A Night Of Forever (Poetry) - 12/19/2023 3:27:47 PM
I have missed your words...memories can haunt when you least expect them.
A Snapshot In Time (Poetry) - 5/2/2021 6:47:43 AM
Love this! Brings back memories of youthful love when everything was so simple.
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 5/2/2021 6:42:58 AM
Choices... sometime we chose the wrong door. At least you chose one.
I always love reading what you write. Miss you my fiend.
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 3/27/2019 4:12:17 PM
Outstanding! Yup you certantly had me going until his hand reached for th door knob. Then I turned away.
Eyes Of March (Poetry) - 6/22/2018 10:27:57 AM
Oh a Gumby poem! Oh how he makes me smile!
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 4/8/2013 5:06:17 PM
Such a beautiful, sorrowful poem. Anxious to read much more of Edward's poetry.
Doing The Dishes (Poetry) - 11/26/2011 4:17:12 PM
and the truth never sets you free... beautiful write Ed.
Photograph (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 3:35:44 PM
Ed, I have been gone too long. I have missed these great romantic writes that speak of the honesty of love gone south. There is so much missing in between the lines one only wishes to see more. It is true about the picture being a picture but the lens does see and capture what was in the intent of that image and it is there to reverberate in his heart for all time.
Oysters Of Pearl (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 3:29:02 PM
Beautiful even hidden within the context of Gumby
Inverted Images (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 3:25:25 PM
Another masterpiece write from you, Ed. This write is like an introspection that rakes out the debris in our soul as remembered by our heart.
A Silly Little Lust Song (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 8:53:48 AM
WOW! Now that's a love song.
I can see him with all his pomp and innocence,
his little Gumbacious body writhing to the rhythms
expressing his wee gum heart - a lucky gumgurl indeed!
This was great Edward - enjoyed.
richard
From Here To Gumternity (Poetry) - 10/30/2009 7:25:06 AM
I like that image of 'dust disbanding', very unique.
"Unconditional love" ... it seems almost archaic anymore
in this freakin' world. If you can find it, you are truly
a blessed humanoid. Really well written Edward.
Light and Wisdom ...
r
Inverted Images (Poetry) - 9/29/2009 9:51:32 AM
Excellent and moving.
One of those introspective type
writes that will stay with me all day.
Being Christian all my life,
well ... since I was six, I refuse
to doubt that Christ is real, that heaven
is real, and that the work He accomplished
for His creation is more real than I could ever
imagine. Blessings ...
A Stitch In Time Gives a Bad Rhyme (Poetry) - 7/7/2009 5:47:53 PM
Cleverly concocted and shared; thank you, Edward. Love and peace,
Regis
The Mountains Of Empty Peaks (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 9:06:17 AM
I can surely relate to this Edward, and you delineate the differences nicely, a universal challenge. The Spirit is too often neglected to satiate the flesh.
Blessings ...
Can Gumbula Come to Fee's Party (Poetry) - 10/31/2008 4:48:28 AM
Yeah Gumby, get up offa tha thing and hit the dance floor. A party wouldn't be a party without you little green man.
Can Gumbula Come to Fee's Party (Poetry) - 10/31/2008 4:33:13 AM
Calamari all squishy and ripe
Maybe even some rancid tripe
Blood type A, B and O packed in ice
Will make this party special and nice
Thank God you can make it - the snack list was abysmally lacking! And nice to see you again, Gumby!
Can Gumbula Come to Fee's Party (Poetry) - 10/30/2008 6:21:30 PM
Adorable, nice to see Gumby again!! He's been missed, as have you! Very well penned, Edward; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much lov, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Saving this one!
Can Gumbula Come to Fee's Party (Poetry) - 10/30/2008 4:05:03 PM
Oh this is too cute dear man...well done indeed sure I don't think sweet Fee would mine its going to be so much funnnn..see ya there...be well and safe...Hugsss
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 5:26:55 PM
Oh my,very touching indeed...well done dear man..Hugsssssssss
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 1:03:21 PM
How intensely sad this is, so emotionally motivating, God bless....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 5:48:23 AM
Never read anything more intense and heart breaking Ed. Stunning work from a deep heart.
