Into the Abyss (Short Story) - 12/28/2006 3:31:30 PM
don't stop!
In the Walls (Short Story) - 7/21/2005 3:38:56 PM
excellent story, bri! well done! :)
In the Walls (part II) (Short Story) - 7/18/2005 2:37:33 PM
excellent story, brian; very well done! bravo!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
In the Walls (part II) (Short Story) - 7/9/2005 4:27:09 AM
Brian...This is intriguing! I'm waitng for the next chapter, eagerly!
Very good work!
In the Walls (part II) (Short Story) - 3/8/2005 8:06:21 PM
Brian, you have an intriguing story started. I think you have detracted from the suspense and urgency by using a passive voice (was having trouble sleeping, decision was being mulled, number were being stretched off, numbers were reading etc) and by giving us too much unimportant information between the real action lines (the part about falling asleep in class before the clock clicked over). I would suggest you work changing to an active voice and cutting unnecessary words, because I think you have a talent for suspense writing buried in these words.
Miles into the Mystery (Poetry) - 1/25/2020 3:26:04 PM
I like the way you have approached "mystery" so well in this ingeniously crafted poem.
Ron
A Shade Under (Poetry) - 1/21/2020 11:27:05 PM
Enjoyed your poetry this evening Brian.
A Shade Under (Poetry) - 1/21/2020 9:37:32 PM
You certainly provide words to awaken thoughts and imagination, Brian. Love and peace to you,
Regis. ☮☮☮☮☮
A Poser (Poetry) - 1/18/2020 1:59:38 PM
"Rescuing old habits" may be not so re-inspiring at all.
Ron
Return to my Census (Poetry) - 1/17/2020 3:05:19 PM
So clear I couldn't come to consensus.
Ron
Unnatural Selection (Poetry) - 7/13/2014 7:52:44 AM
There are certain amount of serendipity involved in unnatural selection. While I'm having trouble fathoming your meaning, I have often written that at the time we stopped hunting and gathering, our species stopped improving with natural selection, and embarked on using technologies correcting genetic deficiencies like myopia and hearing loss, creating a continuing degeneration of the human species by passing on more and more flawed DNA to the next generation. While there are still those with genius, overall human intelligence may be much lower for humans than it was at 10,000 BC.
Ron
Unnatural Selection (Poetry) - 7/12/2014 12:02:38 PM
Your words awaken the thought process, Brian. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis
When in Roam (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 5:50:16 AM
hope your roaming is an adventurous sojourn ...
When in Roam (Poetry) - 6/28/2014 12:40:33 PM
Nicely done,Brian! Welcome back.
When in Roam (Poetry) - 6/26/2014 7:38:12 AM
A lot said in these words. Satirical sarcasm. We work to consume. Because we consume we must work. Many just work through the day and do what the boss says without really working. Just getting along with whatever Rome they are in.
It's a keeper!
Ron
Free From Form (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 10:47:16 AM
That jet black hair and electric smile
Like the ash of a cigarette that brought the cancer
It says it wouldn’t and maybe even believes it didn’t
These riddles and their responses, the first signs
Like knowing you are ill yet not knowing what it is
Feeling like a hypochondriac
Then, when the immune system is spent
It strikes at its worst, takes it all over
The diagnosis finally revealed
In stage 4 it’s terminal
And you have pneumonia
About to go into a coma
No winning this
That Jet black hair and electric smile
Like cancer it waited it out, mostly silent
While it infected the whole
It finally succeeded in its quest, it usually does
Took out the whole body and the whole family
It usually does
Now time to heal, for those that survive
As best we can
Passed Perfect (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 10:45:42 AM
That jet black hair and classic smile
Like the ash of a cigarette that brought the cancer
It says it wouldn’t and maybe even believes it didn’t
These riddles and their responses, the first signs
Like knowing you are ill yet not knowing what it is
Feeling like a hypochondriac
Then, when the immune system is spent
It strikes at its worst, takes it all over
The diagnosis finally revealed
In stage 4 it’s terminal
And you have pneumonia
About to go into a coma
No winning this
That Jet black hair and classic smile
Like cancer it waited it out, mostly silent
While it infected the whole
It finally succeeded in its quest, it usually does
Took out the whole body and the whole family
It usually does
Now time to heal, for those that survive
As best we can
Berth Daze (Poetry) - 10/4/2011 5:30:27 PM
Similar patterns, different outcomes, a world of contrasts.
