Tracing Raindrops (Book) - 4/28/2006 7:18:38 PM
An inviting start to what is likely to be an engaging story, Janet. Thank you for the "tease." Love and peace to you,
Regis
Crazy, mixed up world (Book) - 4/28/2006 7:16:07 PM
I cannot see any pictures here but I get the "feeling" that this is a delightful children's book. Best wishes with love and peace to you, Janet,
Regis
Summer Storm (Book) - 3/27/2006 8:10:02 AM
It sounds adorable!
Birgit and Roger
Silver Sighs (Book) - 3/24/2006 11:02:25 PM
Butterflies in the winter sun reaches me nicely to the depth of my soul and I appreciate your gift; thank you, Janet,
Love and peace to you,
Regis
Counter top war (Book) - 3/15/2006 6:21:28 PM
Little Kitty sure has a lot of perseverance and resolution, we would do well to imitate her values
Great children's write , Janet !
Try issuing an Author's Den broadcast for a helpful illustrator, Janet !
I reckon you will be lucky !
Peter
Silver Sighs (Book) - 3/14/2006 6:49:08 PM
Looking foward very much to your continued success and progress Janet
I am certain this defining collection of poetry will be an important and pivotal landmark in your literary career !
Peter
Tracing Raindrops (Book) - 3/13/2006 4:14:37 PM
A marvellous synopsis of an action packed book, that promises to be an instant page turner, Janet
You did well
Peter
Not in Nagoya (Book) - 3/1/2006 6:49:38 PM
This was a fun novel to write. I love learning, and this was a prime opportunity to research Japan. Also, it gave me the reason I needed to take the English as a Second Language (ESL) teaching course. This book is intended to show that peoples of different races and ages are more alike than different.
The Error (Short Story) - 3/16/2006 2:48:06 PM
A wonderful story, happy ends like this are great!
Birgit and Roger
The Error (Short Story) - 3/15/2006 10:54:15 AM
A pleasant surprise indeed; all the more since it was unexpected. Thank you for sharing, Janet. Love and peace,
Regis
The Error (Short Story) - 3/15/2006 7:30:35 AM
Excellent write, Janet; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Error (Short Story) - 3/13/2006 6:21:20 AM
Quite extraordinary Janet...:)
When you least expect it, Dame Fortune will come knocking on your door !
Peter
Animals - our connection to God (Article) - 4/28/2006 7:19:56 PM
Yes, Janet; animals, nature - they are our connection to God. Thank you for this. Love and peace,
Regis
Animals - our connection to God (Article) - 4/9/2006 4:54:15 AM
Alone the title had us, but the article is great, we have to agree with you!
Birgit and Roger
Elton John - A Legend in his own time (Article) - 4/2/2006 11:50:01 AM
A most meaningful tribute, Janet; I am a big fan of Elton John as well. Thank you for this. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Elton John - A Legend in his own time (Article) - 3/18/2006 3:12:29 PM
This reminds me of when I told my husband that Marilyn Monroe's real name was Norma Jean Baker. Norma is the name of my son's evil stepmother! Well, one night, my husband was TRYING to be sweet, playing "nice" music, and then he gets up and forwards the CD to Elton John's "Good Bye, Norma Jean"! I sat there clenching my teeth, and actually managed not to say a word. But when the song was good and over, I pretended to yawn, blew out the candles and said I needed some sleep. Makes me laugh now.
Elton John - A Legend in his own time (Article) - 3/18/2006 8:42:31 AM
"Elton John - A Legend in his own time"... and a Master of all times!
His works will stand the test of time.
I enjoyed the reading of "Elton John - A Legend in his own time".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU.
Eternal Bloom (Article) - 3/18/2006 7:16:36 AM
Janet thanks for a well written ARTICLE. A lot of good information.
Stay Happy. Love, Betty Torain
Elton John - A Legend in his own time (Article) - 3/16/2006 5:42:03 PM
I concur totally Janet, and doff my hat to a legend in his own time, Elton John
I have many favorite songs and lyrics of his, but if you were to twist my arm, I would go for " Our Song " !!
Peter
Chapters speech on writing (Article) - 3/10/2006 9:00:19 AM
Hi! Janet,
All I can say is RIGHT ON...write on.
You are also courageous . It takes guts to face a crowd
and make a speach;whether the crowd is ten people or a hundred.
I have yet to promote my book,"Tag...You're Dead" in a bookstore where I would have to be infront of ,hopefully,a large group of people. Keep up the good work!
Eternal Bloom (Article) - 3/9/2006 3:49:52 AM
"Eternal Bloom" leads one to awareness of healthy living, without mandatory recipes. It is an inspiring writing.
I have learned from the reading of "Eternal Bloom".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Chapters speech on writing (Article) - 3/8/2006 7:41:50 PM
This work is NEAT-NETWORK clean cut for presentation.