The Lady or the Tiger (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 5:35:27 AM
Fantastic take on the Lady and the Tiger. Another one of those, "you decide". Well done.
Mary
Aging The Vinegar (Poetry) - 7/30/2008 6:25:42 PM
You know what...I really like this poem.. the voice...is filled with an honest reflection
From a Poem to a Letter (Poetry) - 7/30/2008 11:47:04 AM
Outstanding work like always!!
Love Tinka
From a Poem to a Letter (Poetry) - 7/30/2008 8:13:42 AM
Outstanding poetic expressions I have enjoyed through the lines of "From a Poem to a Letter".
I salute You, poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
From a Poem to a Letter (Poetry) - 7/29/2008 9:50:23 PM
Sometimes..there is no choice of letting go...esp..when loving that person has become the air we breathe.
If Universal Law Were Traversed (Poetry) - 6/20/2008 7:37:15 AM
WOW!
"Being only satiated by a partial eclipse"
Intriguing imagery throughout. This one above vellicated my synapses. What a thought process here Edward. Intelligent, quizzical, frustrated, eager for change ...
everything in this bloody universe is subject to entropy and the second law of thermodynamics. I am continually reminded of this when I try to polish the rust off my soul.
Richard
Tripping The Zone (Poetry) - 6/14/2008 3:56:04 PM
I hope she reads this...and its nice to see your heart twinkle! (you're still alive!)
Tripping The Zone (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 7:19:22 AM
What a wit Edward.
Your work always touches me.
And your love of Gumby is quite unique.
You have a child inside of you that tickles me pink.
Slightly irreverent, strong, somewhat cynical, talented, devil may care, romantic ... good stuff ... thanks!
Richard
They (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 4:24:22 PM
I feel the pain that inspired this well expressed write! THEY, will never now what you are feeling, unless THEY have experienced that kind of pain! SC
They (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 6:42:25 PM
The irrelevency of "They" is made quiet clear. All that matters are those who share a common bond that one truly cares about...
Be safe,
Karen
They (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 7:10:03 AM
Quite profound, my friend. They are not you, nor I, and each of us, must truly find our own way.
They (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 3:53:51 AM
"They" are experience . . .
They (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 3:48:27 AM
Powerful write, Edward; who are these people to tell us how to live our lives?? Who died and made THEM God???? They should look at their OWN lives instead of meddling in the lives of others!! People like that really bug me!!
Excellent, thought provoking write, Edward; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
They (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 3:47:20 AM
Ed this hit my heart like a brick! Better to have loved and lost is BS. This is gut honest and written as only one who has loved completely and lost could write.
They (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 3:37:46 AM
Wonderful profound, meaningful and artistic, "They" glows.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/16/2007 6:28:36 PM
because society is based on greed and the worship of material things ... the celebration of individuality and its legacy is replaced by personality worship ... unfortunately, the spirit of Christmas resides in an empty gift box ...
well written poetic query ...
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/16/2007 12:48:27 AM
Very clever write Grumby...it is true that only a chosen few can recognize others for what is possessed inside. Great work.
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 11:39:52 AM
"So why aren’t people treated like Christmas presents?
paying less attention to the wrap and more to the Essence "
Good question my friend!!
Love Tinka
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 3:59:44 AM
A very good question at the end, Gumby.
I saw you on the SNL Christmas Special last night, and you were very good!
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 9:48:23 PM
I am liftin my rootbeer mug to you in a salute! You are truly a wise Little Green Dude! Wishin Ya a Merry Whatever! SC
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 9:48:01 PM
Wonderful question? Leaves one to ponder and speculate, but never finding the answers, right? God bless you and try to have a very Merry Christmas. After all it is Jesus's birthday, isn't it.....
