stock market faltered originally, it has come back nicely because most corporations are considered essential and thereby continue to have most of the monies injected into the economy come to them. The pittance offered to those out of employment or finding their business failing, can do nothing but continue to slide further into poverty. Low-paid essential service workers are the most exposed to the public and therefore have the highest incidence of infection and death. Until we have laws and taxation that is equitable, ordinary working people and ordinary small business people will never win in situations like this. Dictators may dictate, but the virus, like I said before, doesn't care. Probably we shouldn't, either. Just let the sick die early trying to find a hospital or a ventilating machine as a matter of course. Why delay the inevitable death of everyone? Ron

Coronavirus Common Sense & Antisocial Socialism (Article) - 6/5/2020 10:51:30 AM
Great satire. My tired eyes found it a little difficult to follow all of your ins and outs during this ride against that article written by a conservative college leader. I have often warned against the use of "common sense." I prefer, uncommon sense, where the mind is engaged on the particular circumstances and makes decisions based on those circumstances for that individual, not for the easy road of just going along with the program. Ron

My Dear Loving Friend (Poetry) - 8/21/2021 10:11:40 AM
Soulmates' friendship between two people is the most beautiful friendship. Must treasure it. Beautiful write and gorgeous picture! Sandie

My Dear Loving Friend (Poetry) - 8/21/2021 9:58:25 AM
Entirely possible. Pen pals did it with letters. Long-distance lovers did it with telephone calls, so it's entirely possible that we can do it on the Internet. A very lovely poem that I'm sure stirred Theresa's heart. Ron

Mother Charlotte Watches Over Us Still (Poetry) - 2/22/2019 10:58:20 AM
Greetings to Author-Poet David Arthur Walters. I am very impressed and inspired by the works of Author/Poet R.B.C. Walters. The introduction and presentation of this posting did honor the works placed in the posting. This gave me the background ~the inner background~ of the poster. It shows that "good comes from good", and genius is made at home. In gratitude also to Poet Theresa Jodray for her dedicatory poem, "For the Man and Children She Left Behind". I did enjoy the reading of "Mother Charlotte Watches Over Us Still". 02-22-19 Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 8/31/2017 7:35:21 AM
Awesome tale of a man who looked back and learned the lessons of life. Excellent poem.

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 11/18/2013 4:57:05 PM
Wow!

Mother Charlotte Watches Over Us Still (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 10:03:10 AM
Really moving David, a beautiful tribute to your mother. How tragic that a respirator was not given to her. What a beautiful photo of your mother as a child! I love reading your father's poems—extraordinary. And I believe what you believe about the spiritual aspect of the deceased. I've been blessed with a number of visits. How amazing that Theresa was able to find your mother's grave! Just last year, I had my brother's grave marked—what a feeling!

Mother Charlotte Watches Over Us Still (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 4:41:35 PM
I really enjoyed this thanks for sharing!!! I remember you too You're an amazing man :)

Mother Charlotte Watches Over Us Still (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 4:34:24 PM
This is so very dear to my heart David many hugs <3

Mother Charlotte Watches Over Us Still (Poetry) - 5/9/2013 10:36:17 AM
That is quite a story. So much tragedy in your family. But it could've been my mother with two young children. My twin brother was once rushed to be placed in a iron lung, but it turned out to be an infection and not polio, treated by an antibiotic. I have been paralyzed for 50 years and suffered from something very similar to post polio syndrome, declining as I age. I'm so glad you found out information and have the poems to live by. And I do hope that you will be able to publish your father's poems. They are bittersweet. Ron

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 3/3/2013 4:00:06 AM
We are the keepers of the fire We share this togather(-A. Whiterock paiute Sister) peace, and best regards Fakhre Hyder

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 11/18/2012 7:12:07 AM
Glad I found this David--I am impressed you still have that old flair. I thought this was very profound, Gerry,

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 12:48:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem about the catenary arch. I wonder if this has anything to do with the arch between this world and what? a world where we will survive after the foundation of our arches (life) disappears?

Certainly Heroes Must Exist (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 12:29:16 PM
I must clutch at this straw because of the prejudicial predilection that I entertain: that I must have some magnificent purpose here given the stupendous odds against my ever being here in the first place. I guess we have a purpose!