"Chapters speech on writing" says it with its own class.
I did enjoy reading "Chapters speech on writing".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Chapters speech on writing (Article) - 3/8/2006 1:50:20 PM
Writing is like an unfolding piece of art, the mood, color and backgroud changes from minute to minute....spontaneous combustion I call it...lols
This is a very informative and educational treatise on the passion of writing Janet !
I am listening with my literary antennae !
Peter
Eternal Bloom (Article) - 3/4/2006 6:03:57 PM
I always think you should just be yourself, as God intended you to be Janet
And I agree drinking copious amounts of water is good for you, especially the skin and complexion
Peter
Liturgy for Ed (Article) - 2/25/2006 8:46:33 PM
A touching tribute to both Ed and your parents!
Liturgy for Ed (Article) - 2/25/2006 3:59:34 PM
Ed deserves all the praise he gets...and more
Praiseworthy liturgy
Peter
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 5/2/2008 10:57:00 PM
dear janet,
with your sentiments i do sympathize. my son ben used to love skateboarding though i did not think much of it then myself. it always struck me as the kind of activity of "those kids' with whom one didn't want his son to identify only to discover that he was one of them ... (sigh)
alan d. busch
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 1/15/2008 8:04:16 PM
Hmmm Kinda sends yah down memory lane, of the days of you're precious blokes knocking off hubcaps, yeah think I prefer the skateboard parks, keeps them off the pavement LOL.
The council built one not far from our house, in a bit of a valley, and all was well, as they enjoyed, and graffiti was practiced haha. then they built a nice new copshop, overlooking the boarding park lol, too funny, now they still graffitti, but...
Ah Youth!
:) Ch'erie
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 11:29:10 PM
Excellent. Remove the dead hand of disapproval from the shoulders of joyous youths and remember, we pass the world to them, not visa versa.
keith
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 7:50:41 AM
There are too many nonsensical actions fueled by the attempt to stereotype teens and youth. In my state, they are attempting to ban baggy clothing claiming drugs can be easily hidden in them... Such a poorly masked dislike of a style. Slovenly or no... it'll pass just like styles of the past, and come around again. ;)
Time better spent following up on actual disturbances or illegal acts.
Great expression here!
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 8:23:29 PM
This is a very convincing and straightforward indictment of a community's fear of the young congregating on their own terms. Well written.
Brett
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 4/12/2007 4:17:42 PM
This is heartwrenching Janet!
Wow! I'm impressed!
I KNow that longing~
YOu said it well and I felt it so deeply!
I like your chosen words!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 4/12/2007 4:13:53 PM
Love your enthusiasm for the skateboarding YOUNG!
Some are Careless and Unkind!
Rude and Discourteus to booT!
I am a school bus driver, and I see them skateboarders hanging on others cars- and almost getting runned over1
There park should be theirs ALONE!
No roads/etc.
I like your idea but many Abuse what they HAVE!
I know others who ONLY take it to the parks! :)
The most SAFEST way!
ONce bored they try for something more!
PEACE and WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Crackling (Poetry) - 11/16/2006 5:32:46 AM
Know the feeling!! Am writing this on a gray, soggy day. Nearly all the leaves have fallen. But here and there, brave souls hang on. . .like us? 'Least we have the memory of. . ."crackling!" Luv'n'Hugs, Pea
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 8/30/2006 7:44:17 AM
C l e v e r and to t h e p o in t! Shame on whoever is responsible for failing to
make sure the women's restroom{-s} is equipped to meet your and
others' needs. As you know, it jeopardizes health to wait so long.
Day after day. . .bless your heart. Sure did a great job of
tellin'm. Let's hope 'They' are listening. Wishing you better luck in the future, 'Pea' <3
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 6/16/2006 5:52:59 AM
H e a r t r e n d i n g ~~ SO admire the clarity and . . .the way
you make us see and hear and. . .'all of the above.' Your
mother would be -- no,IS -- so proud. Touched in the deepest
part of her soul. T h a n k y o u. 'Pea' <3
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 6/12/2006 8:01:51 PM
Janet, this is a lovely tribute to your mother and you acknowledge the spiritual connection that binds you forever in a wonderful, warm way.
Gina
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 6/10/2006 5:54:21 AM
Blessed are those that honor their beloved Ones and revive their thoughts.
"Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar" flows beautifully under the rhythm of gratitude. An inspiring tribute in poetic grand.
I salute You, Poet!
Long Healthy Creative Life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 11:20:45 AM
This is a respectful and loving tribute, Janet. Thank you for sharing it. It is nice to see a posting from you again. Love and peace,
Regis
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 6:10:54 PM
Yes, Janet, we have missed you, dear poet. Your work is always a bright time of my day.
Your tribute is fine like lace being sewn to a most treasured cloth. And, the garment will be a better life, carrying you along with your Mother's teachings and memories. Absolutely the most loyal and loving of any tribute for one who gave you so mcuch. Thank you for posting it.