Axilea
Berth Daze (Poetry) - 10/2/2011 10:14:13 AM
A NEO SPARK OF LIFE..IS IN ITSELF BEAUTIFUL...AWESOME...BUT, WHETHER OR NOT IT REMAINS THAT WAY DEPENDS ON...WHERE IT FALLS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
This and That (Poetry) - 9/27/2011 12:54:32 PM
I read this as I would read the confession of a close friend. That kind of feeling.
Axilea
The Violence of Memory (Poetry) - 9/27/2011 12:51:36 PM
Beautiful concision, effective repetitions ("twenty") and powerful word choice. I like this.
Axilea
The Violence of Memory (Poetry) - 9/23/2011 10:27:36 AM
memory is indeed violent when its prey on its own fears ....
well written, Brian ...
A Lesson in Void (Poetry) - 9/10/2011 12:22:55 PM
ahhwwww, must be lust...i mean love. here's the d you dropped.
Unbended Knee (Poetry) - 9/8/2011 3:29:57 PM
confronting our creative impulses needs to be constantly updated ...
Unbended Knee (Poetry) - 9/8/2011 9:22:37 AM
Stand tall, Brian. You pass the test when you write,
and I look ahead to the work yet to come.
-gene.
Unbended Knee (Poetry) - 9/7/2011 10:48:00 AM
shown...known...again
State-meant (Poetry) - 7/30/2011 6:36:47 AM
you meant this statement as artful introspection ...
State-meant (Poetry) - 7/28/2011 1:36:38 PM
love this! thank you
Show Me a Mesa (Poetry) - 5/31/2011 3:12:25 PM
i see a mesa! looks good. sounded great
Show Me a Mesa (Poetry) - 5/25/2011 7:20:00 AM
I enjoyed the writing style of this -- almost broken into pieces as so many broken hearts. Yet you wrapped with a sense of hope, a new start. Touched me! Thank you!
Trapped in a Sunbeam (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 9:00:25 AM
being suspended in the light has its ups and downs ...
interesting poem, Brian ...
This and That (Poetry) - 6/21/2010 8:08:57 AM
been there, done that
Roadside Resistance (Poetry) - 6/19/2010 7:29:35 AM
quiet deception moves in a progressive manner ...
interesting
Under the Tongue (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 7:12:54 PM
Cute second glance...
Be always safe,
Karen
Under the Tongue (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 1:00:59 AM
Very well written, Brian
Horizon Wireless (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 11:42:41 AM
don't go changing, to try and please....personally, i think the ending could have been happier. I like a happy ending.
In Your Sights (Poetry) - 5/28/2010 4:43:11 PM
When thy true face is
revealed
cunning and fair
to look upon me,
do I dare look away
as see what is not there ...
Horizon Wireless (Poetry) - 5/28/2010 3:27:47 PM
Real lies
Told to the mirror
From an incomplete heart
Mostly made whole
By breaking apart
Horizon Wireless (Poetry) - 5/26/2010 3:50:09 AM
Very nicely done, Brian
12:11 (Poetry) - 4/27/2010 4:41:41 AM
There are chances for choices, there are choices by chance.
This is the sort of introspective honesty that makes me wonder if self discovery is actually a product of someone else's art.
Know what I'm sayin'?
Unnotice (Poetry) - 4/10/2010 12:23:56 PM
...and when you write when you're wrong...what's that like? orange you lucky you're never wrong???
Unnotice (Poetry) - 4/2/2010 2:23:38 PM
Yes. That's true, Brian. Love and peace,
Regis
This Time (Poetry) - 1/21/2010 10:19:08 PM
This makes me think of a lost loved one and speaking to them on the other side, and it really touches me, due to a personal loss of mine. Good poem.
This Time (Poetry) - 1/21/2010 8:08:38 PM
A good poem.Great work.take care
Heartfelt Analogy (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 9:49:03 PM
Very good writing, Brian.
