Blood Brothers (Short Story) - 2/23/2008 3:50:01 PM
Nice tale. Who has true friends when oodles of cash is on the line. Nice read.
Had Baby (Short Story) - 2/7/2008 10:39:38 AM
Tragic heartbreaking story; well penned!
Chains (Short Story) - 2/7/2008 10:38:53 AM
Good horror story; well penned! :)
Blackness (Short Story) - 2/4/2008 1:39:09 AM
OKAY!!! Now, THIS is an awesome story! You are good, girl! I loved this! It's a perfect story. Actually, it seems like a really good beginning to something more... Have you ever thought of adding to it and making it a longer story?
Shiloh
Had Baby (Short Story) - 2/4/2008 1:18:46 AM
Oh gosh!
This was so sad. My heart ached for the poor child. My heart ached for the mother as well. They were both children of circumstance. One didn't ask for the life she was given. The other pushed into a life she could see no way out of.
This was really well written. It brought tears to my eyes and made me consider how I could have been if I had handled my situation differently.
I can see where some women would just consider an unwanted child from a forced union as a curse. I was lucky. My child gave me a reason to continue living. I think I would havekilled myself after my rape if she had not given me something to live for.
Shiloh
Had Baby (Short Story) - 2/3/2008 6:24:13 PM
such a sad story. the poor little girl it wasn't her fault. how dare her mother blame her. it wasn't her fault. what a horrible mother the woman was.i liked the story but god id love to kill the mother for the way she treated her innocent little girl.