- Bill
Summer Breeze - Tribute to Thursa Ruth Millar (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 5:31:42 PM
Janet
I think she just did, within the beautiful shell of this incandescent Mother's Day write !
Great to see you posting again...;)
Your absence has been noted from the Den
Love and Light
Peter
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/28/2006 9:13:42 AM
Outstanding imagery of poetic grand in "Death by deletion".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
My very best friend (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 1:24:38 PM
I hope she gets well. I know how a best friend being sick feels. ;) Silver
PS: when you get a chance to visit Ireland. Do. The people are friendly, love Americans. The beauty and history of the land can not be described by the mere word. ;)
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 9:44:40 AM
I'm with Eileen on this one. Try again. One only fails when they stop trying.
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 4/21/2006 7:51:30 PM
I agree...I don't like cats - just as you don't. ;) Silver
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/21/2006 7:49:57 PM
I have known the tragedy of a untimely and too young death of a friend too. ;) Silver
Colours (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 6:57:29 PM
This reads like a long sigh of eternity. I find it compellingly spiritual and somehow mythical as well. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Bright conqueror (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 6:53:35 PM
The emotions of the moment; the ambiance that you create via your verses bask the reader in the light of the "bright conqueror." Thank you, Janet. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Canyon sunset, before the snow (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 6:49:14 PM
What makes this poem exceptional is the colors of the sunset and all it glorious beauty sharply contrasted with the "human" side of the moment. Very nicely done, Janet. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 10:27:07 PM
An excellent poem! I wish you all the best in finding the right publisher. Don't give up!
Eileen
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 7:07:36 PM
try breathing life back into it ... is you novel really dead or just sleeping?
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 9:10:19 AM
This is beautiful!
Birgit and Roger
Working twilight (Poetry) - 4/16/2006 4:17:20 PM
this takes you there. I've had morning like this. Great job! ;) Silver
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/16/2006 10:38:32 AM
Beautiful tribute. R
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/16/2006 9:54:23 AM
Emotive and meaningful, Janet. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/16/2006 5:58:45 AM
Janet - Not knowing the details or the why, I cry for you, wondering why your published work had to die. I do encourage you to let it lie a bit, then look into alternatives. There must be a decent publisher out there which can give your novel the marketing it deserves. I wish good things for you. - Bill
Death by deletion (Poetry) - 4/16/2006 5:28:59 AM
Janet
A fitting and moving tribute....your novel will rise again, like the phoenix from the ashes !
Peter
Working twilight (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 8:26:17 PM
Exactly so...you expressed that sense of weariness and stress - the daily treadmill - perfectly.
Gina
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 12:09:08 PM
Don't know if there's enough Depends in the world for this one.
Have to agree, 2-hours-plus is absolutely cruel.
Thanks for enlightening us.
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/12/2006 2:59:15 PM
amusing. did you know it is against jewish law to put off going number two?
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/9/2006 5:45:07 AM
We can feel your pain! Cool write,
Birgit and Roger
Working twilight (Poetry) - 4/9/2006 4:56:21 AM
This is a very realistic and great write!
Birgit and Roger
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/8/2006 5:18:28 AM
My precious sister, I will say a pray for you today that you would be given a huge gift better and bigger than what you have now, angel
(((Hugs And Love, JoAnne ))
Working twilight (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 4:59:12 PM
So incredibly harsh and real. We had a duck fly about the living room in my parents' home once. It came down the chimney. We caught it and let it go back into the night. I guess the ducks liked the warmth of the chimney and roosted up there. I don't know. I'm no duck expert. Love this, Janet. Take care. Love and peace,
Regis
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 4:56:21 PM
Even in our "updated" school facility, there are not enough washrooms. But hey. People (not all but a great many) still think teachers should abide by the rules of the 1800's. This stirs anger within me and that's not easy to do. Love and peace to you, Janet,
Regis
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 11:27:38 AM
I could never be a teacher under those conditions. I thought you could leave the room with a trusted student, I guess time shave changed;-)Don't blame you for complaining!excellent write...
Eileen
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 4:59:25 AM
When you gotta go,.....you gotta go#
You raise a pertinent point here, that should be addressed by the authorities...
I always enjoy your original and innovative works, Janet..
More power to your golden quill..
Blessings
Peter
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 4:52:35 AM
Some teachers are very cruel. They restricted the children and would not let them go to the washroom, until they embarrass themselves by leaking out in front of the whole class.
Teachers need to re-evaluate themselves before they cry for more money.
