A Journey Off The Beaten Path (Short Story) - 8/19/2013 7:34:42 AM
Reminds me of the story I posted recently here, Hitch Bitch. It also reminds me, déjà vu, of an incident that happened to me many years ago.
I finished summer school in early August, 1965. For some reason I thought I had enough gasoline to make it home near Marshfield from my room in Menomonie. As I was cruising slowly through Osseo, my 1957 De Soto started balking and it clearly ran out of gas (no gas gauge). The power steering was off, but I was able, with my paralyzed hands and arms, to horse the car into a gas station that appeared at just the right time on the right. I pulled right up to the pump, completely out of gas.
Although I was frugal, I had completely run out of cash at the end of summer school and was coming home broke. I didn't know what to do, so when the attendant came out to pump my gas, I had to tell him I had no money. I thought quickly and offered him my cheap plastic electric alarm clock as collateral for $2 of gas (about 6 gallons). He agreed easily, so I dug in my belongings I was taking home and found the clock to give to him in exchange for the gasoline. The last thing I said to him was, “I'll be back to pay for the gas later, okay.” He agreed.
Two weeks later my twin brother, Roger, who had graduated in the spring ahead of me because I was delayed by my spinal surgery and paralysis, was being married in Eau Claire. After the wedding, they had to get the wedding presents to our parents house near Marshfield, so I carried them in the cavernous trunk of my Desoto. As I approached Osseo, I remembered my promise and stopped at the station. This time the owner was there, alone. I told him my story and gave him the $2. He looked around and found my clock on top of a refrigerator in the room. I thanked him and was on my way.
The first couple lines are a bit confusing because you said that David had made it all the way to Milwaukee, when he was sidetracked just out of Eau Claire on I-94. I also could edit the story in a few places.
Certainly does have the…ooeeee factor.
Ron
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part I (Short Story) - 7/22/2011 7:30:49 PM
A most engaging and meaningful write, Barbara. Thank you for sharing it. Love and my very best wishes to you,
Regis
Brandy (Short Story) - 7/4/2010 3:29:49 PM
well done
Spring - Part I (Short Story) - 7/3/2010 8:40:11 AM
A very compelling account, Barbie. It makes me sad deep inside. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Home, Sweet Home - Part VI (Short Story) - 6/18/2009 3:15:30 PM
You write so well, Barbie; I will have to read the other chapters in this series! Well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~!
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Par II (Short Story) - 5/24/2009 12:27:14 PM
Moving write...if only all could run so smoothly for transgender out there...this world would be a great place!!
Natalie is one of the lucky ones out there, who has a family that supports her!!
Love Tinka
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part I (Short Story) - 5/23/2009 8:43:19 AM
Thank you for sharing...this was written with so much love and understanding. Only someone who knows and understand could do this...I am so proud to be called a friend of yours!!
I trully enjoyed the read!!
I AM PROUD OF YOU SIS...THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!
Now I need to read part two!!
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 11:33:45 PM
This is an amazing story Barb, you should seek a publisher for it, I really enjoyed reading it, thank you for inviting me to do so
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part I (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 11:24:56 PM
This is very well written, a story of acceptance, that everyone should read, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 10:00:09 PM
I finally got to read this and am very impressed with the sensitivity with which you've tackled this subject. People who are 'different' are so often ridiculed because they are not understood. In this instance, Natalie is fortunate in that she has a supportive family and her transition would be easier but there are many who are not as fortunate and suffer as a result. Nobody has the right to judge and I think your story will help people understand better. An excellent write Barbie. God bless you. Chants
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part I (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 6:59:49 PM
So well written Barbs. You have a real talent. I'm looking forward to reading part 2.
With love Chants
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 6:42:30 PM
Thanks Barbara for inviting me to read this wonderful story!! It is well written and with close-knit events, and feelings and emotions of the struggle of becoming into womanhood. I know you personally and you have come a long way and now becoming the stronger woman you are, and it is good that these feelings have helped you to write a wonderful story.
This story brings to awareness that each one of us is an individual who has our own emotions. I believe that no matter who we are, we are born to this world for a purpose, and no one is a wasted life; and it does not matter we are a man or a woman, our souls inhibits in our outer shell for protection, and yes some men are women in reality inside their bodies, and vice versa.
Many judge us for what they presume us to be on the outside, and that is not right. We should be judged for our individuality regardless of race, and genders, and what we have to offer to this world during our life journeys. By the end of these journeys each one of us will face to go to another level in life, and who knows what our next lives would be. We should all live with kindness and understanding of others, allowing others to their freedom of choice of lives. There is no manual in life, only a journey; so who can decide what is right and what is wrong? It is only a perception of one's person's judgment of another; and in reality no one has the right to judge another, except God Himself because He has made all of us. God places us into this world for a purposes, regardless of who we are, each one of us has something to offer into this world.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing such a wonderful story!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 3:19:16 PM
Barbie, a story which takes out all of the awkwardness of the life of a transsexual and transforms the journey into womanhood in a way of softness and tender emotion...Natalie's transformation, told in the way you've told it, makes for an easy and acceptable understanding for those readers who take the time to listen to a human interest story which delves into turning a "hormone right" to accomodate both mind and body to have a complete whole and happy transsexual...You have struggled with your personal issues on this subject, and those of us who know and love you, have learned just so much about the transsexual. I, for one, have followed your story for many years now, and I am richer in knowledge on this subject. It's good to know you, Barbie...your inner struggle I have seen throughout the years, has come to make you a stronger and loving individual...be who you are...you are beautiful, baby! Be well...