Be safe,
Karen
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 3:21:42 PM
Retailers round the world can go to Hell
Cause I won't be ringing their Cash bell" . . . . This mind-set sir, is mixed in with my own too.
In my mind Edward, this write is a cleverly cynical twist on 'The Night Before Christmas'. Your heart is showing beautifully, and your inimitable wit is as sharp and satisfying as ever. The analogy you create between presents and people is brilliant!
Have a blessed holiday season, and all the best to you in the coming year.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 2:24:10 PM
THAT, my kind sir is the sixty-four dollar question . . .
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 1:42:55 PM
Great write, Gumby, with a super message therein! Great job; bravo!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 12:27:13 PM
Amen, Gumby, Amen.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
We're too caught up in the commercialism, we've forgotten the Real Reason for the Season. Excellent.
A Very GRumby Christmas (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 11:52:08 AM
Blessed be the author of this aliment for the souls, and sustenance for the intellect. Art, knowledge and wisdom met to develop the imagery of this composition.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 7:50:25 AM
Ed, this is your best! Outstanding!!!!!
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 11:38:05 AM
hahahahaha Rd. You are tooooooooooooooomuch! Love it!
Pee Wee you just have to give Ed a gnome award for humor, if nothing else;-)!
Love,
Eileen
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 6:38:57 AM
Enjoyed this one...thanks for sharing YOUR inspiration!!
That little guy on your pic looks very much like my hubby when brandy-headed!!
Love Tinka
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 12:16:21 AM
I love this, Ed...Shades of Adobe. Fantastic work, old friend.
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:20:54 PM
Playful little buggers aren't they...?
Enjoyed this little Gnome of a tale~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 5:54:32 PM
So cute and extremelly imaginative, I just love it! May the Gnomes be with you.....
Be safe,
Karen
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 12:32:39 PM
Totally entertaining Edward. Your inimitable wit is the cornerstone of this ingenious write. Blessings ...
Richard
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 10:50:33 AM
Gnomes now have my deepest respect,, and they are sooo adorable,,,
I bet they could teach us many good things of the earth.
Christine
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 7:58:51 AM
Time for the Gnome rebellion, what a write you really made me sympathetic with the little gnomes.
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 7:15:25 AM
Adorable write, Ed; enjoyed~ Thanks for the smiles! Very well penned; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
All The Kings Men (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:24:06 AM
what an open tragically haunted write; the images are so stark and quiet. .having read this, there are no real words to express for my part, only real emotions.
gutted. simply gutted.
ness
A Little Gnome-enclature For Mr. Ed (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:06:43 AM
Wow! I'm glad you were inspired to be their advocate, and you have shed much light, on their plight. Although I think I've now reached a truce with them, I best lecture my dogs again about that leg lifting. I don't want a gnome riot on my hands - our home is now completely surrounded!
Who Am I (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 8:43:04 AM
Reading into the influences of my own recent write,"Shakespearean Sound", I sit here knowing we both are not far off!
Just different ways of getting there, trying to know who we are...
Excellent~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
A Night Of Fright and Flight (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 7:48:02 AM
Poor Sweet Baby! I am so sorry about yore loss! You and yore great talent will be missed. Sendin you love and a hug! SC
A Night Of Fright and Flight (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 5:03:54 AM
So very sorry to hear about your family loss, my friend. And sorry you won't be at the Ball, but you've left us quite a chilling tale.
A Night Of Fright and Flight (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 4:09:28 AM
Ed I'm so deeply sorry. Take care of yourself and your family. Blessings to you and to them. You are so masterful with this genre.
A Night Of Fright and Flight (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 11:05:40 PM
Condolences for the loss Ed. My thoughts and prayers are with you. A gripping poem, you leave us with, masterfully written,photo a perfect match...Take care...
Love,
Eileen
A Night Of Fright and Flight (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 9:07:50 PM
(((Ed)))
I'm sorry for your loss. Need anything, let me know. (((HUGS))) love and prayers.