A good thought-provoking piece!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.s. Sandie Angel :o)
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 4:51:59 AM
Janet,
Boy, don't I know that feeling well. When ya gotta go, ya gotta go. It only gets worse as you age. Trust me. :)
Never thought I'd be reading a poem about peeing. You done good here, and taught me a new word - micturation. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Micturation blues (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 4:48:55 AM
Teaching has always had drawbacks, but I never dreamed it was this bad. Perhaps, those who teach need to change the latin words you use so delicately, to one simple contract line, "When we need to pee, we shall go pee." 'Twould be a good test of class discipline, also.
My consultanting hours are nine to five.
You surely write up the problem well. Hope a solution is found- Bill
Working twilight (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 6:29:52 PM
Nice work here!!!
Working twilight (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 6:05:25 PM
Janet
A day in the life...:)
I know that feeling...
Splendid introspective pen...
I put the snooze button on the alarm...lols
Blessings
Peter
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 10:22:23 AM
Intensely powerful lines. The aspect of self criticism poses a welcomed challenge for me but I find the poet's courage to put it in there admirable and beautiful.
Aberjhani
Night (Poetry) - 4/4/2006 11:29:14 PM
A great tribute to Night!
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/4/2006 11:38:07 AM
Great write!
Birgit and Roger
Night (Poetry) - 4/3/2006 2:45:57 PM
This is a great ode to night, Janet. Often, it is the time of day I love best. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Night (Poetry) - 4/3/2006 10:01:40 AM
We love this one!
Birgit and Roger
Night (Poetry) - 4/3/2006 8:49:33 AM
Pleasant poem that captures the continuum of night. R
Night (Poetry) - 4/3/2006 7:55:24 AM
Janet
Love it...:)
I'll add twilight too...lols
Peter
Night (Poetry) - 4/3/2006 6:04:43 AM
Janet,
An excellent coverage of night and what it entails; creatively well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Night (Poetry) - 4/2/2006 8:35:34 PM
love the ending!
Susan
Crackling (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 11:03:00 AM
I've been accused many times of "never having grown up." That's okay by me. You effectively share your sentiments via your verses, Janet. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 11:00:56 AM
I know the emotions that you share in these verses, Janet. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 10:46:00 AM
So true, Janet. I know we should love ourselves for what we are anyway!!!
(((Hugs And Love, JoAnne )))
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 8:31:46 AM
"a has been
invisible." Whoa!
What Mother Nature giveth, Father Time taketh away.
This one is so true. I hope you've now overcome these facts.
Very well written, Janet.
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 7:40:22 AM
Janet
You are an exceptional woman of the moment, a free spirit with unlimited zeal and enthusiasm !
Peter
Exquisite one (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 7:03:34 AM
Janet - I trust that you took your on advice, and now are well "fleshened out," as my mother used to say. You were down! Down Under, and then some. Tell us that you're doing very w3ell, and are able to write more "UP" poetry..... - Bill
Waterfall (Poetry) - 4/1/2006 6:29:28 AM
The most previous gift, water; The most beautiful prose, "Waterfall" by Janet Bellinger. Kudos, you've done it again. Gloria Buono
Crackling (Poetry) - 3/30/2006 4:59:48 PM
There's a saying something like, "We don't stop laughing because we grow old, we grow old because we stop laughing." Live as though each day is a miracle, and the creeping damp and cold won't undo as severely. :) Great write!
Crackling (Poetry) - 3/30/2006 8:20:59 AM
I know the answer to this.
See that pile of mucky, mouldy leaves. Just close your eyes and jump right in (go on, don't worry about what the neighbours will think) and they will be crackling and autumn-smelling again.
Forget the "inner child," its us that go inside, not the child.
Ian
(one who never went inside)
Crackling (Poetry) - 3/30/2006 4:58:40 AM
Janet
A splendid and nostalgic write, that takes you back down memory lane...:)
We will just have to summon those hidden reserves of energy ...lols
Peter
Crackling (Poetry) - 3/29/2006 9:42:02 PM
Hi Janet,
Great poem! Very nostalgic. A longing for that certain vitality we all
once had.
Crackling (Poetry) - 3/29/2006 8:08:59 PM
This sounds like lots of fun and the good old times,
Birgit and Roger
Crackling (Poetry) - 3/29/2006 7:37:10 PM
Fond memories and great longings. Well-done, Janet!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/28/2006 3:22:58 PM
Cute poem, and I completely understand it. You see, I don't like cats either. ;-)
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/28/2006 3:39:33 AM
Janet:
What a cute and delightful read. I enjoyed this one greatly.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/28/2006 12:53:30 AM
I just knew you couldn't be telling the truth with that title! Cute poem. Someone sent me an email this morning containing a short video of the funny antics of cats, it started off my day with a good chuckle. I love them and have six of them. Maybe when F William Broome realises that cats train people, and do not allow themselves to be controlled, they may start to like him a little!
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 3:11:36 PM
Janet,
*purring* double meow, eh? That's talented! Love this one--you sound like my Daddy. "I hate cats." But, when he thought you weren't looking, well, there he was, talking baby talk to the cat and petting it, encouraging it to crawl into his lap....yep. REALLY hated cats.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 2:16:11 PM
Dogs drool, cats rule. :)
This was adorable.