Love,
Sage
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 11:06:59 AM
This is a very good story line Barbara, and I know that the characters & the encounters are drawn from a true experience which makes it all that much more interesting to read. I love true stories.
But more importantly the very substance of human nature, and acceptance over ignorance. It is so very important to realize we all are created to be our very best, whatever that best may be, and I get chills to know stories of lives that have been changed & touched with love to allow a person to be (Or become) thier authentic self. I am proud for you to have courage to be YOU! The Beautiful YOU That Has Never Left You!
Thus is a prime example of "Be Yourself"....and if someone else doesn't approve...well they can stay ignorant....
Life is ment to be enjoyed & experienced from our eyes & our souls voice...not from what a status quo may deem us....Brava!
My Love & Inspirations To You
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Hey...by the way did you ever happen to notice on the lower part of my home page the beautiful person whom is doing the splits?
Take a 2nd look
I fell in love with the message of that photo!! The expressive message I percieved anyway.....
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 10:11:02 AM
A fine story Barbara and yes it would definately encourage and help them to know that they are not alone.
Fee
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part I (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 9:37:07 AM
Hmnnn this sounds like the way things should work in a perfect world if that is what you are trying to create but in reality....
Fee
Natalie - A Journey Into Womanhood - Part III (Short Story) - 5/22/2009 8:08:09 AM
Now THAT is a story, Barbie! WOW! Terrific; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Interview - Part II (Short Story) - 4/20/2009 9:27:51 AM
The second idealised part of the story, which can be appreciated only when read in the context of the first part to which it stands in sharp contrast, emphasises the painfulness of a transsexual person's experiences within the realities of the actual world by way of designing an alternative social response. This, technically, is a strong point of its. Most reviewers have remarked on the "unrealistic" character of the narration. But just this is a very effective literary tool to make us aware of the deficits in understanding and appreciation that still predominate our attitudes in the society of the present.
How to Respect A Transgendered Person/With comments. (Article) - 7/2/2011 4:10:00 AM
Great information, Barbara.....I raised both of my children to be like me....completely without bias against anyone! We are all equal...
Love & Hugs,
Anna
The 12 Steps To Womanhood (Article) - 6/18/2011 3:21:55 PM
Straight and true words, Barbara. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
The Times They Are A Changing (Article) - 12/17/2010 12:08:48 PM
Thank you for this honest and enlightening write, Barbie. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis
Androgen Insensitivity Syndrome (Article) - 12/4/2010 5:02:41 PM
Whew, what a ton of work you must have done to print out all of this information.
This is darn great writing.
Namaste
Tony
The 12 Steps To Womanhood (Article) - 10/1/2010 6:23:24 PM
Barb, Excellent steps to live by.
Always,
Deborah
People Come Into Your Life For A Reason (Article) - 8/23/2010 7:33:42 AM
hahaha... good one... forgive n forget... this article really helps the heart breakers....
Androgen Insensitivity Syndrome (Article) - 7/7/2010 11:29:08 AM
Wow! I have much to learn. Thank you for the lesson via this informative article, Barbie. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Thoughts On Being Transgendered (Article) - 11/25/2007 7:56:21 PM
there is still nothing wrong with being transgered it is really a blessing to be this way and most of us are born this way some of us want to become as real a girl as is currently possible as for myself i do continue to lok for other ways to chnage my sex to the sex that i am suppose to be and that is female more later thers is nothing wrong with wanting to be a girl and or becoming one!
People Come Into Your Life For A Reason (Article) - 10/20/2006 9:56:53 AM
Jeanne Hesprich is not the original author of this. The original author is French and this has been around for several years. While this text has been expounded upon, the basic text and wording is otherwise verbatim.
People Come Into Your Life For A Reason (Article) - 6/21/2006 6:04:27 PM
You Can Bet On It-
I Always Said Wrote My Books: NONE OF US MEET BY CHANCE_
Not Even My Comments Your Article....
TRASK
The 12 Steps To Womanhood (Article) - 3/9/2006 11:18:48 PM
Interesting and intelligent steps to ponder for men and women a like Barb.
Felix
The 12 Steps To Womanhood (Article) - 3/9/2006 3:45:23 PM
Number nine tip sounds extrememly important to me Barbara
And yeh, women should stick at being women....that's what they do best !!....lols
Peter
Thoughts On Being Transgendered (Article) - 2/11/2006 4:51:24 PM
Important statement coming direct from the heart and soul of the transgender. This shows some of the real problems, feelings and emotions of dealing with a very real problem.Well said Barbie.
Felix
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 12/29/2013 8:31:56 PM
Very nice!
