…a passing edition of life… (Poetry) - 5/1/2023 6:19:15 AM
What a thing of beauty your poem is, Joan. Deeply heart touching.
…a passing edition of life… (Poetry) - 10/17/2022 9:51:59 AM
I'm sorry, I didn't read it all. Pieces of Life is so long and so repetitive. But I have other poems to read from other poets.
But I will say this: you have a flair for finding the right words to pass on a motion gathered from your piece of life in the springtime when all is green, warm and beautiful. But communism has placed you in a dark cold place of tiring, boring work that makes you old before your time. At least that's what I can interpret from the constant references to cold, old and dark, dreary settings described.
I once wrote a poem, White Birds, but it was far different from yours. All birds are now in danger, even the white ones from our overindulgence. We have to save them.
Ron
Winter in ULMI (Poetry) - 7/1/2019 8:42:49 AM
Yes, those of us from the north of the northern hemisphere must survive the winters. Generally by coming inside by a warm fire until spring. Until, at last, the winter of our lives arrive and we can no longer escape the cold.
That's the message I got from your poem, so eloquently and briefly told.
Ron
The day of life (Poetry) - 7/28/2015 11:51:20 AM
Ahh lovely.. I enjoyed reading your poetry..
The day of life (Poetry) - 6/26/2015 11:46:41 AM
Time marches on. You have written what is unfolding on your mind. Things aren't what they used to be, but we have our memories, and some things, like sunrise, we can depend upon.
Ron
The day of life (Poetry) - 6/25/2015 9:08:18 AM
Memories . . . From "Young, / with hair in the wind" to "with white hair / my life was gone " Dramatic and sad in my way of thinking. Good write.
My soul (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 9:09:45 AM
Moved me so deeply once more your style holds light. A beauty that has its own claim beautiful kob Poet.
Blessings,
Joselyn
The Jessus Return (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 9:08:11 AM
Ioan Rusu ,
Being a believer of mutal beliefs and of jesus Return he is the master I was deeply touched with both of these messages Welcome to the Den light bearer of the mission of GOD>
Blessings,
Joselyn
The song of Life (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 9:03:50 AM
And a beautiful morning and day song you have sung poet. This was a creation of beauty yet simple. It Breathes.
Light & peace,
Joselyn
My soul (Poetry) - 7/29/2005 8:56:34 AM
I love your style- I like how you use words in a way so that you don't need full, droning sentences to get across the meaning of your poem. It's a great style, almost delicate and hesitant.
My soul (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 6:36:08 PM
oooh sooo sad. Loved this one. Leah C. Wilson
My soul (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 7:16:23 AM
A truly captivating poem, loan - Well Done!