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 10:51:07 AM
I love cats and this poem!
Susan
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 10:05:34 AM
Cats have such personalities. This is delightful, Janet. Thank you for sharing this gift. Have a sweet day.
Regis
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 9:55:46 AM
I've noticed that cats don't like me, and now I know why.
Have never felt a kinship with a cat. Can't explain it.
Guess it's because I was never able to train a cat do a thing.
Still have that problem with people.
I've given up on controlling people, so maybe,I will like cats.
You write about your kitty in a highly intersting manner.
- Bill
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 8:14:23 AM
Yep, that's the way it goes with those cute little critters! You probably have already told her, haven't you? We enjoyed this adorable cute poem.
Birgit and Roger
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 8:13:27 AM
A paean to the little ones... "I don't like cats" wakes up the reader, and take one to a dream of humanity on wings of imagination.
A poetic grand performed through the lines of "I don't like cats".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 8:08:44 AM
Adorable; very well done, Janet! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 7:48:17 AM
After what I posted this morn, I well understand this poem;-)
Fun to read!
Eileen
I don't like cats (Poetry) - 3/27/2006 7:46:02 AM
Cats are just like humans, very intuitive and sensory, they know if a person dozen't like them...
Beautiful and upliftig write, Janet
Your labours are a delight to read
Blessings
Peter
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/26/2006 3:52:10 AM
Wonderful write indeed. Great sentiments!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Tresspassing on sacred grounds (Poetry) - 3/24/2006 12:05:39 PM
There is a great deal of "hidden" meaning behind your words, Janet. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/24/2006 12:03:58 PM
Beautiful sentiments, Janet. Thank you for sharing them in the form of this poetic gift. Love and peace,
Regis
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/24/2006 5:23:28 AM
Janet,
Exquisite poetry, very well written.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/24/2006 2:37:26 AM
The first stanza is silver, the second is gold, and the first line of the last stanza is platinum...
"Waterfall" falls wonders and flows sublimity.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/23/2006 4:10:51 PM
Good words in good form. I am glad for you. - Bill
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/23/2006 4:07:37 PM
You are very fortunate and blessed to have such a pillar of strength
and comfort in your life, Janet
And this is an awesome declaration of faith and intent
Peter
Waterfall (Poetry) - 3/23/2006 4:05:03 PM
A truely beautiful write!
Birgit and Roger
Tresspassing on sacred grounds (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 1:04:39 PM
How could one get bored, we'd love to see it (well, eventually we'll get there0
Birgit and Roger
Canyon sunset, before the snow (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 1:02:55 PM
Most beautiful, you've painted a wonderful picture!
Birgit and Roger
Don't kick a dead horse (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 1:00:41 PM
We are very pleased to see that you keep on writing, because we very much enjoy reading you! And this phone sure will ring...
Birgit and Roger
Tresspassing on sacred grounds (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 6:14:01 AM
Who says we can't ride a donkey to the floor of the Grand Canyon? It's a National Park.
Tresspassing on sacred grounds (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 4:11:14 AM
The symbolism in "Tresspassing on sacred grounds" makes this piece
a poetic grand.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Canyon sunset, before the snow (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 4:07:45 AM
A colorful painting on life and living in society.
The dues and deeds of Nature and humans described with exceptional imagery... "Canyon sunset, before the snow" showed the true picture
of our days.
Keep posting, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Tresspassing on sacred grounds (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 7:17:37 PM
i love how you described it as nature's dream. i loved the realism of this
Canyon sunset, before the snow (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 6:40:28 PM
Janet,
This is stumulating prose, beautifully penned; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Tresspassing on sacred grounds (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 6:39:51 PM
Janet,
Having never been to the Grand Canyon, you convey its grandeur in spectacular, realistic prose. I cannot imagine getting bored with seeing it day after day...but I suppose it could happen. Well written!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 11:39:32 AM
We so hope that Brooke will get well very soon! The poor thing, it is always so bad if you can't help them. Lots of luck on her health!
Birgit and Roger
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 10:31:45 AM
I hope that Brooke will get well very soon, Janet. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Regis
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 6:48:26 AM
I would tend to agree with J and Karla below, Janet
I would get a second opinion too, I don't like the sound of steroids at all !
In the meantime, I will pray for Brooke's full recovery and restoration to health !
Peter
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 5:55:57 AM
FRIENDS ARE ALCHEMISTS THAT MAKE GOLD FROM THE FOAM OF WAVES ON THE SHORE OF THEIR GRACE, AND MAKE DIAMOND FROM CONDENSED VAPORS OF THE RAINBOW OF LOVE.
Any form of friendship is a gift of living and a blessing of life.