Have to admit I often cling to the hearth instead of gettin' out
among 'em, but it is great to hear the happy squeals of children
sledding the long, steep upper section of a drive we share with a neighbor. They have a blast!
You are so right to accent the positive.
Thanks for the lift!
xOx Phyllis xOx
DOCTORS (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 9:58:08 AM
Well I tell ya, I've seen my share of them. I once saw a Physicians Asst. She just got out of school. She wanted to lecture me on the certain system that I was seeing her about. I did not want to listen to it, she got snotty then asked me why I was there. Oh no she didn't. I told her obviously you didn't bother to look into my file regarding my illness, told her off, took my file, and as I was headed out the door, she said, you can't do that (take my file). I said, Yes I can and it sure looks like I am. See ya.... Called my do about her and told him when I return to see HIM I will return my file. She is no longer there. When I have to see a new one, specialist, I remind them, I am your CUSTOMER and if it weren't for my freaking illness and others you wouldn't be getting paid. And plus, I can choose someone else.
My father worked in the medical field and the joke with the doctors were, "you don't want to cure yourself out of a job"....hmmm........
Yeah, it strikes a deep nerve with me.
I'm Just An Old Fashioned Girl (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 6:19:51 PM
I almost felt you are voicing my thoughts, Emotions and reasonings are so similar even though we are born and brought up in different regions. Roseline
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 5:54:48 PM
very original, i love your expressions, So pure and sweet! roseline
And All I Did Was Smile (Poetry) - 8/12/2013 8:39:14 AM
It is always nice to be validated. A fine expressive piece, Barbara. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Living (Poetry) - 9/22/2012 4:22:36 AM
Delightful poetic expression!
Peace, love and blessings,
John Michael Domino
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 5/23/2012 3:10:59 AM
Delightful poem Barbara Lynn. Makes me happy inside.
Are There Any Answers (Or The Tears Of Life Keep Falling) (Poetry) - 4/22/2012 11:15:13 AM
You can and you have and you will !!!
As for the poem as a poem, it is wonderful. Heartrending and
painfully honest and very y o u.
LOVE YOU !!
Phyllis
Are There Any Answers (Or The Tears Of Life Keep Falling) (Poetry) - 3/20/2012 5:32:19 AM
Barbara, Life certainly is not easy and just when we are ready to turn the corner another hindrance pops up. I have found for myself that I ask God for guidance and I try changing my attitude and direction...
Always,
Deborah
Are There Any Answers (Or The Tears Of Life Keep Falling) (Poetry) - 3/19/2012 9:41:22 AM
You speak of others causing your distress. Maybe you need a change of venue and don't need those kinds of influences to keep you down. Rely on your own strength to move you forward. Don't listen to what others say.
Ron
Are There Any Answers (Or The Tears Of Life Keep Falling) (Poetry) - 3/19/2012 8:56:51 AM
We're all feeling our way through life...sometimes it seems like there are far more peaks than vales....the thing is we're all here for a reason and we search throughout our lifetime seeking answers....lots of food for thought...nicely done...
Hugs,
Anna
Are There Any Answers (Or The Tears Of Life Keep Falling) (Poetry) - 3/18/2012 8:27:26 AM
Sadly, the theme you share through your verses here is a timeless and universal one of this life/world, Barbara. Love, strength, and best wishes to you,
Regis
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 8:33:20 PM
You have captured the spirit of childhood in winter. Lovely write. Pax A
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/22/2012 10:40:19 AM
Thank you for these thoughts that remind me of my childhood, Barbara. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 3:10:15 PM
Your words made me feel like a child again, reveling in the snows of New York, sliding down driveways and snow drifts on high. Thanks for bringing me back to the years of old; your descriptive words made my heart feel young once again. A great offering, Barbara.
Joy L. Hale
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 1:02:50 AM
Beautiful words that lifted my heart....Snow brings out the child in all of us...and the sight of sun gleaming and sparkling on a fresh fall of snow is pure bliss!...Here in UK ours has finally disappeared..for the time being at least...
Best wishes, Diana...
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/13/2012 8:26:39 PM
A fresh scent of snow and the day unfolds into
trememdous fun..love the snow too..playing
with Keegan to build a snowman and sled..a snowball battle..
Mommy lost :) Lady Mary Ann
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/13/2012 3:18:32 PM
Well, see Ron, that is what guys are for, is shoveling it so we can get through. LOL
Hugs,
Barbara
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/13/2012 9:21:41 AM
Wonderful thoughts about how snow affects the generations. You left out snow shoveling that occupies the middle years.
Ron
A Winter Day's Life (Poetry) - 2/13/2012 6:07:19 AM
So very true....went sliding with our son and grandson yesterday...and even though it was much colder for us than them...we had a ball acting like we were children once again.