A powerful pen you leave us with: excellent.
Karla. :(
A Night Of Fright and Flight (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 8:31:23 PM
So very sorry to hear! May God bless and keep you safe and you will be kept in my every thought and prayer. Godspeed and am deeply saddened for your loss....
Be safe,
Karen
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 12:17:59 PM
YOu are full of joy!
I must employ!
This Halloween Gala will be fun
as some lucky lady has won
a heart so strong!
Warm hugs, "The Black Widow Spider" Sheila oox
Attending the party and bringing along ghouly friends!
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 10:48:18 AM
Wow! what a hunk you are Sir Vampman,I'm glad this Queen is still alive to surprise you at the ball with another downfall;-) But I do love you Sir Vampman, your writing is so exceptional I hate to see it end...
Love,
QE
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 6:59:24 AM
OOOOOOOO Dark Master! I want to tango with you and we shall see who gets the first bite! OOOOOOOO YUMMY! Evil Slut Clown
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 4:30:57 AM
WOW! How are you, you old Dark Master, you? It seems like we haven't chatted in centuries. And I hate to say it, you do look a tad - tattered. May I suggest one of the upscale fashion designer shops for your new cape? Old Edvard will be dressed to the Nines, and you surely don't want him to show you up. (And if you dress up, I can probably sell dance tickets to the ladies for you, too!)
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 3:22:41 AM
Dark Master you honor us with your evil presence. You have been too long absent from such festivities, would that your pale and beautiful Angelina could be here with us once again. I promise you the finest wine the most willing prey. Welcome Darlink Dark One, to the ball.
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 3:13:45 AM
Ed,
By the looks of that picture I see the stake is rare. I prefer my steak well done and no ketchup for dressing. I'll settle for no less than A-1. Enjoyed the mixture of chilling, passion and humor. Excellent write. Blessings Always, Paul.
PS. Sorry about the blessings I know you undead don't want to hear that kind of talk. (lol)
The Ball Tolls For Whom ---- La Belle's Ball (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 6:17:57 PM
Reaaaaally trying not to run screaming in fear...this is a terrifying dark write...but the ending has me ROTF...well done, Ed. You can keep the arachnids, though *cringe*.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Gumby's Getting Ready For The Ball (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 6:21:23 PM
How ingenious, how artful! Poor Gumby and his misfortune, all to find his way to the ball....
Be safe,
Karen
Drifting (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 8:31:20 AM
So AWESOME! Beautiful thoughts from the mind of a beautiful man! SC
Gumby's Getting Ready For The Ball (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 5:52:04 AM
Well poor green baby!! Do take a bath Gumby before the ball you stink worse than the undead! Welcome to the ball Darlink.
Gumby's Getting Ready For The Ball (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 3:40:01 AM
What an adventure, Gumby! And I will surely look for you at the Ball - at a discrete distance, of course!
Word Has Arrived Of a Coming Ball --LaBelle (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 10:14:42 PM
Okie Dokie Gumby! I shall grab you with my hot little hands and watch you melt and run through my fingers! I so love playin with playdough! SC
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 10:01:23 PM
OOOOOOOO This was to sigh for! Passionate, manly poetry, blended with tenderness! Pure catnip to a woman! SC
Gumby's Getting Ready For The Ball (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 9:53:53 PM
This was a hoot from beginnin to end! This was truly an inspired Hallmark moment! You are truly an intriguing fellow. SC
Word Has Arrived Of a Coming Ball --LaBelle (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 3:16:34 PM
Ed reading you at halloween brings back fond memories;-) The greatest vampire rises again! Enjoy the ball my friend you are sure to be defanged (ooops I meant entertained!;-)
Love,
ET
Doing The Dishes (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 2:57:28 PM
So beautifully passionate! I could feel the smolderin heat! OOOOOOO Sizzle, Sizzle! SC
Contact Beyond Shadow (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 2:53:15 PM
WOW! You are truly intense, broodin and very passionate! A true Poetry Man! SC
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 2:49:40 PM
So intense and spellbindin! Through yore words, I experienced the emotions of this man! This was a wonderful write! SC
Word Has Arrived Of a Coming Ball --LaBelle (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 8:31:55 AM
Man has exceeded us as the Monsters
Nothing we could do, would compare to what he has done
to his own kind
How so very sadly true. So ye best come to the Ball, and get some Revenge!
