The Evening Song: A Prelude To Night (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 12:01:07 PM
First thank you for your reviews of my work. Secondly this is an interesting and very picturesque poem. The images are very clear.
Dee
Diane C. Hundertmark
The Evening Song: A Prelude To Night (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 10:14:45 AM
Hey Mr. short story writer. I thought you said you didn't write poetry. Now that's a load of ... Patrick
The Evening Song: A Prelude To Night (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 4:12:12 PM
I love the imagery used in this piece, it's dark too - just the way I like it! Could give me chills. Keep up the good work!
The Evening Song: A Prelude To Night (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 11:11:20 AM
It is good to see you back again Charles and with suchh a strikingly strong dark write. The images are strong, the lines flow well and the characters are believable...eg...I could so pictture the old man laying down in that cold grave.
Fee