Hugs & Love,
Anna
HATE an acrostic (Poetry) - 2/4/2012 7:04:13 AM
I LOVE IT! WHAT A AWESOME REBUKE FOR HATERS. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Living (Poetry) - 2/4/2012 7:02:15 AM
...ONE DAY AT A TIME...ITS THE ONLY WAY TO DO IT. I AGREE AND ENJOYED THIS READ VERY MUCH. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Living (Poetry) - 2/3/2012 9:38:04 PM
Positively affirming; keep on smiling, Barbara. Thanks for sharing these positive thoughts. Love and best wishes,
Regis
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 1/13/2012 7:55:36 PM
'twas a long time ago. My first radio was a little transistor job that I slept on under my pillow so I could listen without getting yelled at for staying up late. Patrick
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 1/2/2012 10:46:56 AM
I will never forget what a wonderful way you have with words, Barbara Lynn.
I will never forget how you make me laugh and put tears in my eyes at
the very same time.
I will never forget what a talented, loving, intelligent, and resilient person you are.
I will never forget your sensitivity and the way you take time to
reach out.
Love you!
Phyllis
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 12/31/2011 8:06:43 AM
well written memories, Barbara ...
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 12/30/2011 1:36:24 PM
Wonderful memories to flip through now and then, Barbara! The world has changed so much....I don't think kids have as much fun as we used to when we were children! Thoroughly enjoyed your nostalgic poem...
Hugs & Happy New Year,
Anna
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 12/30/2011 4:48:43 AM
A wonderful journey into a better and less complicated time well written and expressed with humour wit and vivid images.
Best wishes
from
Kay
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 12/29/2011 5:59:40 PM
My memories are perhaps somewhat different but I thank you for sharing yours, Barbara. Love and best wishes,
Regis
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 12/29/2011 3:48:49 PM
Barbara, Okay, Had my first pair of saddle shoes in the first grade, hop scotch, jaxes, marbles, board games, cutouts, etc. A long---time ago...great write!
Always,
Deborah
When We Were Kids (Poetry) - 12/29/2011 2:41:31 PM
~Barbara~ Enjoying your poem..memories fun I can relate..dating John in his '57 Ford..red and white.. tried dad's Lucky Strikes !!
Lady Mary Ann Happy New Year!
HATE an acrostic (Poetry) - 12/20/2011 6:11:56 AM
Certainly the opposite of hate, Barbara, well done !
HATE an acrostic (Poetry) - 11/25/2011 5:53:04 AM
Beautifully done, Barbara! I do wish the entire world could read your words and heed them too!
Hugs,
Anna
HATE an acrostic (Poetry) - 11/24/2011 10:47:31 AM
A good way to show the positive alternative, Barbara. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
HATE an acrostic (Poetry) - 11/24/2011 10:17:27 AM
This is a lovely piece of work, Barbara. Happy thanksgiving!
HATE an acrostic (Poetry) - 11/24/2011 9:57:05 AM
seeks like the poem is a LOVE acrostic to me ...
have a fulfilling day ....
Warmth (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 1:45:40 PM
Great Poem, love it, Barbara, so cheerful and my thoughts are some like these too.
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 1:37:47 PM
Yes, i draw people to me too and am the richest girl in the world with all the friends i've made over the years. Good write her, Barbara.
The Robin's Song (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 1:32:43 PM
Yes, i do love those birds and glad i found this poem you mentioned on FB when i wrote and posted mine. Yours is better and so good. We miss them when they leave in the fall.
I was peaceful all summer watching them from the porch rocking chairs, now miss them already. But they'ss be back Springtime. Thanks.
Single Again (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 1:30:33 PM
We all go through it, it's sad but true.
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/29/2011 7:18:13 AM
a wonderful day to aspire to ...
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 8:25:49 PM
You write with such a conviction of a happy heart and plenty of memories safely tucked away...
Be always safe,
Karen
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 6:09:36 PM
So many people live in 'tomorrow.' You describe that place very well, and your tomorrow is mostly a happy place. Wonderful images.
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/22/2011 3:56:26 AM
Lovely uplifting write, beautiful lady! Thanks for sharing...
Hugs,
Anna
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/21/2011 1:43:29 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 8:10:35 AM
A good way to look at life, Barbara. Thank you for sharing these positive thoughts. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Tomorrow (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 7:34:16 AM
Beautiful poetry from a beautiful soul. Missed you.
Bringing peace, love and light to you,
Amber
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/13/2011 8:08:40 AM
Barbara, A family is a family, that is Great!
Always,
Deborah
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/12/2011 4:21:31 PM
A nice poem...so uplifting. Hugs,
Sheila
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/11/2011 7:41:13 AM
your lucky to have such a family who have each-others interests at heart ...
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/11/2011 3:51:32 AM
Uplifting and affectionate!
Friends, especially the ones that you can trust, are such a blessing!
Blessings,
Christine
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/8/2011 8:41:18 PM
Everyone should have the support of friends, good for you and your group, I think it's great.
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 8:10:41 PM
Good for you, Barbara! Love and best wishes,
Regis
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 2:46:38 PM
Just delightful writing, Barbara. What could be better than a group of friends supporting one another? You set the stage beautifully, all who belong have to tow the line or out they go! Great read.
Joy L. Hale
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 11:04:28 AM
Wonderful to have such friends!
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 9:47:54 AM
Well penned Barbie!!