Heartfelt Analogy (Poetry) - 1/6/2010 2:16:41 AM
Very good poem,take care
Revisitor (Poetry) - 11/30/2009 10:33:43 PM
Very cool- deep and to the point.
Revisitor (Poetry) - 11/30/2009 4:51:10 PM
Good to see you're back! (as well as your front)
Revisitor (Poetry) - 11/30/2009 12:32:02 PM
You manage to say so much with just a few words. Take care.
Revisitor (Poetry) - 11/30/2009 11:05:13 AM
Your verses certainly have given me pause for reflection, Brian. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Pen Pals (Poetry) - 8/24/2009 6:21:23 AM
Great idea well written with charm and wit!
Congratulations, Brian!
Itty Bitty Pity Party (Poetry) - 8/18/2009 1:42:14 PM
Cute, got me smiling and hey three pounds is a start huh?
Be always safe,
Karen
Itty Bitty Pity Party (Poetry) - 8/17/2009 7:48:08 AM
i wish i could laugh at myself the way i have at your words. Maybe i could lighten up while i lighten up. fun. thanks.
Itty Bitty Pity Party (Poetry) - 8/17/2009 7:41:33 AM
:) yes i must agree Life is Good Brian!
Did you know that losing those 3 pounds is equivelent to 3 sticks of butter! Yes it surely is...so Yes, Life is good....but you know I love butter & that may not be good :)
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie
Trainwreck of Thought (Poetry) - 8/4/2009 12:03:04 AM
Thoughts and dreams, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
Trainwreck of Thought (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 12:51:57 PM
Sometimes the "sigh" makes all the difference in the world. Enjoyed.
Underbite (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 8:42:11 PM
Indeed, such wisdom and inner truths...
Be always safe,
Karen
Underbite (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 7:27:59 PM
"it's only a game
that can't be won"
indeed it is, Brian ...
Underbite (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 9:34:15 AM
WITH A FRIEND LIKE THIS ONE...ONE NEEDS NO ENEMIES. NEVER SAY NEVER! FOR WITH CHRIST...ALL THINGS ARE POSSIBLE! GOOD WRITE THAT STRONGLY SUPPORTS THE THEME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Underbite (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 7:28:57 AM
interesting rhyme...got lost in it
The Death of Possibility (Poetry) - 7/21/2009 6:31:38 AM
greatness can be found in the deepest pits of an emotional hell
greatness as in emotional wealths...clarity...and your poem takes me in emotion & releases me...
Lovely Poetic Expression Brian
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie
The Death of Possibility (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 3:51:33 PM
ABSOLUTELY...NO WHERE TO GO AT THE BOTTOM...BUT UP. DONE WELL. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The Death of Possibility (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 10:51:05 AM
Always so disheartening when the feeling of hopelessness encompasses. You bring it all to life...
Be always safe,
Karen
Checkpoint Counterpoint (Poetry) - 7/3/2009 11:54:13 AM
very interesting. which "I" are you? the infinite? or the one that ends in dust?
Checkpoint Counterpoint (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 7:49:04 PM
infinite creatures never end, they evolve ... once you overcome fear, it transforms into power ...
Checkpoint Counterpoint (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 10:36:04 AM
I really like that way you make the words serve your purpose.
Pen Pals (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 10:06:34 PM
Well done.
Pen Pals (Poetry) - 6/18/2009 5:57:21 PM
there's a bit of the fool and king in us all ...
i really like this poem, Brian ...
Pen Pals (Poetry) - 6/18/2009 5:00:35 PM
And what a most beautiful lesson to learn and carry with you....
Be always safe,
Karen
Medium - 86% (Poetry) - 6/11/2009 5:24:34 AM
In our weariness we still sow hope. Beautiful pen.
Medium - 86% (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 8:55:05 PM
no size can be 100% large ... except in a poem ...
Medium - 86% (Poetry) - 6/9/2009 2:38:27 AM
Beautiful poem,take care
EDWIN
Filet o' Soul (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 4:58:44 PM
Good poem,I enjoy it,take care
EDWIN
Failure to Lunch (Poetry) - 6/1/2009 4:34:26 PM
A very unique perspective and much insight into the situation....
