Can I? (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 9:51:50 AM
I think Ray J better go sit it down with his "Sexy Can I" single cause yours is hittin a whole lot better. I really like your whole wade in the water theme going on here that is fire. I was waiting for you to baptist whoever you were talking to with a kiss or something at the end of this joint. But nevertheless, the whole piece was excellent and if I were the fortunate soul for whom these words of love were targeted. I'd be like Obama and tell you "Yes You Can!" Anyways I really liked it and keep up the skillz sista. Peace!
Single Mother (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 8:18:15 AM
Terry,
At least God will not abandon you. I can sympathize with your struggles as a single parent. Sometimes being a single parent can have a benefit. Not everyone is cut out to be a dad. I wish you the best of Peace, Love and Blessings, Always, Paul.