Love Tinka
Family Of Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 9:37:37 AM
Sounds like you found a place where everybody knows your name to steal a line from the song about Cheers...
fee
Making Out (Poetry) - 8/2/2011 4:57:02 AM
Some people have nothing better to do....than judge others....This little verse speaks volumes, Barbara.....
Hugs,
Anna
Do I Know What Its All About? (Poetry) - 8/2/2011 3:50:12 AM
I don't suppose any of us REALLY ever figure out what it's all about, Barbara....but you put me right there beside you...watching the world go by....well done!
Hugs,
Anna
Making Out (Poetry) - 7/30/2011 10:41:05 AM
Barb, I thought making out was kissing...oh, well.
Always,
Deborah
Making Out (Poetry) - 7/30/2011 7:56:46 AM
Succinct and to the point... ...and point well made, Barbara. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Do I Know What Its All About? (Poetry) - 7/29/2011 9:02:20 AM
Substance to reflect upon, Barbara. I'm sure I don't know what it is all about. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
I Really Appreciate This, Daddy (Poetry) - 7/2/2011 11:34:16 PM
Thank you everyone for you support over the last 9 years. I really do appreciate it .. a lot :-)
I Really Appreciate This, Daddy (Poetry) - 7/2/2011 3:12:58 PM
A good example of a father's love.... no matter what!
Joy L. Hale
I Really Appreciate This, Daddy (Poetry) - 7/2/2011 8:08:23 AM
Thank you for sharing this meaningful and heart warming story, Barbara. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
I Really Appreciate This, Daddy (Poetry) - 7/2/2011 4:12:36 AM
Awesome!!!!! Loved this....wish all parents could be so loving and accepting!
Hugs,
Anna
Bitterness And Strife (Poetry) - 6/23/2011 8:48:37 PM
An upheaval is never easy to accept but there seems to be much of this happening all acorss the country. Stay safe...
Be always safe,
Karen
Bitterness And Strife (Poetry) - 6/23/2011 10:03:00 AM
To be uprooted from familiar and what we always believed to be safe and comforting sourroundings shakes our faith in the reality around us. Some bounce back but others never learn to believe again...sad.
fee
Bitterness And Strife (Poetry) - 6/23/2011 9:10:30 AM
Such a sad poem that tells of being "taken away." Well written.
Joy L. Hale
Bitterness And Strife (Poetry) - 6/23/2011 8:09:03 AM
Very succinct and powerfully effective in meaning intended and shared. Love and best wishes to you, Barbara,
Regis
Bitterness And Strife (Poetry) - 6/23/2011 5:25:50 AM
So sad and touching....so much in life is beyond our control..especially when we're children.....
Hugs,
Anna
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 6/6/2011 1:15:35 PM
Barbie, All are great!
Always,
Deborah
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/3/2011 8:54:00 AM
Lovely writing indeed sweet lady...Hugsss
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 6:47:39 PM
Well, sure sounds good to me, God bless...
Be always safe,
Karen
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 4:54:25 PM
I LIKE YOUR DEFINITION...WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 3:44:20 PM
Very well done...
Cheers,
Dan
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 9:08:58 AM
Very meaningfully expressed, Barbara. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 6:15:28 AM
So beautifully said. An example of how we all should live; well done, Barbara. Joy L. Hale
LGBT an acrostic (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 4:06:06 AM
I'm with you Barbara!!!! LGBT forever!!! Heartfelt, meaningful write, sweet lady!
Hugs,
Anna
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/23/2011 12:47:46 PM
They're all great, Barbara, but I'm with Fee....loved the third one especially! Well done...
Hugs,
Anna
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/22/2011 8:29:43 AM
Great Ku's...nice write.
Cheers,
Dan
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/22/2011 7:40:16 AM
well written and smooth on the mind ...
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/22/2011 5:21:41 AM
Very beautiful sweet lady...Hugsss
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/22/2011 3:31:11 AM
nicely done
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/22/2011 3:02:32 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/21/2011 10:59:44 PM
They are all perfect ku's
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/21/2011 8:30:59 PM
beautiful... :)neerja
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/21/2011 5:23:31 PM
I like the last one. I've fallen out of a few trees!!!! Morgan
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/21/2011 5:13:24 PM
Thank you for sharing these bright images and the thoughts that they engender, Barbara. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Haiku x 5 (Poetry) - 5/21/2011 4:33:16 PM
All good ku's but loved the third one the best...
fee
Robbing Hood (Poetry) - 5/17/2011 11:44:50 AM
Amen and Amen!! Not pulling any punches here; hard hitting, put it out there for all to see. Freedom speaking. Joy L. Hale
World Peace (Poetry) - 5/17/2011 11:40:07 AM
A powerful poem... to sit up and take notice, to ponder, to search ones soul. An invigorating read, thanks for submitting. Joy L. Hale
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/9/2011 4:37:58 AM
Some things we all should love, beautifully penned.
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/8/2011 5:24:20 AM
Very beautiful sweet lady...Hugss
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 2:59:02 PM
lot's to love here.~ Morgan
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 12:20:11 PM
Your words are beautiful and you have such empathy!