Be always safe,
Karen
Failure to Lunch (Poetry) - 6/1/2009 11:55:28 AM
Staring into the void is sometimes the only way to get through it. And, indeed, you make the void palpable. Wishing you the best.
Bennett Kremen
Tipping Point (Poetry) - 5/27/2009 6:56:12 PM
an enigmatic conundrum of rhyme and motif ...
Break Water (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 1:55:14 PM
Great Poem
Break Water (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 8:15:42 AM
POWERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Drainage (Poetry) - 5/15/2009 5:59:02 PM
I am quite sure that I am not the only one who can relate to what you express with your verses, Brian. I find this poem very engaging and meaningful. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Drainage (Poetry) - 5/15/2009 4:18:33 PM
You certainly know how to get your point across. No doubt about it, you definitely have that certain something. Sure good to see you again!
Drainage (Poetry) - 5/15/2009 8:31:46 AM
It is a shame we become so cynical as we grow older and have so many different experiences. I can feel the confusion in your write as to can we depend or trust anything anymore.
Mary
Reverently Reeling (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 7:00:09 PM
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Reverently Reeling (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 4:50:05 PM
the gears to this poem sync perfectly ...
Substandards (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 6:56:38 PM
Well put as you allow reality to shine in your favor....
Be always safe,
Karen
Substandards (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 9:08:41 AM
yet, what is there between each veiled smile? perhaps success is harder to be seen when it doesn't flaunt itself ...
Second Helpings (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 7:22:52 PM
no time to ask why, just time to act upon the conjecture ...
Second Helpings (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 12:22:24 PM
Interesting, but marching forward is a better way to be...
Be always safe,
Karen
Spending My Rhyme (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 1:47:50 PM
I enjoy reading this poem,Excellent work,take care
Edwin
Spending My Rhyme (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 6:54:43 AM
you spent you rhyme well, Brian ...,
Spending My Rhyme (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 7:44:25 PM
Best way to be is to be who you are, all else will fall into place.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Spending My Rhyme (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 6:13:06 PM
Just be yourself -your poetry is your signature.
Cynthia
Spending My Rhyme (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 12:52:35 PM
how much did that set you back? even I feel spent.
Spending My Rhyme (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 10:56:13 AM
Work it! :) Be well, Kathy
After Dinner Mint (Poetry) - 4/16/2009 1:55:32 PM
A chance to sit back and enjoy, reaping of the harvest in a way....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Last Supper (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 8:21:30 PM
Gorgeous, Brian, I miss those days of 'innocensed-shriven', too. Love the syllabic tempo, the tie-ins, the ascending absolute, the 'all of harmony creating chaos', ending in a singular! Whew...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
If I Metaphor, Will You Simile? (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 7:45:49 PM
Absolutely, B, in answer to your question in the title. =] As for the write - undone by the imagery - excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
Adrift on a Cycle (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 8:14:01 PM
when adrift in a cycle we unconsciously steer to return to the loss of reasonable doubt
Adrift on a Cycle (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:18:14 AM
A powerful voice and very vivid images of cerebral processes.
Adrift on a Cycle (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 2:31:34 PM
The visuals you produce through this piece are so astounding...
Be always safe,
Karen
Adrift on a Cycle (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:21:16 PM
Once again you provide pause for reflection via what you express in these verses, Brian. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Adrift on a Cycle (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 6:32:26 AM
B,
But oh, the wind in your hair, the freedom in these lines! If you fall off, get back on and try, try again! :) Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
Adrift on a Cycle (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 6:22:31 AM
Interesting indeed...stay safe and well...HUgssss
Scarred Through the Traces (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 3:08:50 PM
Powerfully insightful...
Be always safe,
Karen
Scarred Through the Traces (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 10:25:51 PM
A well written and excellent poem,take care
Edwin
As New Fell the Old Axe (Poetry) - 1/17/2009 7:21:56 PM
"memories like minnows whisked downstream" I like that. sometimes I have difficulty understanding your words. Not here. I "see" what you're saying, but i cant say that I know how you feel. Lucky for me, I can only imagine.
Free From Form (Poetry) - 10/25/2008 7:20:45 PM
much passion emanates from this one ...
Free From Form (Poetry) - 10/24/2008 2:44:58 PM
We shall si.