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 9/2/2011 6:10:42 PM
Very well written, reasoned and observed. This is a wonderful depiction of the unregenerate man. He tries to change, but the new man is little better than the old man. Because he looks back? Maybe. When he does, he only sees how little the new man has changed from the old one and the new one turns to salt. That's because man cannot change himself - not much anyway. Sometimes life's changes play a more natural role in changing him somewhat. But inside where change is most desired, he keeps looking back to those things that, by his very nature, he seems to miss. But once a change has been made in him from a source outside of himself, from the Holy Spirit, he finds - he suddenly discovers - a change has been made in him. A change he didn't perform for himself but one that was placed there and engineered by God. Then the man becomes a new creature. One so very different from the old creature. He receives a new nature. One so very different from the old nature. It is then real and permanent. Then he can look back without turning to salt. He can look back with gladness that the old man has finally been made new.

My Good Book (Poetry) - 7/26/2011 8:58:08 PM
what nameth this, thy perfect book?

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 7/26/2011 8:57:13 PM
Yes! I agree! Follow your heart whilst there is still time. regis schilken

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 7/26/2011 8:54:46 PM
No, It is never time. God bless you and your poignant pocems. rege schilken

What Hath God Wrought? (Poetry) - 1/31/2011 5:15:10 PM
Nice poem! Nice Statue! Nice ass! rege

Sisyphus (Poetry) - 6/2/2010 3:53:27 AM
This was interesting DAVE! I enjoyed the long read! Thank you for sharing, Your have a creative mind! I read somewhere in your comment to someone else on a poem, YOUR LOVE LASTED and NOT your Marriage? How is that? With LOVE the Marriage would right, because LOVE OUTLASTED IT...YOUR Heart was touched by another's poem and what you said, touched my heart... I wish you well! To the person you said, you will send it to your 1st love... Blessing, Peace and Love, Warrior SHEE

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 2/13/2010 12:22:14 PM
I love it! True depiction of the fact the we must keep moving forward and don't look back. Blessings...Frances

Derridada (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 7:52:14 PM
wow! I was looking for aristoteles and thought I came upn the longest secret password ever. But of course- dazzling in blue. and maybe not.

Sisyphus (Poetry) - 8/27/2009 10:11:28 PM
ONE COULD EASILY COMPARE SISYPHUS, A 'MYTHICAL GOD', TO THE 'REALITY' OF OUR CREATOR, ALMIGHTY GOD...IF ONE DID NOT KNOW THAT...IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD...AND THAT WORD WAS GOD. THERE WAS AND IS ONLY 'ONE'...AND HE IS 'A JEALOUS GOD' WHO WILL HAVE NO OTHER GOD'S BEFORE HIM. INTERESTING THOUGH...AND DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Sisyphus (Poetry) - 8/27/2009 8:22:33 PM
amazing

Sisyphus (Poetry) - 8/27/2009 2:28:30 PM
What talent! Companion to the Greek thinkers. I like your take on Sysyphus, and look forward to future installments. -gene.

Sisyphus (Poetry) - 8/27/2009 12:42:08 PM
A lot of thought and conviction here David. A mythical work rich and hyperbolized with magnificent imagery and the smell of aether. From what i've read of you, this may well be your masterwork. Blessings ...

Certainly Heroes Must Exist (Poetry) - 6/3/2009 3:24:42 AM
David, This was a wonderful reading for me, I can see this as a screen play on a stage with the main characture in old aged cloak hailing his emotions to these words....or even futuristic... Peace, Love & Inspirations Vickie

What Hath God Wrought? (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 3:02:09 PM
Thanks for the comment and rewrite, Erin. I would pass it on to my dad (R.B.C. Walters), but he passed away last year. He polished his little poems for years and years. I told him the story about Jennifer way back. I just discovered that she did very well in California, and is happily married into one of the most prominent industrial families in the country! David

What Hath God Wrought? (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 12:37:55 AM
As an older poem, I have to think, David, it was/is passionate. Kinda like: so divine viewing it can endure in the city to and fro knows his ride see the As recollect it alas California Or, in a different format: "Jennifer's ass, a mortal man might feel living for he always knows for he takes over or steals the Ass. From the New Collection, of having to live it. And, like an old ass, re-science recurves. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 3:06:16 AM
A well written poem,take care Edwin

What Hath God Wrought? (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 3:05:08 AM
I really enjoy reading this poem,this is excellent,take care Edwin

Antonia (Poetry) - 1/3/2009 4:14:06 AM
Beautiful David. You have a subtle way with your words that resonate and touches one as you read along.