Blessings,
Christine
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 9:38:31 AM
Your poetry reflects that warm heart Barbie and time will be kind to you.
fee
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 1:26:03 AM
LOVELY!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 12:07:11 PM
Barbie, One can tell that this was
written by your 'warm heart'. Beautiful!
Always,
Deborah
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 11:18:01 AM
A gem of a poem
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 9:42:47 AM
You have expressed lovely and uplifting sentiments, Barbie; thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 4:36:00 AM
A Lovely write and Warm words indeed great poem Laura
Warmth (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 4:15:00 AM
You certainly do have a warm heart, my beautiful friend!!!! You have echoed my sentiments perfectly in your lovely words! Thanks Barbara!
Hugs,
Anna
Single Again (Poetry) - 4/23/2011 5:24:40 PM
Barbie, Be true to thyself and you are!
Always,
Deborah
ALPENA an Acrostic (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:43:56 AM
Sounds like a great place to live! Thanks for sharing, Barbara.
Hugs,
Anna
ALPENA an Acrostic (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 9:43:43 PM
wise words indeed...
peace,
carolyn
ALPENA an Acrostic (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 7:11:58 PM
I definitely agree with George.
Always,
Deborah
ALPENA an Acrostic (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 3:40:10 PM
A great code to live by!
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 3:02:02 PM
Very well done indeed sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugssss
ALPENA an Acrostic (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 1:58:55 PM
If only 49 others were like it.
ALPENA an Acrostic (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 1:15:48 PM
Thank you for sharing this meaningful acrostic which stands as a tribute to the city of Alpena, Barbie. It's funny but this morning, I also wrote an acrostic of six lines; I have not posted it yet. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 4/8/2011 4:28:29 AM
And your priorities are certainly in order, Barbara....friends and family are life's most precious treasures...
Hugs,
Anna
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 6:16:31 PM
Yep, the rest are just things...In the end, love is all that ever mattered anyway.
Take care,
Sherry
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 4:58:38 PM
Barbara, We are rich because of our
friends. They accept us for who we
our...Great Write!
Always,
Deborah
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 4:39:12 PM
To have friends is to have the support of an army in your heart and soul...well done Barbie
fee
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 12:45:51 PM
I have always maintained the true friendship is a treasure. Nicely expressed, Barbara. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
The Richest Girl In The World (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 12:43:11 PM
It is a beautiful thought to realize what matters- moments of friendship keep me going.
John
Our Own Worst Enemy (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 5:29:25 AM
This is sadly truth, Barbara! And it's frightening....We have always been our own worst enemy! Deeply thought-provoking...Well done!
Hugs,
Anna
Our Own Worst Enemy (Poetry) - 3/14/2011 7:10:01 AM
Very sad sweet lady but well written inded as always..Hugsss
Our Own Worst Enemy (Poetry) - 3/14/2011 5:46:24 AM
A very thoughtful piece, Barbara, well penned
Our Own Worst Enemy (Poetry) - 3/12/2011 6:10:15 PM
SAD but a close description of what we have let our world become...despair indeed.
fee
Our Own Worst Enemy (Poetry) - 3/12/2011 10:53:48 AM
I think your question is rhetorical; of course we are our worst enemy, Barbara. Sad but true. Thank you for sharing you thoughts. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Robbing Hood (Poetry) - 3/10/2011 7:52:08 AM
Oh my... I love this wowwwwwww wonderful sweet lady stay safe and well..Hugss
Robbing Hood (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 4:19:17 AM
You are brave and not afraid to speak truth, I've been asking myself the same kind of questions. Powerful voice.
Robbing Hood (Poetry) - 3/8/2011 3:36:46 AM
I had no idea about some of these issues, but I know I am aware of the art programs in schools being taken away & art is so crucial to the minds of everyone as it is in every aspect of life from building cities with creative ideas as well as there is art in baking cakes...
i don't understand why teachers are not valued financially with compensation as they should be they are sculptors & sculptresses of all the youth
and as for the medical this is a travesty also...I agree financially wealthy should have to suffer some sort of participation and not all us underdogs who are the totems and pillars on the bottom
May Love Always Embrace You
Love Vickie
Robbing Hood (Poetry) - 3/7/2011 2:26:36 PM
You have just described a whole lot of politicians from these parts, Barbara. Quite the rant. Thank you for sharing and may wisdom prevail. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 3/7/2011 10:06:35 AM
I sure wish there was a way too, Barbara!!! Life is too short to carry the burden of hatred, bias, etc. on our backs....but sadly, some never "get" this! Well done, my friend.
Hugs,
Anna
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 3/2/2011 4:18:36 PM
Barbara, It starts with the parents...
Great poetry!
Always,
Deborah
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 3/1/2011 7:18:15 PM
a very heartfelt message. Morgan
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 6:08:50 PM
'EVERY KNEE MUST BOW AND EVERY TONGUE CONFESS...' THIS...IS THE ONLY WAY. AND SO...WE CEASE NOT...TO PRAY. 'TIS ALL THAT WE CAN DO. THOUGHT PROVOKING AND STRONG...A TIMELY WORK. THIS IS A KEEPER. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 9:13:12 AM
You have a tender heart of love, I hope we can find that way and very soon.
