Curse of the Wo/Man (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 1:23:44 PM
GOOD WRITE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE
NegaPos (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 2:05:04 PM
What great truth you have expressed in these few lines...
Ever turning, ever changing...and this too shall pass...
Cryssa
Sullen Artsy Fart / Looking For the Other Part (Poetry) - 4/21/2008 11:28:27 AM
No rhyme is ever wasted dear man, whether awkward or crawling, penning a poem is better than bawling. Cheers, Deborah
NegaPos (Poetry) - 4/18/2008 3:37:17 PM
This really made me think...lots of depth to it!
Laura
Fabian's Predicament (Poetry) - 4/15/2008 6:46:20 PM
Intriguing and creative....
Be always safe,
Karen
Fabian's Predicament (Poetry) - 4/14/2008 8:27:07 PM
This is great, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Passing (Poetry) - 4/14/2008 8:30:30 AM
You certainly provide substance for reflection here again, Damien. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
My O Pic (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 1:24:23 PM
Cleverly concocted, Damien. I'm not "saying" I understand it really but it does give rise to imaginings. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
15% (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 6:09:40 PM
I'm with the mind at ease..
Thanks for your review..
Ron
NegaPos (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 9:10:33 AM
Substance for reflection, Damien. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Alright (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 9:09:31 AM
Quite a ditty with some meaning behind it. Thanks for sharing, Damien. Love and peace,
Regis
My O Pic (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 5:21:01 PM
Interesting and imaginative....
Be always safe,
Karen
My O Pic (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 4:05:25 PM
That is an echoey little thing, isn't it? I love the play on words. But it is about near-sightedness after all... we can't see what is a little distance from us-- reality just out of un-blurred sight... we still see it, but its lines contort--fuzz, and beauty becomes a monster. Behind our closed eyes, we think we see it very well, but we miss the truer vision.
I find this write to be both fun, and pithy-- hard to accomplish, but you did it, and rather well too. --Charlie
Passing (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 8:20:05 PM
Awesome poetry for our day and time.
Welcome to authorsden
Ron
Passing (Poetry) - 1/30/2007 2:46:42 PM
The ancient Greeks would be proud.Great poem.
15% (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:29:18 PM
Unique and intriguing, Damien. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
Ode to mi Qaleia (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:28:17 PM
A most interesting ode, Damien. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Ode to mi Qaleia (Poetry) - 9/7/2006 7:00:48 PM
"Ode to mi Qaleia"
An easy read, like the rhythm also.
Sincerely,
Gwendolyn
NegaPos (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 3:54:10 PM
Tilted perfection, ah. Life.
Tres bon. Thank you.
Ode to mi Qaleia (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 3:04:03 PM
An enjoyable reading... "Ode to mi Qaleia" dances under the rhythm of a poetic feast ~ making its contents glow ~ and its song listened.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Ode to mi Qaleia (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 10:04:29 PM
nice write.....an ode is always appreciated.....LaJaydan
15% (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 11:24:15 PM
Robbing stores per Lincoln. Jarred stock. Robbing stores per Lincoln. Jarred stock. Per cent.
Do you have a place to stay ... a quarter?
Are you going to kill me too ... Di me?
A Saint nickel.
Ya know.
A doll "R".
NegaPos (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 7:15:17 AM
Thoughtful as well as insightful.
Well said.
NegaPos (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 9:54:47 PM
These lines have a lyrical quality to them. A great inspirational message too.
Thanks for sharing.
Chanti
NegaPos (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 6:09:18 PM
I like the way that you wove chaos and beauty together in this poem, just as it is in life.
Quid Pro Quo (Poetry) - 8/6/2006 4:33:29 PM
Sounds as convincin' to me as it did he...E
You are not alone (Poetry) - 8/4/2006 5:05:27 AM
So true.
Not alone unless we wish to be.
Well said.
You are not alone (Poetry) - 8/3/2006 10:13:48 PM
this one was good.....nice little poem....
Shriveled Apathy (Poetry) - 8/3/2006 12:29:11 PM
You might have been reading my mind orwatching me carefully lately as life becomes so hectic that words just aren't there...when you really long to be sprawled on the floor talking it out with someone..untieing the tongue.
Time to slow down....
Taylor