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 9/8/2008 8:09:06 AM
A mysteriously wise tale and, I feel, an invitation to live and move on. Axilea

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 9/8/2008 5:59:52 AM
Good Morning David I Really Enjoyed Reading This Poem On Your Bio Page This Is A Masterful Message of Wisdoms Embraced ~ Embrassé Vickie

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 8/1/2008 8:02:17 AM
Good Morning David, I Haven't Seen The Arch since 1975, I used to see it once a year when I visited My Aunt Elaine & Uncle Joe Every Year. Its Magnificent! I Enjoyed Your Poetic Literature of "St. Louis Arch" Much Love & Happiness To You Embraced ~ Embrassé Vikcie

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 2:27:12 PM
read several of your poems and a story or two. Your an interesting writer but I'm sure you already know that. Mike

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 3:48:18 PM
It is sometimes in our dreams when our feelings ring most true. Thanks for sharing this, David. Leann

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 3/6/2008 2:05:59 PM
Good inspiration reading for a depresses and grieving person like me. Time will heal i know but like to read these poems and about god and death etc and eternal life. Keep up writing inspiration.

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 2/20/2008 8:23:02 AM
An outstanding poem for all ages. Thanks you so much for sharing here, David. Beautiful words and beautiful read. Micke

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 1/3/2008 7:32:36 AM
a deep and meaningful write-well done

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 12/10/2007 5:10:29 PM
I been to that arch and it is a site to behold and thanks for this wonderful pome you were able to put in so much of the arch into it that I can say that you done it will. Richard Swartz

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 12/10/2007 4:44:54 PM
David Wow...what a pome I really like it a lot you paint a picture that leaves a thought that dose not seem to go away I sure would love to have a copy of this pome and yet may love to have a copy of your book with this one it....Grate Write!!!!!

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 11/28/2007 8:46:03 PM
This is a nice piece of work

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 3:50:59 PM
Very interesting work, David. Wonderful metaphor or tragic reality.. either way, it's well written and thought-provoking.

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 12:55:20 PM
Profound stuff, David. Good job.

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 11:17:30 PM
Well now I know where you get your eloquence from. This is a gem and what a keeper for you. Elizabeth

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 3/28/2007 5:07:35 AM
This gem is priceless! Into my library it goes. Give your father, my thanks ... and I give my thanks to you for posting it!

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 3/13/2007 4:51:48 AM
This is wonderful, David. I'm enlightened and gratified that I understood its "message" intuitively. (That is, before I looked it up, meaning of the word, Shekhinah.) I was fortunate to stumble on the poem, since you didn't direct me to it. Shame on you! :) Helga

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 10:07:57 AM
A powerful and compelling poem. Thank you for sharing it, David. Love and peace to you, Regis

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 11:50:28 PM
I love your father's soul..incredible man..ish more men would have his depth.. You are very fortunate to have him as your Dad.. Blessings.. Vesna.)

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 1/31/2007 2:35:47 PM
Such depth and beauty, your father has quite the way with words as does his son. Lovely writing~`*

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 9:31:34 AM
wow.......powerful nice

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 1/27/2007 9:03:59 AM
This one hits between the eyes: P O W E R F U L. Thank you, David, for sharing this graceful, wise work by your Daddy. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 1/27/2007 8:36:26 AM
A humbling honor to read this thunderbolt of eloquence, grace, and revelation. Much respect to R.B.C. Walters for shining the beautiful light of his years through the golden lines of SHEKHINAH. Aberjhani

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 1/27/2007 5:39:32 AM
I have enjoyed the reading of "Shekhinah". Long healthy blissful to the Author of "Shekhinah". Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Shekhinah (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 7:39:52 PM
"and only she was in it" says a lot/ hadn't they been together many years? the reader cannot know for sure

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 1/10/2007 12:37:42 AM
interesting read i think. i have found you via the roundtable...thanks for sharing this one.

My Good Book (Poetry) - 12/31/2006 9:30:15 AM
as the author of a memoir--your words had a familiar ring-i enjoyed reading.

Derridada (Poetry) - 12/6/2006 10:10:21 AM
Exceptional as always David~`*

Derridada (Poetry) - 10/23/2006 10:33:51 PM
Brilliant!! vesna:)

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 9:50:02 AM
I find this poem, emotionally intriguing! It's very good taken literally, and yet, I sense a deeper metaphor, one which I don't quite grasp. Ah, but I like it still.

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 9:42:34 AM
Very informative and well stated poem! Thank you!

