Funny Humiliation (Short Story) - 8/31/2007 9:32:27 PM
It took me an hour to quit laughing and gain enough strength back in my typing fingers. I will never ever ever go to the doc about my, uh, you-know-whats.....
Funny Humiliation (Short Story) - 8/24/2007 12:57:30 PM
wowww!! that must have been something else! I can certainly understand
how you felt violated...!! it makes a hilarious story though!! thanks for sharing! katie
Funny Humiliation (Short Story) - 8/21/2007 5:38:10 PM
hehe not quite as gut-busting as hearing you tell it, Kimmy-dear, but still hilarious!! sweet mortification...lol
Christmas for a 5 year old (Short Story) - 4/23/2007 1:05:49 PM
Well, it's not Christmas but this is a sweet write, Kimberly. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Kindergarten Anxiety (Short Story) - 8/2/2006 9:22:06 AM
Kimberly
I have prayed for both you and Tre to the Holy Spirit... that Tre hits the ground running in kindergarten, and that you alternatively are given the full confidence and assurance by Spirit, that everything is going to be alright :)
I have been there with my own three sons, and believe me they adapt better than us parents...:)
And it makes them so much more ready for school proper and the big outside world..
Have no fears...God is here
Blessings
Peter
Kindergarten Anxiety (Short Story) - 8/2/2006 8:45:19 AM
I remember when I started kindergarten; I was scared to DEATH!! O, you brought back memories with this one; God bless you, and may God bless your little guy as he starts on his new adventure; you both will be in my prayers! :) Delightful write! :)
Purgatory (Poetry) - 6/23/2008 11:46:27 AM
Always good to read your wonderful and descriptie works Kimberly !
* Wrapped in a cocoon of helpless desperation *....Oh Boy what a line !
Rock on !
Love
PP
Purgatory (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 7:16:27 PM
Excellent choice of verbs - begging, stumbling, scraping, struggling, ripping out...give this poem real momentum.
John
Purgatory (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 3:35:32 PM
Stunning both picture and words drive home with a huge impact. Well done.
Fee
Lost (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 10:13:36 AM
Kim,
Lost, excellent name for this one as are your other poems. You seem to bury reality with deep emotions. Keep up the good work. Your writing is outstanding. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
Dangerous Liaison (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 10:06:39 AM
Kim,
I got the visuals of a vampire reading this one. A very chillings piece. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
Purgatory (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 10:03:41 AM
Kimberly,
Love it. Sort of Stephen King-ish. I found your use of words very exquisite and well chosen. I sure hope the end is nowhere like your description. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
Lost (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 8:12:30 AM
Such moods produce good poetry. I wonder what you'd write like
on the light side. Whatever, i like the way you write. -gene.
Dangerous Liaison (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 8:07:21 AM
Kimberly, you do write well. Great poem. - gene.
Purgatory (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 8:04:25 AM
Shades of Dante. I love it, Kimberly. Love the pace, the energy,
the writing, and of course the concept.
Purgatory (Poetry) - 6/21/2008 7:07:47 AM
dark and foreboding, and a good write you have penned.
peace,
dan
Dangerous Liaison (Poetry) - 8/11/2007 8:04:40 AM
Lots of energy in your pen...nicely written.
Thanks,
Dan
Dangerous Liaison (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 10:15:58 PM
Must have been some evening, kept my attention all the way through....
Be safe,
Karen
Dangerous Liaison (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 7:17:25 PM
Was it live or memorex? Nice write
Dangerous Liaison (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 2:26:43 PM
Hauntingly sensual write that tells it like it is, when passion goes past the point of desire nothing matters at that certain point but to be sated and spent and worry the quilt to death the next day...wild write my friend, loved it.
Fee
Lost (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 5:32:44 PM
a deep sense of angst and hopelessness effectively portrayed ...
Lost (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 4:48:44 AM
17-IT’S NICE TO BE ON BOARD-CONFIDENT THE JOURNEY IS MOVING FORWARD-AND SURROUNDED BY OTHERS WHO ENJOY THE FEELING-I CAN NOW SEE THAT TIME SPENT WITHOUT A COMFORTER IN SPIRIT IS MUCH LIKE BEING ADRIFT-NOTHING IN SIGHT-NO SENSE YOU ARE GETTING ANYWHERE-INSECURITY IS THE MOST OFTEN REALIZED FEELING YOU HAVE-OH IT’S SO-SO NICE TO BE ON BOARD-CONFIDENT IN THE REALISM- {understood & willful} evol=love - Ted
Lost (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 9:10:21 PM
Kim, enjoyed reading this dark tale of sadness...
Thanks,
Dan
Lost (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 6:56:35 PM
A very lonely, sad write. A need for answers and to look into the light......
Be safe,
Karen
Lost (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 12:21:30 PM
A dark place in your life Kimberly....I like to refer to these depressing bouts as storms......We all suffer through them.....Hang on and embrace the trials......Know that you are never alone.....There are significant lessons and much beauty to follow.....Thanks for sharing your trip my friend....
Peace,
Bill
Lost (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 11:24:12 AM
There is always hope as long as you keep writing and freeing your pent-up frustrations with love and life.
Lost (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 9:51:44 AM
This was great work! Keep poetry alive!
