The Wounds - Rane (Book) - 1/13/2006 5:23:57 PM
Very emotive and deep Maria
You have a grasp of the spiritual meaning of life
God Bless
Peter
JAZZ BAR (Poetry) - 6/29/2026 6:55:28 AM
Many thanks Mr Richard Cederberg.
JAZZ BAR (Poetry) - 6/28/2026 6:31:38 AM
The sensory details and imagery in this piece are exceptional, and the poems atmosphere is palpable and invites the reader to become part of what is being characterized. Most impressive. And very much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. rlc
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 12/22/2012 7:55:50 AM
Which way shall I take the course to my reader’s hearts,
What scale and tools do I collect with,
What voyeur’s wrap I claim in readiness.
Are the ages of my father come to bear,
Or will be for next generation’s benefit:
And for sure hope luck to smile a lot,
Unless I weaken in devotion,
That I harbor this pretext,
Where course is subject to a wanton age.
Gather, flock with us; examine all to beyond:
Valiant person have surpassed our time.
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 10:42:14 AM
I find it nearly impossible to navigate a 150 foot long cruise ship in a 5 foot bathtub and yet reading a short piece such as this, makes that voyage so enjoyable and verily possible, in that with a few words you have depicted so much. But the pain heals eventually and the wounds transform into a beauty few can express as eloquently as you have. Beautiful work, Maria.
Amor
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 8/21/2007 1:46:52 AM
Thank you very much Mr Hernandez!
Maria
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 8/11/2007 5:42:37 AM
Nice...you captured a view within a small portion of poetic expressions...very nice...
enjoyed.....
Art Sun...
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 1/24/2006 8:00:37 PM
i feel it too! Instead of paper or pc it's as if you write directly on our souls. Amazing write.
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 1/16/2006 2:35:34 PM
Too easy feel who has pain. If we feel your pain we can understand you. But this way not enought. That is not consolation for us. Also for you. All your poems carry your pain to us and future. To endless.
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 1/16/2006 1:47:38 PM
I know the feeling, Maria. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Regis
ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 1:11:37 PM
We must always keep hope alive in our hearts !
Without hope we have nothing !
Stay upbeat and strong !
Peter