Derridada (Poetry) - 10/10/2006 8:16:14 AM
An interesting overview of someone who appeared to be a modern type of renaissance man given to self expression and a singularity of focus. The choice of the word "neoteric" to describe his contemporary origin was refreshing. A word seldom used. Thankyou for this informative prose describing a fascinating character. Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Derridada (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 12:26:18 PM
Read this but didn't capture but a few words....

Derridada (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 12:00:14 PM
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Derridada

Jacques Derrida was the Representative or Great Man of Philosophy ala Victor Cousin, the French eclectic who stole Hegel’s soup: He was post-Modern philosophy’s rock star; postmodern in this sense, that he was a classical philosopher in neoteric garb, a dandy who dazzled and corrupted the youth with skepticism for the authority we necessarily receive at birth whether we like it or not, doubting dogmatic authors who thought they knew everything in truth, but in truth knew absolutely nothing at all, least of all themselves and their gods; wherefore he continued the Socratic project of putting absolute authority to death, picking its metaphysical corpus apart and laying its authors to rest while mourning their passing into the Impossible – Comte’s Great Being, if you prefer – for the disciples of genuine masters must cut the cord and do their own thing, put their own twists and turns and spins on the same old thing; yea, the disciple devours his yogi and sits on his mat, and for Jacques Derrida that was not a hateful project but a painstaking, loving endeavor that would in time reconcile its unwholesomeness with its holy end, the death that seems impossible after waking up time and time again, hence Jackie had the dreams of a boy, of “dreaming of making love, or being a resistance fighter in the last war blowing up bridges or trains,” until Jacques, in his maturity, wanted “one thing only, and that is to lose myself in the orchestra I would form with my sons, heal, bless and seduce the whole world by playing divinely with my sons, produce with them the world’s ecstasy, their creation – I shall accept dying if dying is to sink slowly, yes, into this beloved music.”



St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 10:40:10 AM
i live here so i seldom really see the arch even though it is in front of me every day. great poem...are you from st louis...guess i should go read your profile, shouldn't I?

My Good Book (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 9:34:46 AM
Books are so neat smelly fresh and good looking when we first purchase them but after a while it has it's wear and tear right. I liked this one too.

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 9:33:37 AM
This is well written and I completly follow you here as I am now starting to follow my heart.

Derridada (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 9:32:34 AM
We all have our own way of style.

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 5:37:11 PM
Very effective use of rhyme, David. The simplicity of the scheme you chose gave the piece more impact. ~~Nordette

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 8:01:23 AM
very sad story' but well worth the read 'thank u for sharing anne

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 8/13/2006 12:20:15 PM
Follow your Heart. Not quite yet..but soon very soon I WILL! Love it! This is going into my library Thanks David! Vesna:)

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 8/13/2006 12:18:02 PM
join the club! I hear ya..sigh.. exceptional piece ..says it all.. Vesna

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 7/30/2006 10:40:29 AM
How did I miss this, for this is wonderful dear David~`*

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 6/24/2006 5:01:42 PM
Very good write, David! Yeah, one needn't look back to move forward. Love this write! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 6/9/2006 7:21:46 PM
Enjoyed this write, David. Well-crafted. I have a poem called "Lot's Wife," btw. :-)

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 3:04:24 AM
"It Was Not Time Yet" says it all in one single page. I hope that we can get wise and act before the "BLOOD-STORM FALLS". Thank you for sharing your jewels. L. T. Goslee

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 2:35:10 AM
An outstanding page of history mingling art, hope, positive actions, and materialized dreams, in this poetic Flower scented with essence of wisdom. A true platinum closing lines in "St. Louis Arch": "They say there is no Promised Land. We say Westward Ho!" Gratefully, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 2:17:07 AM
An artistic banquet is served in "My Cold Dutch Wife"... This is a true poetic grand. In gratitude, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Antonia (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 2:09:30 AM
It is always a learning feeding time when I come to Your Holy Den... Nourishment for the mind always abounds. I have enjoyed the reading of "Antonia". In gratitude, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 5/22/2006 12:16:54 PM
"Follow Your Heart" flows under the rhythm of awarenes and wise motion to the lake of harmony. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

My Good Book (Poetry) - 5/22/2006 12:10:51 PM
"My Good Book" took me on an ontological and teleological trip within the cosmos of my soul... "My Good Book" glows like a Sirius. Thank You for posting this treasure, Poet! Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 5/22/2006 12:02:23 PM
Outstanding composition. "Pillar of Salt" is a masterpiece by any standard. I enjoyed this poetic-philosophic accomplishment. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 5/16/2006 10:06:34 AM
This is a true depicting of today's leaders and their actions. This composition gives us the mirror of our society. It is a voice singing to the bells of Justice. I have enjoyed the reading of "It Was Not Time Yet". I salute You, Poet. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 11:35:18 AM
Thanks for this insighftul look and sharing on St. Louis. Love and peace to you, Regis

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 5:51:27 PM
Superb writing dear friend!