Blessed are those that miss a friend, cry for a friend and sing for a friend.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Don't kick a dead horse (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 5:50:25 AM
Deep emmotional prose-poem showing a profile of the illusion's era,
where -- X on the Box -- receives more rewards than knowledge in the mind.
Keep posting, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 5:41:48 AM
Janet,
Brooke is a beautiful dog. It's terrible when our best friend is sick...I agree with JB, get a second opinion.
A very moving poem, very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 5:17:11 AM
Perhaps you could take her to a different vet for a second opinion. Aren't steroids what they forbid athletes to take?
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 5:10:08 AM
So terribly sorry to hear this, Janet; and I know your helpless feeling all too well. When any of my pets are ill, I can feel their pain, and so many times in my life when I've been ill, they have been my guardian angels. Hoping and praying that your Brooke feels much better soon.
My very best friend (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 4:34:56 AM
Oh, this is sad! I hope your best friend will get better very soon!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Don't kick a dead horse (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 4:21:36 AM
Janet you are still TEACHING, you have a larger class-room. You are in a another season of your life. Thanks for the Poem, thanks for all your writings. Love, Betty Torain
Don't kick a dead horse (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 6:20:21 PM
It's not easy to be a teacher, you have to have a lot of patience and smart students in order to keep your sanity.
If I could choose between my job and my writing as a career, I choose writing every time too.
Good thought-provoking write!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Don't kick a dead horse (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 4:46:01 PM
It takes courage to make such choices, Janet. I have been part of the system of education for many years. Certainly I enjoy teaching the students; there is a lot of "other stuff" that is most stressful and makes the profession a most difficult one. As for being an actor, I'd not have lasted in the classroom if I had not "honed" my skills in that area (lol). Thank you for this insighftul and honest write. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Don't kick a dead horse (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 4:35:29 PM
You made the right choice, Janet
An inspired one...
Peter
The watcher (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 4:05:22 PM
This is a amusing and amazing write, lovely and light, perfectly done,
Birgit and Roger
Omen (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 4:02:38 PM
A beautiful write with a humble message and an elegant flow,
Birgit and Roger
Eddy (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 9:49:53 AM
This flows so nicely, Janet; the senses expressed make me feel like feeling them. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace,
Regis
Kleenex (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 9:47:41 AM
A delightful take on a box of kleenex hero, Janet. Well done! Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Latin lover (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 9:46:06 AM
Languages are fascinating, Janet; you express this most expertly here. Très bien. Muy bien. Hasta luego. À plus tard. Merci. Gracias. Amour et paix. Amor y paz. Love and peace,
Regis
The watcher (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 5:25:41 AM
The overseer had a polite way to say that he knew...
"The watcher" sings the mysteries of Nature and describes the weekend
romantic time classically.
Healthy day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Omen (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 5:19:43 AM
Wise romantic definition of togetherness in love... "Omen" flows and glows beautifully.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The watcher (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 6:41:40 PM
Some moments are unforgettable and you have shared such a moment through your verses here, Janet. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The watcher (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 5:41:27 PM
Weird, wonderful and strange the world we live in, Janet
This is a mysterious and beguiling prose poem, that leaves open to speculation in classic form, the ending or endings...:)
Stirring stuff
Peter
Omen (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 2:20:01 PM
Reminded me of the late and great Sir Harry Lauder's song " Roaming in the Gloaming "....:)
Your poetry of late has developed progressively in emotion and spirituality
Excellent, Janet
Peter
Omen (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 2:11:51 PM
And may it be so, Janet. "Gloamin'" Interesting word with which many are not familiar. Actually, I wrote a "poem" entitled "The Gloaming." I love the way this poem of yours flows with rhythm and rhyme. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 12:19:40 PM
So true, and a truly inspiring prose. All the gold and silver in the world can't buy happiness.
Who do you think you are? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 11:31:44 AM
Tell it like it is..Powerful write
love joanne
Who do you think you are? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 10:45:23 AM
In the days of more civilized dress amongst the common people as well as the nobility, the battles were all held in fields outside of the towns and villages, and I think that in this way, men could fight one another with honor, not murdering the innocent.
Who do you think you are? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 10:41:05 AM
Yes indeed, Janet! Well stated. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Who do you think you are? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 10:05:35 AM
Bravo!!! couldn't have said it any better myself i agree 100%
Who do you think you are? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 9:45:35 AM
I admire you for having the courage of your convictions, Janet
Blessings
Peter
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 5:55:01 AM
Good lines to be pondered and thought of. "Spirit Crashers" stimulates deep studies on our society.
Keep Your quills dancing, Poet, for the orchestra of justice must do its job.
Healthy Day.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Who do you think you are? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 5:47:26 AM
It is always a pleasure to hear the bells for JUSTICE.