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 2/25/2011 7:35:25 AM
Oh my..so very touching sweet lady...sighhh...as always wonderful writing ..stay safe and well..Hugss,much love too you...
World Peace (Poetry) - 2/25/2011 6:42:41 AM
A passionate, engaging write, Barbara.
May the Loving Light of Creation bring Peace unto All.
Imagine a planet wherein every Soul is Cherished?
How Divine!
Peace and Bountiful Blessings,
Carolyn
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 2/25/2011 6:37:29 AM
Heartfelt message, Barbara.
Very much enjoyed the read, Poetess,
Carolyn
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 2/25/2011 2:16:51 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
There Must Be A Way (Poetry) - 2/25/2011 2:08:53 AM
I only wish it were true...for the older I get, and the more I watch first my children and now my grandchildren grow up...how can mankind be this way.
fee
World Peace (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 12:13:39 PM
I truly wish that your poem could come to fruitation but sadly I strongly believe mankind will always have wars and it will still come down to...not religion but power that willl put an end to bigotry and all the other reasons we go to war.
fee
World Peace (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 12:01:29 PM
Sadly, you describe the condition of this world/life at this time, Barbara. I do appreciate the solution that you offer and I agree with its premise. Love and best wishes,
Regis
World Peace (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 9:23:53 AM
Well said. Great Write!
World Peace (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 9:05:38 AM
Blessed are the peacemakers, but where are they?
We all need to make peace.
Touching concern.
John
There Shall Be No Sorrow, There Shall Be No Fear (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 1:37:09 PM
... not only is our Lord ever-seeing, but He is also ever-being near to us - which is reason enough to walk head-high, shoulders back - and giving the spirit of fear the old heave-ho! Easier said than done sometimes, but once you get that old demon Fear down in the hole, he's gotta stay there! Good message, Barb! :)) xx
Wisdom (Poetry) - 2/22/2011 10:40:34 AM
Yes Barbara; there certainly is wisdom often in remaining silent. Inane and hurtful words can do untold damage. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
From A Jack To A Queen (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 10:28:59 PM
********** M A R V E L O U S !!! **********
You are one amazing human being, Barbara Lynn Terry.
I could not admire you more!
kk hug-hug kk
'Pea'
From A Jack To A Queen (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 7:25:15 PM
SWEET...LIKE VALENTINE CANDY. GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
From A Jack To A Queen (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 10:42:13 AM
This is a fine love song and tribute to the one you love, Barbara. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 9:39:13 AM
Yes it hurts desperately. A compelling and deeply emotive pen Barbie. My heart is touched and my prayers go out for you.
From A Jack To A Queen (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 9:26:52 AM
Remember that song well and loved the way you used it in this write Barbie.
fee
From A Jack To A Queen (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 6:46:29 AM
Oh my..lovely writing sweet lady..sighhhh...Hugss
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 12:21:50 PM
Been there dine that..I hear ya Barbara.
hugs..
Vesna
Being Human (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 11:44:41 AM
You are right, we are humans . i think its what we do and try toaccomplish is what makes a difference....M
Will I Ever Have Closure (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 11:42:40 AM
Your pain is evident , but by writing about it, I hope it will help to release some of the turmoil within. No one can answer or justify what your mother did. That was her guilt and pain that she thrust upon you for what ever reason she felt with in. It was not you who was to blame. It was her own misgivings and self doubt. Go forward and always look to the light. Talk and express your feelings . It will help. You can't answer the unanswerable...M
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 11:35:02 AM
Filled with deep emotion and angusih. I have been there also , but it was many many years ago. Things do get better with time. Never loose sight of that or give up hope...Blessings to you.. M
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/10/2011 4:59:48 PM
Oh my..I hope you feel better soon sweet lady..my prayers are with you ..sighhh....Hugsss
Love,
Chanti Lace
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 8:53:19 PM
I pray you feel better soon. It will pass.
Love, Mary
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 5:30:00 AM
If I could offer to you Barbie, the experience I have grown from
I would love for you to feel it and that is EMDR therapy.
(google it- EMDR.com aka: Eye Movement Desensitization and Reprocessing)
This organic therapy is so profoundly effective for helping
the brain get "unstuck" be it from trauma or any number of
things which stick us as an individual. EMDR helps us organically
recover our lives & emotional wealth and senses of well being.
The mind gets stuck in an experience (which differs for us all)
and when it gets stuck it remains there...reliving...over & over
& over again...and in this can lead to depression(s), anxiety, irrational & unexplainable fears, phobias...you name it.
And through reading you dear den sister & knowing you I really
would love for you to reach out and find a EMDR therapist-its
like dreaming with your eyes open. Your brain does all the work
with the guide & assistance of the EMDR specialist. The brain wants
to be healthy & we all deserve it...as you do too!! This could be
your chance at recovery & the healing elements to help you feel complete inside your heart & soul where you can also really experience
the goodness & the beauty of being YOU!! The Healthy & Emotionally Wealthy YOU! EMDR heals emotional pain...