Free From Form (Poetry) - 10/24/2008 11:34:21 AM
Such deep thoughts well expressed....
Be always safe,
Karen
Free From Form (Poetry) - 10/24/2008 5:23:31 AM
B,
Exquisite lines and shape: reminds me of a bolt of electicity. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
General New Sense (Poetry) - 10/14/2008 6:56:10 PM
love the title! not a bad read either. thanks
General New Sense (Poetry) - 10/14/2008 6:44:05 PM
really like your voicing and sense of direction in this one, Brian ...
Not a Day Over Yesterday (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 6:44:03 AM
definitely a synapse stimulating poem ...
Not a Day Over Yesterday (Poetry) - 9/30/2008 3:57:45 AM
Enjoyed ..thank you dear man..be well and safe...Hugsss
Not a Day Over Yesterday (Poetry) - 9/30/2008 12:26:51 AM
A good poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Not a Day Over Yesterday (Poetry) - 9/29/2008 9:05:19 PM
Well Brian. Your verses gave me pause for thought. I think that is a good thing. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Prison Cellular (Poetry) - 9/23/2008 11:38:43 AM
Great writing..enjoyed dear man...Hugsssss
Prison Cellular (Poetry) - 9/20/2008 8:48:52 PM
Brian,
Doesn't sound like a nice place. Excellent write.
Mary
If it Ain't Broke...You ain't Paying Attention (Poetry) - 9/17/2008 11:49:12 AM
Many fine points brought out in this piece and yes, I too wonder what is yet to come...
Be always safe,
Karen
If it Ain't Broke...You ain't Paying Attention (Poetry) - 9/16/2008 4:54:11 AM
B,
Random thoughts connect to make a powerful statement: and it rhymes, yet! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love,
K.
Not Just Words (Poetry) - 9/13/2008 6:14:08 PM
Very well done..enjoyed...Hugsssss
Not Just Words (Poetry) - 9/9/2008 11:33:05 PM
Fantastic imagery. A passionate piece. Love the first two lines especially.
Sheila
Diving Suitor (Poetry) - 9/8/2008 8:40:21 AM
seems like we're in a state of limbo in this poem ... as always, very unique ...
Diving Suitor (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 10:02:48 PM
Oh, this one is chillingly penned: pray it is fiction! Well done, B.
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
Intuition (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 8:30:03 PM
Your verses give me pause for thought. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Diving Suitor (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 8:28:56 PM
Symbolically dark and compelling verses. I hope you are doing fine. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Intuition (Poetry) - 9/5/2008 11:08:43 PM
indeed, it all comes down to, predetermining what's better ...
Intuition (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 7:41:15 PM
The juxtaposition of 'word' verses tells twoer stories, plus more. Let's smell the world sweet, Brian. When will the world 'turn around'... ?
Yours,
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Frozen to a Boil (Poetry) - 8/26/2008 7:53:19 PM
I like the title best.
Invisible Eyesore (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 8:05:05 PM
living in the Now is the quintessential element in objectivity, reflection and durability ...
well penned, Brian ...
Invisible Eyesore (Poetry) - 8/22/2008 12:12:15 AM
Beautiful Brian, may we share a moment in time now together... here... on the in-breath or the out-breath, we're breathing in this moment... no other, but now.. I'm doing it with you as i type this now, as you will be when you read this now... and it's a present, we need to be in it to see, feel, and know the gift of it, this very special thing binding us all together... no other exists but now... and it's so precious, every other moment we've experienced or are yet to are just a memory, a dream. This one is real. Thank you so much for causing me to celebrate it with you!
All of us united! Shine On!!
Love, Suzie :-D
Spake Ailing (Poetry) - 8/21/2008 12:15:03 PM
very provactive theme..thought provoking, tendrils of dark...liked it alot
Invisible Eyesore (Poetry) - 8/20/2008 8:51:11 AM
i hear you- i see you-- take my hand in friendship
Invisible Eyesore (Poetry) - 8/20/2008 6:07:31 AM
Beautiful poem of someone crying to be heard.
Mary
Never Mind the Doldrums (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 2:06:19 AM
Good poem. I think as well, that in the process of creating art of of pain, good poetry and writing (as well as music for that matter) can also be a gift for humanity. Without holding the mirror of life towards something sublime, life isn't worth living through.