"Who do you think you are?" strikes thoughts of fairness and justice.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Poetry heaven (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 7:05:59 PM
Powerful in brevity; a beautiful offering, Janet. Thank you! Love and peace to you,
Regis
Salute to the sun (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 7:04:41 PM
I have said it many times, I have written "poems" about it; friendship, where would I be without it. You express this exquisitely in your verses, Janet. Thank you for this gift. Love and peace,
Regis
Waiting for Don't Know (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 6:59:28 PM
You create an atmosphere that is almost palpable, Janet. Very effective indeed. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 6:57:10 PM
I love the beautiful imagery that underscores the sentiments expressed in your verses, Janet. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 6:56:12 PM
I do not understand such people yet, unfortunately, I know some. Thank you, Janet. Love and peace,
Regis
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 6:04:32 PM
There are many such inferior fools around, and best to pity and ignore them, because they are too ignorant to have a life of there own and have to feed off others in order to feel superior. Excellent write Janet!
Eileen
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 4:44:44 PM
Peter is definitly right, as is Pier and last but not least Karla! They are everywhere and still, their voices are seldom heard and their words just float off without finding ears that would listen. They definitly don't have your talent or grace, so, keep on writing and enjoying your readers! All your fans are waiting for your posts, every day, you rock and you should know it!
Birgit and Roger
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 4:02:07 PM
Janet,
Honest, angry, needed write--those that crush other's spirits have no joy unless they make others as miserable as they must be. I feel sorry for them. Rise above, write, and soar. I know you can--I've seen it, read it, and believe in you. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 3:46:43 PM
Jealous, envy and a few other things comes to mind. Why else? Sometimes, they really don't know what they are doing. It's as if they have no heart. Count it as a stepping stone. Remember, don't sweat the small stuff, it's all small stuff compared to the bigger picture. I like this poem. It's good to know I'm not the only one who feels this way. Thanks for sharing it.
Spirit Crashers (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 1:45:37 PM
A hard hitting and intriguing composition, Janet
In every walk of life you will find people, who take great delight in crushing the spirits of others...
However, I have found in my experience, that they themselves can't take, what they dish out to other unfortunate and defenceless persons...:)
Peter
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 7:44:42 PM
Very beautifully stated!
Eileen
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 11:53:40 AM
We just love your flowery expressions, they are truely enchanting,
Birgit and Roger
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 11:37:17 AM
A true poetic vision... It is a depicting of the reality of illusion... "Fool's gold" paid its dues to Poetry.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 8:41:57 AM
wonderful and beautiful, janet..
love joanne
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 7:51:49 AM
This composition paints beauty with the brush of wisdom on the prairie of reverence... "Each creative act" brings the wise light of eternity.
Health and Creativity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 7:40:46 AM
Janet,
Typo in title. :)
Otherwise, a beautifully imaged write of Nature's displayed wonders around us; all His creations reflect His glory! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Each creative act (Poetry) - 3/16/2006 7:39:16 AM
Absolutely beautiful write thats comprises of poems within a poem
in a very neat package
You have mastered this art form excellently Janet !
Peter
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/15/2006 10:56:47 PM
Wise words in this poem...Well written...
Eileen
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/15/2006 10:54:46 AM
Very true, wonderful write,
Birgit and Roger
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/15/2006 10:50:58 AM
You create the ambiance most effectively and share it with the flow of your verses, Janet. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/15/2006 10:49:21 AM
As I have stated before, you have a gift of using few words to express powerful thoughts and meanings, Janet. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/15/2006 9:49:04 AM
You encapsculate the foolishness of lusting after material gain in this porous life...
Short and succinct poetry conveys the most powerful message Janet
Peter
Fool's gold (Poetry) - 3/15/2006 8:11:37 AM
But, do I get another chance?
This is a goodun' ... and, so very true.
Fewest words, strongest message. Good writing.
- Bill
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 8:08:02 PM
"a thousand silver darts hurled themselves out of the water"
What a unique way to describe rain!
Enjoyed this one.
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 8:06:58 PM
"watching the rain
and listening to it bounce off the roof
as the rest of the world
swirls on quite well without me"...
beautiful piece here!
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 1:30:56 PM
Great capture of rain!
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 10:56:44 AM
Rain is to the fore in the Den today, and your introspective poem is also in this current vein, Janet
I love going for walks in the rain, feeling the refreshing and resurgent effect of the energising rain on my skin
Peter
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 10:28:36 AM
“Rain dance” is a poem that would make Minerva congratulate Erato, and would make Phoebus proud to oversee and patronize the Poets.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 8:46:39 AM
Janet,
Divine inspiration in your words, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 8:45:58 AM
Janet,
Beauty and comfort in your words...very well penned. Lovely images.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rain dance (Poetry) - 3/14/2006 8:40:06 AM
Great poem superb imagery!I love this, especially since we have had rain for a week now,it's becoming part of the family;-)
eT
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 6:23:35 PM
An engaging write for "us" authors, for sure. R
Justice (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 5:44:33 PM
Powerful sentiments, Janet. Being in the "business" of education, I know that of which you write. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 5:42:48 PM
Delightful, Janet; flows like a spring freshet. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Amethyst sky (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 4:26:47 PM
How bold of you to challenge the sky!