Word Has Arrived Of a Coming Ball --LaBelle (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 8:00:32 AM
Oh come on Baby, live a little!! Will watch for you at the ball, this is a chilling poem Ed, even to an undead Queen of the Night!
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 7:25:55 PM
Beautiful writing dear man,stay safe and well...Hugsssssss
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 11:27:38 PM
Beautifully written and so very hertwarming and passionate....
Be safe,
Karen
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 4:26:40 PM
Ed you mesmerize me when you write like this! Splendid poem!
Love,
Eileen
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 2:40:55 PM
"demulcent touch" ... exquisite choice of words Edward, and a fine piece of work here that invigorates the soul. Blessings to you ...
Richard
Shades Of Adobe (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 9:26:40 AM
Sometimes there is a once in a lifetime. Gorgeous and heart touching pen Ed.
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/14/2007 7:16:50 AM
I surely hope he will! Beautiful pen, such tender and exciting memories.
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/12/2007 1:26:29 PM
Most interesting.....you may have the tea....I will go crazy Without my coffee!!
Love Tinka
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/12/2007 10:51:19 AM
It's so true we get a taste of the heights and if it isn't sustained we seem never able to accept anything less...
Good to see you Ed;-)
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/11/2007 11:48:13 PM
A great read. Too bad about the coffee..
Stay safe,
Ron
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/11/2007 10:48:36 PM
Excellent work.
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/11/2007 9:51:08 PM
He [starred] at his cup of tea = stared?
brilliant.
the end... it just works so perfectly with the start which works so perfectly with the middle which works so perfectly with the end.
yes. i am quite in love with this piece.
such a random reason for not being able to drink coffee anymore.
stop listening to a song coz it reminds you of her sure...
refuse to walk down a certain street coz it reminds you of her sure...
but stop drinking coffee...?
sounds like youve really been burnt by this whole love game...
i can see her lips.
i adore that theyre red. i think every girl/woman ought to own red lipstick. i am going out to get mine some time this week i think lol. if i remember lol.
yes. this was a very well constructed piece.
i am really impressed =)
A Cup Of Tea (Poetry) - 8/11/2007 7:34:32 PM
Oh my,interesting pen Edward,Hugssssss
Its all In the Math (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 10:21:38 AM
I have enjoyed the reading of "Its all In the Math ".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Its all In the Math (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 5:26:36 AM
Yours is a loving heart Gumby, I'm sure the formula will work.
Its all In the Math (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 2:34:56 AM
Gumby knows his maths almost as well as eye to I...lol!!
Love Tinka
Its all In the Math (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 2:04:57 PM
Another Gumby extravaganza. Adorable and creative poem.
Richard
Its all In the Math (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 5:42:36 AM
Beautiful writng,enjoyed...HUgss cute picture
Its all In the Math (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 6:49:08 PM
A most beautiful write and very inspirational....
Be safe,
Karen
Drifting (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 2:57:35 PM
Edward - you have out done yourself. This is a unique and remarkably imaged Poetic construct. I can also see an awesome analogy of life and the forces that come against it. Well done Poet.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
Drifting (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 10:20:52 AM
Exceptional offering!!
Love Tinka
Drifting (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 6:08:26 AM
Wonderful writing,keep up the great work,stay safe and well...Hugssssss
Drifting (Poetry) - 6/4/2007 8:06:27 PM
Ed this is exceptional poetry! You have embraced this topic to the point of knowing it and giving us the benefit of what you have learned from it! Thank you. It's a splendid poem!