Never Mind the Doldrums (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 6:09:40 PM
who was that masked man??? I hadn't recognized you (and it sounds like that was what you were looking for) Will the REAL brian pellerino please stand up??? someone? anyone?
Never Mind the Doldrums (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 3:20:55 PM
You got my attention, B, wow. Definately understand this - for SURE. I'm here if no one else is - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Never Mind the Doldrums (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 11:21:30 AM
Trying to get people to notice you but not quite knowing how. I think everyone understands this, i know I do. A great write.
Mary
Repast Perfect (Poetry) - 7/17/2008 1:11:44 PM
B,
An excellent write, love the rhyming - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
A Rush to Pause (Poetry) - 7/8/2008 12:06:22 PM
Much truth and wisdom in these carefully chosen words.....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Rush to Pause (Poetry) - 7/8/2008 6:38:40 AM
A nice write to read and ponder over again and again. Good words well said.
Passed Perfect (Poetry) - 5/21/2008 9:42:53 AM
All we have is now. "Passed Perfect" is a perfect present. thanks for the gift. You always know just what to say.
Passed Perfect (Poetry) - 5/21/2008 8:38:48 AM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and it is what's inside that counts most. Beautiful poem is this one.
Passed Perfect (Poetry) - 5/21/2008 5:03:28 AM
B,
In a quandry, ain't you? LOL Sigh - not one of the beautiful people, guess we're destined to be alone. :( Well done -
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
Have missed you - are you okay?
Passed Perfect (Poetry) - 5/20/2008 10:44:37 PM
Oh well, what are you going to do? We can't all be beautiful, but you do bring out many fine facts....
Be always safe,
Karen
Age Appropriated (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 11:48:15 AM
very well said!!
Love Tinka
Age Appropriated (Poetry) - 3/13/2008 6:24:38 PM
So much to say and all quite true, very enlightening...
Be always safe,
Karen
Age Appropriated (Poetry) - 3/13/2008 3:35:38 PM
B,
An excellent, thought provoking write - well done -
(((HUGS))) and love, K. -
Cracked No More (Poetry) - 2/8/2008 11:36:00 PM
I almost saw rote words, than, realized, it's lines of tones.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Cracked No More (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 9:20:20 PM
Imaginative and very well written...
Be always safe,
Karen
Cracked No More (Poetry) - 2/6/2008 10:01:19 PM
perfect...how do you do that?
No Vacancy (Poetry) - 2/6/2008 9:54:22 PM
There's always been space
plenty of room
Do you know your place?
safe to assume
Cracked No More (Poetry) - 2/6/2008 6:49:55 PM
Like how this progressed, B, and the rhyming; well done! Perfect meter!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
No Vacancy (Poetry) - 2/6/2008 12:08:07 AM
Interesting thoughts for one to ponder over, well done....
Be always safe,
Karen
Addition by Submission (Poetry) - 1/30/2008 4:56:18 AM
Excellent writing,enjoyed..stay safe and well...Hugssssssss
Addition by Submission (Poetry) - 1/30/2008 4:35:16 AM
B, beautifully metered, your words dance and sing to my heart! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Addition by Submission (Poetry) - 1/30/2008 4:29:12 AM
brilliant, i love the flow you have created with this poem. I have enjoyed it beginning to the end.
Addition by Submission (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 10:53:23 PM
Ahh, the magic of words. Enjoyed
Life Guard? (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 7:34:18 AM
NO Lifeguard on Duty--write at your own risk.
Thanks for taking soooooo many!
p.s. "no-one" is still there
Life Guard? (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 12:37:22 PM
Sometimes the art or achievement you make is a foundation that awaits its moment. Perhaps visions can be enjoyed by its creator, even when the world isn't yet ready for its author.
Life Guard? (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 12:13:15 PM
Wonderful allegory and metaphor employed here, Brian. This is excellent. Very expressive and evocative, enjoyed immensely. Lovely stuff, indeed.