You evoke splendid colours here.
Gina
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 4:25:20 PM
oh, I love this. Janet, you so expertly describe the urgency which besets us when we are in the midst of the creative portion of writing!
Gina
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 10:29:30 AM
Excellent, enjoyed it very much,
Birgit and Roger
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 2:14:27 AM
Get those nimble and dexterous fingers flying, and get that manuscript completed please, for the Love of God...:)
You answered the challenge brilliantly Janet !
Peter
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 1:39:50 AM
The surreal symbolism used in this composition gave it a secure place in the literary BAROQUE -- no matter the time and the school --
"Bar-oque" has made its TIME.
Healthy Day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Bar-oque (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 5:43:24 PM
Cute little verses..keep it up and comin....
Justice (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 4:56:23 PM
Emotions and reactions responding to inJUSTICE releasing the pain from the heart.
Probably do to the emotional at the time it was written, it seems that many typos need revision. Please check the spelling.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Eddy (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 4:20:30 PM
Sounds so good to me too Janet...:)
There is nothing quite like a good night's sleep...:)
Peter
Fighting Rot (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 3:31:26 PM
I have never been one to adhere to convention and conformity too Janet
I adopt the attitude of " I am no styles...but all styles "
Diversity is an incredible asset...:)
Peter
Justice (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 3:13:38 PM
Great job, Janet...Powerful...
Frozen Apples (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 3:08:41 PM
You have chosen the right path...Love
Your bond with your father is a spiritual one Janet...one that can never be broken....for better or worse...:)
Peter
Justice (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 3:02:15 PM
There is no justice in this world Janet....that is why we must engineer and construct our own paths in life...:)
I take great stock and comfort from my Mum's words " What's for you....won't go by you..."....:)
Peter
You are a symphony (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 11:49:15 AM
A beautiful and meaningful ode, Janet. It reminds me of a poem I wrote some time ago called, "I Would Be Music." Thank you for sharing your gift of creativity. Love and peace,
Regis
Bridesmaids of spring (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 11:47:42 AM
That is just what the cedar maidens have done here, Janet. A most beautiful offering. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Bridesmaids of spring (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 4:07:47 AM
"Bridesmaids of spring" strikes the dynamo of imagination,
opens the minds to intuition and sings loyalty to
The Mother Poet (NATURE) under the rhythm of wisdom.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Bridesmaids of spring (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 8:13:45 PM
I love nature poetry...........it is so symbolic of human life......especiallly the woman spirit.....well done.....pax A
Bridesmaids of spring (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 7:18:06 PM
Absolutley EXCELLENT poetry...
Bridesmaids of spring (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 6:22:59 PM
Love the descriptions you have given to the natural rebirth!
Bridesmaids of spring (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 6:07:01 PM
A rich and symbolic poem that offers underlying hope and rebirth
When we are divested of all our cares and worries, we have the capacity to love and live life to the full Janet
Very fine metaphorical write
You light up the Den tonite with this inspirational pen !
Peter
Only playing dead (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 12:05:17 PM
I love the fairy tale ending, Janet; particularly since it is true. Thank you for sharing this natural drama. Love and peace,
Regis
Beating the drums (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 12:04:06 PM
Great sentiments expressed, Janet. I recently took part in an intergenerational choir and the energy and ambiance was quite different (in a wonderful manner) than that of my usual choir (which is mostly people of the same age or thereabouts). Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
On the moon (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 12:01:58 PM
Nothing wrong with dreaming, Janet; thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Noisy River (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 11:32:13 AM
I echo the sentiments that I expressed for your "Amethyst Sky." Beautifully expressed and shared, Janet. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Amethyst sky (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 11:30:40 AM
You are in tune with your surroundings and they speak to you; we are blessed that you can share what they say to you through your verses. Thank you for sharing your gift, Janet. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Noisy River (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 10:39:17 AM
Janet, I've been enjoying your short poems this morning. I have just joined a new poetry class and I love poetry more than writing stories, I think because you have more freedom in poetry. Thanks for sharing yours. Emma
Thou shalt not skateboard? (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 10:21:17 AM
At the rate they are going, there will soon be no " green " areas, parks, or sites for our youth to enjoy themselves, out in the life giving rays of the sun and elements
Thanks for this timely and needed reminder to our authorities, to stop paying lip service to the developers, and pay more attention to our young people and their needs, Janet
Peter
Noisy River (Poetry) - 3/10/2006 8:29:07 AM
I, too, find peace and tranquility from rivers. You have expressed the images excellently. R