Love,
Eileen
Photograph (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 11:44:41 AM
So deeply emotive, bittersweet and beautiful Ed.
Photograph (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 8:59:36 AM
wow love overflowing
feet soaking wet
enjoyed
Photograph (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 7:40:49 AM
Very touching write,Hugssss
Photograph (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 10:13:03 AM
Brilliant work filled with so much longing...for thr one no longer "Close" !!
This seems so familiar to me....did you post it before here on AD??
Anyways....a moving write for sure!!
Love Tinka
Photograph (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 12:08:44 AM
An interesting way to look inward and reflect the turmoil of the soul...Enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen
Once Upon a GumNight Dream (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 9:46:08 AM
awwwwwwwwww...i agree with Tinka on this
lest he felt it
enjoyed
Once Upon a GumNight Dream (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 12:19:27 PM
Awwwwwww.....sweet dreams will come tru Gumby...thats what every one been telling me since the cow kicked the moon' pinky rabbit!!
Love Tinky
Once Upon a GumNight Dream (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 8:02:42 AM
I hope your beautiful dreams come true someday Gumby. This is a lovely and heart touching poem.
Once Upon a GumNight Dream (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 9:12:51 PM
Awwwww, poor Gumby, if only he could have stayed asleep a little longer.......
Be safe,
Karen
Once Upon a GumNight Dream (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 4:55:47 PM
Gotta love this .... a Gumby love story. Edward, you have a uniquely creative mind. I love the muse in this. Blessings ...
Light and Wisdom ...
Darth Gumby (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 9:49:17 AM
Oh Gumby is in a bad mood.....not to worry just happy to see you back!!
Love Tinka
Darth Gumby (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 3:55:11 PM
Welcome back to the write side, Gumby; you've been missed. May the force be with you. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Darth Gumby (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 3:14:34 PM
THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR UNIQUE WORK.
Darth Gumby (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 2:32:33 PM
Gumby a reprobate??? Surely not. Good to read you again Beautiful Green Man. This poem is deeper than most would expect from a toy!
Darth Gumby (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 2:30:01 PM
(((Gumby Ed)))
Sooo nice to see you back; where you been, buddy?? You have not lost your edge; hilariously funny write! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 11:30:40 PM
Superb!
Elizabeth
Love (Poetry) - 4/10/2007 12:42:59 PM
Have love in site...is sometimes all we need.
Finally I see the eyes I have seen for a thousand years
Showing me,
Guiding me
to the obelisk where it is kept
I let myself be filled with it
The energy coursing
My heart filling with it
So I may bring it back with me
It is the only vanguard
that will defeat the nightmares
And protect the sanctuary
Love (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 7:44:48 PM
Bless you for such a beautiful write. Enjoyed reading this one.
Be safe,
Karen
Love (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 1:12:42 PM
Greed- Envey- Pride- And Power this is powerful and holds deep destroying thoughts and the insanity of trying to hold onto life as it was once peace, tranquility, but Love has many faces and many ways and not all are loving,. This one conjures though to look deeper into this poetic offering. No chewed in one setting. Blessed Easter Holiday,
Thank you for penning this one..
LOVE
Peace-Josie
Love (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 12:27:58 PM
As always such a pleasure to read your issightful work!!
Happy Easter to you....and Gumby!!
Love Tinka
Love (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 8:41:36 AM
"Greed, Power and Envy
have undermined the principles once held dear"
Indeed Edward - these three are surely the most vile of the leviathan that manifest this planet in spirit and corrupt the souls of those that worship at their thrones.
Your masterful insights make this poem a powerful vision inundated with spiritual awareness' that speaks of the need for all men to find the Truth and peace.
Fantastic image ...
Light and Wisdom ...
Love (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 7:52:29 AM
On This National Poetry Month, it pleases me to join all the readers by this table of "Love" ~ feed my mind, proud my soul and polish my creative tools ~ through the magnificent lines of this poem that adds value to Poetry enriching THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.