Mahalo, Kalikiano
A Dream of Keith (Poetry) - 1/24/2008 8:33:24 PM
Beautiful. You've reminded me that doing right by the ones we love is important to do now, when it will mean the most to all, but no less important to us even if they may never know. thank you
A Dream of Keith (Poetry) - 1/24/2008 4:26:02 AM
Wow, B, this is a poignant write...very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Addition by Omission (Poetry) - 1/16/2008 5:39:49 PM
One that leaves one to ponder the price of it all....
Be safe,
Karen
Addition by Omission (Poetry) - 1/16/2008 8:02:33 AM
Thought provoking, B, well done!
(((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
Addition by Subtraction (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 3:00:30 PM
Well said and so artfully displayed. Taking in and letting go, just another phase of living....
Be safe,
Karen
Addition by Subtraction (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 4:17:25 AM
excellent poem, Brian ... i can see growth and maturity in style, versification and motif ...
Pent-up (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 6:35:25 PM
Interesting and very lovely.....
Be safe,
Karen
Brroken (Poetry) - 12/22/2007 4:53:20 AM
ooohh...chilling
Brroken (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 2:55:24 PM
Nice and in time the blossom of Spring will fill the air....
Be safe,
Karen
Brroken (Poetry) - 12/20/2007 1:06:31 PM
aha, you are a summer person;-) Excellent poem Brian, good to see you posting!;-)
Love,
Eileen
Tidal Feats (Poetry) - 12/5/2007 6:23:14 PM
the cycle is complete ... uniquely penned, Brian ...
Tidal Feats (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 4:32:56 PM
A tale out of the Native American book, nicely portrayed...
Be safe,
Karen
Tidal Feats (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 9:57:53 AM
ENjoyed this read!!
Love Tinka
Tidal Feats (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 8:01:16 AM
Your unique perspective is refreshing and enjoyable Brian!
Love,
Eileen
Tastes Like Chicken (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 10:23:02 PM
sometimes the journey of putting all the ingredients together is more fulfilling than actually fulfilling the hunger ...
Tastes Like Chicken (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 10:12:09 PM
Very intriguing! Just the thought alone is enough to make one wonder....
Be safe,
Karen
Tastes Like Chicken (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 8:12:56 PM
gut stirring stuff Brian! I see you like tittillating journey's;-)
ET
Tastes Like Chicken (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 9:11:45 AM
Worth it, indeed, to write such visceral poetry as this: well done, B.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Douglas Owes You One (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 11:45:16 AM
A bit jaded, but then what isn't;-) Excellent poem Brian!
Love,
Eileen
Douglas Owes You One (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 9:02:28 AM
Most interesting write!!
Lvoe Tinka
Douglas Owes You One (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 1:06:48 PM
To me, this sounds like the potential for another 9/11 if we continue to bury our heads.
Kathy
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 11:37:37 PM
Out of focus
out of sorts
out of range
You're in the wind
Well written account of life in stress.
Thank you
Abdul
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 7:39:21 PM
a bitter state of alienation and loss ...
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 7:33:21 PM
A delicately written piece which flows with passion.....
Be safe,
Karen
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 10:23:38 AM
Hoping sentiment can be carried in the wind; and yours is felt by your lost and brings winds of change.
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 8:22:56 AM
Passionate and immediate. This poem makes one sit up.
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:13:55 AM
I had to comb my hair.....
Excellent flow with a great end.
An enjoyavle work to read.
My best regards,
Chris
In the Wind (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 10:29:20 AM
Oooooooooh, I love this one, B. A StormSpinner kind of write: wish I'd penned this one! You pen my feelings exactly.
(((HUGS))) and love, K.
Threadbare (Poetry) - 9/4/2007 7:39:21 PM
Wonderfully written piece, enjoy the analogy.....
Be safe,
Karen
Threadbare (Poetry) - 9/4/2007 6:53:26 PM
great message and classically composed; a masterful transcription of what we all want...just a little understanding behind the words we painfully pen...
ness
Threadbare (Poetry) - 9/4/2007 11:27:53 AM
Brian, the rhyme & rhythm is great in this poem. It's like I've always said, "You own your words and no one can take them away from you." Enjoyed this.
Threadbare (Poetry) - 9/4/2007 10:58:28 AM
A compelling, emotive plea, Brian. It is soul-reaching. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
