Yours Is The Touch (Poetry) - 7/26/2009 5:17:36 AM
Wowwwwww..this was great writing dear man..enjoyed..stay safe and well..Hugsss
Yours Is The Touch (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 6:18:02 PM
Excellent poem,take care.I enjoy reading it
EDWIN
Yours Is The Touch (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 10:59:54 AM
Wow! I loved this! "Now you're dead you can't leave this place, A lonely ghost who fell from grace."
CERTAIN MOMENTS (Poetry) - 8/18/2008 6:38:52 AM
What a beautiful love story. We all need a someone, yet have to be strong without them, and remember what they gave.
Mary
Wish I Could Cancel Out The Day (Poetry) - 6/19/2008 3:32:41 AM
BEAUTIFUL,VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE EVERY WORD IN YOUR POEM!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Was It You? (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 1:50:03 PM
OOOhhhh!!! Wow!!! This poem was very visual and I love how you bring it in at the end and made everyone feel the pain. Poetic justice.
Until...
Was It You? (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 6:39:43 PM
How crushingly heartbreaking yet so delicately penned...
Be always safe,
Karen
Staring At Silence (A Love Supreme) (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 1:23:04 PM
Glowing embers, closeness, and whispers, sprouts a glitter in the heart. I enjoyed this.
Staring At Silence (A Love Supreme) (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 10:33:44 AM
Words of wisdom and truth, the right path to be on, beautifully expressed....
Be always safe,
Karen
Can The Ego Change Its Spots At The Turn Of A Year (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 10:15:50 AM
You rose to the challenge, with a surprise ending which is shamelessly self-centered and therefore honest.
I like it.
Gina
Staring At Silence (A Love Supreme) (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 10:13:34 AM
You counter fancy with reality and turn these few lines -- poetic, lyrical in part -- into a stark statement about real love.
Beautifully done.
Gina
I've Been Here Before (Poetry) - 5/3/2008 9:20:37 PM
This really made me think, good stuff.
I've Been Here Before (Poetry) - 5/2/2008 2:46:47 PM
Well descriptive feel of the repeat feeling we all experience from time to time....
Be always safe,
Karen
I've Been Here Before (Poetry) - 5/2/2008 8:29:04 AM
It's amazing how sometimes we feel as though we've walked the journey before. I loved the mystery in this!
To Live Again (Poetry) - 4/19/2008 11:48:34 AM
Very poignant tale, very descriptive and so full of emotion...
Be always safe,
Karen
To Live Again (Poetry) - 4/18/2008 8:11:15 PM
To feel anothers pain is a blessing and curse...Well Done, Deborah
To Live Again (Poetry) - 4/18/2008 5:48:48 AM
David,
Its amazing how you can put yourself in another persons shoes and feel what they may be thinking. I do that alot with my poetry. When I see someone sitting alone, I too wonder whats in their hearts, what their lives must be like. This one's a keeper!
Blessings to you,
~Linda
On The Banks Of The Nile (Poetry) - 2/18/2008 9:08:34 PM
Always find it so disheartening when so many suffer at the hands of a chosen few. You crystalize all the pain and suffering that lies quietly beneath the surface.....
Be always safe,
Karen