May Love's Bounty Always Embrace
& Reveal YOU to know the Joy of Happiness
Love Always
Vickie
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 2:33:15 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAY GOD BLESS YOU, BARBARA!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/7/2011 7:25:23 PM
You are resilient, Barbara, although you have been traumatized in such an unfair way. How brilliant of you to turn pain into your art.
Blessings,
Christine
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/7/2011 5:08:18 PM
I have first hand experience with this, Barbara. One of the most intense examples is the early departure of my mother from this life/world because she just could not take it any more. Sadly, I have many other example. I can understand and empathize. Love, peace, healing, and best wishes to you,
Regis
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/7/2011 4:01:35 PM
Barb, Yes, you are right on all counts and John is also
right about the options that are out there...they are
worth it. I've been there.
Always,
Deborah
It Hurts (Poetry) - 2/7/2011 2:10:04 PM
I have been close to several people who suffered from depression of the sort you describe. It is an on going journey to find good places to be.
We all seem to find a way to hurt, strange thing about people.
But this depression is a condition that needs healing. Lots of options out there that I know take so much time to try- but it is worth it.
Tough poem- tells it like it is.
John
Will I Ever Have Closure (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 6:01:20 AM
A very honest, painful and revealing piece of writing...I think that you can possibly still be 'whole and complete', because we all have that power inside of us to heal. I know it is not easy but with a shift in thinking it is more than possible. It is about 'letting go' sometimes..of the pain and heartache that keep us anchored in our world of sadness and grief.
My short story/poem Grandpa deals with a similar theme...of sometimes speaking the words for ourselves that the person who has died couldn't say,...or sometimes even know...
I wish you Peace and Happiness...
Love and Hugs, Diana...
Will I Ever Have Closure (Poetry) - 1/27/2011 2:50:30 PM
I am sorry about others sins of the past. I think you have in you to rebound.
Peace and Love
Tony
Will I Ever Have Closure (Poetry) - 1/27/2011 2:20:53 PM
Barbara, there are undeniable forces at work inside of each one of us. You followed your truth and were so brave and authentic, bless you! I am sure I am one of many many people when I say I love you just the way you are, unconditionally. I'm sure your mother feels that way now, looking down, she must be wanting all good things in life and love for you. She must now be proud.
Be well,
Christine
Will I Ever Have Closure (Poetry) - 1/27/2011 10:12:26 AM
Honest, harsh, and real, Barbara; and sadly, I am sure many can relate to not having "closure" on so many levels. Thank you for sharing this meaningful account born of painful experiences. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The Luckiest Generation (Poetry) - 1/22/2011 9:08:33 AM
Thank you, Barbara, for bringing back this major part of our lives and bringing a smile to my face in remembrance of it all. No, I have not forgotten any of it and I remember it all exactly as you stated it.
The Luckiest Generation (Poetry) - 1/21/2011 10:05:49 AM
A good read and glimpse into the past...
The Luckiest Generation (Poetry) - 1/21/2011 7:40:20 AM
Rich in insightful reflections and entertaining Barbara!
Blessings,
Christine
The Luckiest Generation (Poetry) - 1/20/2011 9:27:53 PM
Walking, hoping, and skipping down the rocky road of life and coming out smiling, great piece...
Be always safe,
Karen
The Luckiest Generation (Poetry) - 1/20/2011 12:14:19 PM
Thank you for sharing this walk down the memory trail, Barbara. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The Luckiest Generation (Poetry) - 1/20/2011 9:59:03 AM
Yes that is all true, Barbara. And they were great times too. But those great times can return if people would just care. Your a great writer.
Peace and Love
Tony
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/18/2011 12:30:59 PM
You are so wise, Barbara Lynn Terry.
Your writing shows how beautiful you are, inside and out!
It is a privilege to know you.
All the best, all the time,
xOx Phyllis xOx
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/14/2011 5:51:03 AM
We were created imperfect....destined to make mistakes.....and we've sure got that part nailed! Sound advice here, Barbara! WEll done...
Hugs,
Anna
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/12/2011 11:48:19 PM
Inspiring poetry, enjoyed it.
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/12/2011 2:26:42 PM
Barbara, I'm trying...thank-you!
Always,
Deborah
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/12/2011 1:29:17 PM
Well amen to all that Barbie! Well penned.
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/12/2011 9:15:35 AM
nice poem...and being human means the freedom to make spelling mistakes like:
"expendible" instead of "expendable". cheers, :-)
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 9:38:02 PM
Being human means we were born flawed and need to learn how to rise above, beautiful...
Be always safe,
Karen
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 7:27:12 PM
Wonderful writing sweet lady..sure have missed you and your wonderful writing..sorry I haven't been commenting real busy with family matters ..but I did post one the other day..keep smiling always OK..Hugsss
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 5:30:11 PM
Being human is how we were born
so make the best of it while you can
Sound advice well-shared, Barbara. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 4:42:20 PM
Another outstanding writing Barbara Lynn.
PEACE and LOVE
TONY
Being Human (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 4:27:20 PM
Those last two lines are good advise.