I salute You, Poet.
In gratitude and reverent admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 6:27:47 AM
All that and love too...the image is fabie and the angst of
today verses yesterday and love and life and the lack thereof
rings throughout this piece.
Thanks,
~D.
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/23/2007 10:10:26 AM
"Whispers In The Wind" is spiritually uplifting! You have a brilliant mind, dear Ed, yet you share it in a way that it is not harmful for us to stare at the sun. Yes, let the shells play their song and let those who have ears listen!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/23/2007 8:18:54 AM
Ed the longer you write, the more stunning your work becomes. This is exceptional poetry. "Islands in the stream, that is what we are"
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 4:28:07 PM
Ed I agree with the others this is brilliant poetry with outstanding metaphor!Adore the upbeat last line;-) Good to see you ;-)
Love,
Eileen
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 8:58:48 AM
There are too many good line for me to quote..I love this poem. Im glad to see hope even if it is written in the sand. ;)
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/21/2007 6:46:26 PM
"The horizon melts into hues of saturated daydreams " and "The equinox of drifting souls" fortify the ambiance of this most inspired write ... letting "the shells play their song" consolidates its essence ...
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/21/2007 9:17:18 AM
Bloody outstanding!
"The equinox of drifting souls" This image gave me chills Edward. You are truly a unique gem in the mines of poetic expression. Well done!
Light and Wisdom ...
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/21/2007 5:41:37 AM
Most beautiful offering!!
Love Tinka
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/21/2007 12:22:05 AM
A philosophic-poetic BLOW-bang in "Whispers In The Wind" storms up imagination and ontologic answers.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 5:25:19 PM
I enjoyed reading this piece of art very much. holly
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 4:18:35 PM
The picture you chose for your poem looks like two islands reaching out to each other, the poem also speaks to me of reaching, yearning, yet making the best of a situation at hand, the words here are lovely
pax A
Whispers In The Wind (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 4:17:43 PM
A place where it never ends and always will be. Where souls meet and are shadowed let the shells play their song again Ed. A beautiful and meaningful poem... So much depth in this one for me to read thank you,
Peace,
Joselyn
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 6:38:02 AM
Deep and so powerful, excellent poetry that reaches deep into the mind and spirit,
Reindeer
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/5/2007 3:41:48 PM
loved this
wisdom, explantions and that touch
humanistic flavor combined in all of what life is
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 4:04:44 PM
A navigation through the cosmos of science, dreams and ontological thoughts... "Being- A Study Of Fortitude" is poemized with logical feelings and teleological imagination... A philosophic-poetic bouquet of orchids to Phoebus and Erato.
I did enjoy the aroma of wisdom while reading this magnificent composition.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 3:05:40 PM
You have bitten off a mouthful here Poet with this subject matter. You could write a lifetime and still only scratch the surface. Irrespective; you still have accomplished something marvelous here - it is magnificently concieved, and you have penned it with rich colorful imagery, and intelligent philosophic insightfulness.
Light and Wisdom ...
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:31:42 AM
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 6:23:09 AM
Interesting thoughts, choice of words and evokes many emotions in me, holly
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/3/2007 7:25:53 PM
Nicely done, Edward. I love the way the concepts are presented via your verses. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Being- A Study Of Fortitude (Poetry) - 3/3/2007 6:32:44 PM
This is both romantic and spiritual
A blessing to experience I am sure, and a priviliage to read, well done, pax A :)
Contact Beyond Shadow (Poetry) - 2/19/2007 5:07:14 PM
And the dying hope that will.... will what? Love those endings! Holly
All The Kings Men (Poetry) - 2/19/2007 10:29:40 AM
Couldn't put him back together again. Better than just existing, hooked up to lifesupport.