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 2/16/2006 11:21:23 AM
Deep, thoughtful, great work. Rhonda

St. Louis Arch (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 1:54:57 PM
Great offering!! Thanks for sharing!! Tinka

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 8:10:57 AM
Very inspirational...

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 12:12:28 PM
A truly inspiring piece! And no wiser advice could be given. Love & Light, Joseph

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 11:27:16 AM
There is a wise message here, David. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace, Regis

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 11:25:56 AM
Thank you for sharing the wisdom echoing within your verses, David. Love and peace, Regis

Follow Your Heart (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 9:44:21 AM
One must always follow their heart this poem is so inspiring.

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 1/1/2006 12:50:54 PM
Strongly emotive and meaningful, David. Happy New Year to you with love and peace, Regis

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 12/19/2005 9:34:16 AM
Thought provoking, excellent deeply moving poem, David! Merry Christmas to you!;-) Eileen

My Cold Dutch Wife (Poetry) - 12/19/2005 8:46:21 AM
MY COLD DUTCH WIFE evokes powerful emotion and spiritual reflection. Despite the nearly overwhelming pain of these lines, more than enough love comes through to communicate the life-saving warmth of grace and hope. Truly Beautiful.

Antonia (Poetry) - 10/20/2005 12:24:55 PM
I remember reading "Monk" a long time ago. Will have to reread, now. And enjoyable poem.

Antonia (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 9:57:41 AM
Thank you for sharing this educational poetic account, David. Love and peace to you. Regis

Antonia (Poetry) - 8/12/2005 9:50:50 AM
My goodness this was powerful dear David Just superb~`*

Antonia (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 9:14:18 PM
A fine work, David, gloomy with monkish ghoulism, while All-Fate's bones smilelessly hovering above the human agony of catastrophe, uncontrolability and loss. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 1:51:45 PM
David, WOW. Don't look back, then--ever onward! Don't let the mistakes of the past keep you down; reflect on them, briefly; learn from them; and then move forward. An excellent, excellent piece you've penned--thank you, Sir! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

My Good Book (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 1:50:13 PM
David, Your soul is an interesting read--enjoyed this one! VERY much. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

My Good Book (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 5:00:08 PM
a most profound glimpse into your soul's inspired book ...

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 6/29/2005 12:35:36 PM
My goodness but you do astound me with your writing~`* I relate to these words

My Good Book (Poetry) - 6/29/2005 12:32:00 PM
I absolutely love this piece dear friend your heart and mind show for all to see their brilliance!!! Exquisite~`*

My Good Book (Poetry) - 6/25/2005 8:51:24 AM
Your wondrous mind works in witty ways to delight the thoughts of those who read you... Eileen

My Good Book (Poetry) - 6/25/2005 8:50:13 AM
No literature quite so profound as the book of one's own life and those pages that keep the soul's company throughout that life. Enjoyed this great poem very much.

Pillar of Salt (Poetry) - 6/21/2005 7:35:01 AM
Profound poem David! Looking back is a two-edged sword isn't it?Nice to read you;-) Eileen

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 6/16/2005 5:15:40 PM
David, A powerful, thought provoking write; there is never a good time. I wish the powers that be were fighting this war and our troops could come home--enough is enough. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. If no one has welcomed you to AD, let me be among the first. You're among friends here.

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 6/8/2005 7:15:23 PM
Powerful and so very heart~felt`*

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 6/4/2005 10:48:26 AM
A powerful statement made with your question posed, David. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 5/26/2005 4:59:10 PM
Whew! I think I was holding my breath all the way through this, David. Such a poignant poem, and much truth to it! We must back our service personal, tho - even if we have nothing good to say (and I don't) about the Dubya. I detest this war. Micke

It Was Not Time Yet (Poetry) - 5/24/2005 3:49:57 PM
Will it ever be the right time?? It never seems to be. It is too late for so many and they have yet to even know. This was a sad write, a truth told, an honest question to ask.... well done!!!