Ron
Experimentation (Poetry) - 2/19/2007 10:17:05 AM
The irony here is palpable. The ultimate test. Unfortunately, we have given the heart more credit than this mighty muscle deserves, and treated it badly with habits worse than heartbreak.
Ron
Who Am I (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 7:18:43 AM
I like the way your mind works. Well done! Holly
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 7:16:26 AM
An extremely well written poem! I take my hat off to you with this one! Holly
Experimentation (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 7:13:48 AM
Interesting poem, who would have thought... Holly
Experimentation (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 1:53:47 PM
Intelligent and insightful analogy. The best I've read of your work.
Light and Wisdom ...
Experimentation (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 12:07:09 PM
Powerful offering in depth I'd say!!
Love Tinka
Experimentation (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 1:53:04 AM
I expected a Gumby poem
I was pleasantly suprised......
This is deep and intelligent, not that Gumby lacks in that......anyone who can write humor can write to the core...
thump thump
Enjoyed this..........pax A
Experimentation (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 12:44:26 AM
Powerful experiment you used such powerful visual in the intensity of this poem.
Happy Late V Day!
Joselyn
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 11:05:44 AM
"No greater love exists than the one who lays down his life for many."
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 6:18:57 AM
Brilliant absolutely brilliant....you took me right there but knocked my right off my feet with the ending!!
Love Tinka
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 4:23:04 PM
OMG!! So very very gut-wrenching! I think we all have a "feeling" of when we will go....
Hugs, Laura
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 4:13:45 PM
Ed,
Sometimes I wonder if we can even know. Somehow I believe so. I remember saying to myself, " I've got alot of life to live and so much to live for, no one has the right to take that away." I still believe that's what kept me going. That and paying attention to detail. Sad to be alone.
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 4:09:04 PM
{tears}}}}}}}}}] This touched me so deeply to tears. War is not right, death is not right unless naturaly old. So much wisdom in this piece.
Light & peace,
Joselyn
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 3:19:36 PM
A sobering reality ... well written.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
The Toy Soldier (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 3:19:14 PM
Now that is very very powerful.
Creations Of An Alternate Mind (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 9:21:20 AM
Ed,
Truly a profound piece of poetry. Excellent word usage and extraordinary write.
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 6:51:26 PM
A deep "thinking" write, Edward. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Creations Of An Alternate Mind (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 6:49:57 PM
This thought-inciting poem is worthy of much more than a single reading, Edward. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Creations Of An Alternate Mind (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 6:21:09 PM
This one is so thought provoking yet mystical in deliverance. Holds some spiritual tormented truths. Wheres the key Please. Serious you make one think here.
Light & peace,
Joselyn
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 11:36:15 AM
Excellent and thought provoking as always Ed.
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/9/2007 12:09:53 PM
Dear Ed,
Where the "I" gives way to the "We" is the point when we truly become One. Thank You for helping us to be aware of what it is to "die without ever knowing".
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/9/2007 10:35:25 AM
This is one very deep offering Edward!!
Love Tinka
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 5:14:14 PM
The world becomes a disinherited collage of images
eliminating all influences of past design.
Your answer is then found in this simple statement
I,
Created from division
am You
and for You
However if occurrence causes you to lose this
Your answer is
I am Nothing
Ed...an excellent write....damn those occurrences!
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 4:26:48 PM
Deep/insightfull/ mysterious... :)
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 3:48:35 PM
Very inspiring and thought provoking piece connecting to the true self finding the way home within one's self, I should say philosophical.
In depth and deliverance ....
Peace,
Joselyn
Who Am I (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 2:44:57 PM
Interesting write
Contact Beyond Shadow (Poetry) - 1/3/2007 9:41:22 AM
Will.... (this reminds me of a book without an ending... one you read and read again with hope that the ending will appear.. good, bad or indifferent.)
Gumby's New Years Lament (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 12:24:17 PM
Its hard to survive love when it never really dies...Happy New Year Gummby! (Perhaps a date with Betty Boop...will make you smile for a while.)
