Our Story (Short Story) - 4/4/2002 2:52:55 PM
Oh my...certainly "heartfelt writing" as Kristie said. Definitely--a ten!
Our Story (Short Story) - 1/23/2002 11:23:53 AM
Wow!!! This was so moving..reminded me of an old love too... You are very talented, Jerry. I agree with Kristie-do we ever know for sure if we chose the right path in our lives? I guess we'll never know.
Our Story (Short Story) - 12/18/2001 8:45:18 AM
Such heartfelt writing! I was moved to tears for I could relate so easily to this. Do we ever know for sure if we choose the right path in our lives??
Kristie Leigh Maguire
My Wishes For You (Short Story) - 10/24/2001 5:36:06 PM
Wonderfully written, Jerry!
Victoria
A Grain Of Hope (Poetry) - 12/12/2008 5:28:23 PM
Yes, vice well done.
God Bless the U.S.A.
Forever and ever!
Amen
God Is (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 4:25:15 PM
God is all and everything everywhere this is a powerful faith poem.
Blessings,
Joselyn
God Is (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 4:09:46 PM
Way to go, Lord! You're right--His beauty surrounds us and it certainly unveils His deity. I love every one of your examples.
God bless you and inspire you daily.
Connie
A Wife’s Prayer (Poetry) - 11/28/2003 9:14:19 AM
Jerry, from an officer of over 25 years, well done!
Hope at stake (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 6:51:53 PM
Heartbreaking and painful to read. It's always a tragedy to lose a loved one, and to try and make sense of why some are taken and some are left,,just doesn't seem to work. Nobody wants to say goodbye to somebody we love, especially when it's one of our children. May God Bless and watch over her parents and family. Lisa
A Call From Heaven (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 10:08:14 PM
Well done, It speaks to the absolute fear of any parent. The imagery was excelent.
A Call From Heaven (Poetry) - 8/31/2003 5:05:52 PM
Beautiful and poignant. A parent's worse nightmare. Good write!
This Policeman’s Prayer (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 11:57:30 AM
god bless you, jerry, and thank you for serving our community so that we may be safe! a heartfelt prayer! (((HUGS))) and god's blessings to you~ your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
Worthy And Bold (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 8:45:01 AM
Interesting... :)
--Karissa
A Grain Of Hope (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 8:31:19 PM
Wonderful write Jerry, good to read your words again...Be well my friend
A Grain Of Hope (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 6:47:36 PM
Bravo. Of course the armchair protestors and politicians may give you some flack...but they don't count for much anyway...[smiles]
A Grain Of Hope (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 5:29:33 PM
and may he bless YOU, jerry, for writing such a powerful tribute to our troops! outstanding job, my friend! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Deliver Me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 6:18:08 PM
Haunting at first
then a lovely prayer for help
love it!
Deliver Me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:44:21 PM
Song for a hero
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=51556
Deliver Me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 3:03:54 PM
Yes! I've seen this dream before. I prefer flyong in fantasy or dweilling in my dreams witha Titan os a sweet prince. Great write.
Love and peace,
Susan
Prison of My Mind (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 11:09:32 AM
No..one day you can TAKE back the power.. and control that he counts on.. be paranoid in your defense.. Excellent write.
Prison of My Mind (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 10:51:52 AM
Oh this one is powerful in emotions.
peg
A Cop’s Shadow (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 9:17:38 AM
Excellent tribute write.
Peg
Daddy’s Angel (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 12:31:09 PM
what an absolute gem this poem is......just lovely!
Daddy’s Angel (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 7:26:53 AM
this is very beautiful a lovely dedication 2 your daughter
Daddy’s Angel (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 6:51:50 AM
Very warm, and touching!
Daddy’s Angel (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 6:36:42 AM
Oh...so beautiful!!!
Daddy’s Angel (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 6:19:26 AM
Once a Daddy's girl ... always a Daddy's girl. Wonderful birthday tribute. Happy Birthday Brittany!
Jill
Daddy’s Angel (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 5:49:40 AM
Beautifully written, and that will never change she will always be Daddy's little Angel. "Happy Birthday Brittany"
Nancy
My Dream Come True (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 9:35:31 AM
Jerry, seems like your flight of fancy became a beautiful reality. Bill Murray
My Dream Come True (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 7:23:36 AM
You are lucky to have such wonderful dreams..this was nice..Floria
My Dream Come True (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 7:16:12 AM
Jerry,
wonderful write...this is very beautiful !!!!!
Immortal Mortal (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 2:35:52 PM
Beautifully written. She is lucky whoever she is my officah. Happy New Year!
Caryn :O)
Everyday Heroes (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 12:20:32 PM
BRAVO!!! this is absolutely stunning.
***THANK YOU*** for being MY hero...and to all police officers, emt's, paramedics, firemen, doctors, nurses, and community service workers...THANK YOU for your service.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
always remember and never forget!
A Wife’s Prayer (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 12:16:56 PM
i agree with you in prayer...Lord, protect those police officers and their families...keep them safe in Your Arms...in Jesus' Name, AMEN and AMEN...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
THANK YOU...i made a promise on 9-11-01, haven't broken it yet...that's to thank any police officer, emt, or fireman for the job they do...to protect us...and keep us from harm...so...THANK YOU, SIR. :) God bless!!
Painless Sting Of Death (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 12:13:40 PM
amen...we don't understand the incredible hold drugs hold over those that use them...i smoke cigarettes, wish i'd never started...damn things are hard to put down...worse than using heroin, or so i've been told...this is a powerful, intense, moving, and well needed write...thanks for sharing...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
A Wife’s Prayer (Poetry) - 8/18/2002 12:23:30 PM
An excellent write Jerry...A great perspective from the wife's eyes. I spent over 20 years on the beat with that shadow that hung over me never knowing if someday I may not come home. I attended too many funerals of really good men and women. Great write, my friend. Continue to write and explore these worlds.
Amor
A Wife’s Prayer (Poetry) - 8/18/2002 11:55:19 AM
This was extremely well done Jerry!
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 3:20:22 AM
Wow, Jerry!! This is so powerful and real...Great write!! I have missed your work.
Jenni
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 2:02:50 AM
Once again you have moved me with your sensitivity and raw emotion... what a beautiful lament..Elizabeth
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 11:55:08 AM
beautifully written sad lament, warm regards to you...glad you could write this...
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 8:32:57 AM
nice poetic lament...
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 5:01:55 AM
Had to get the kleenex out..VERY moving and heartfelt poem. I hope this was'nt true.
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 5:01:43 AM
wonderful, sad, heartmelting. ((sniff))!
love and light
Kathy
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 4:30:54 AM
This write has moved me to tears. A very heartfelt emotional poem.
Farewell My Love (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 3:04:57 AM
Such poetic emotion. Wonderful!
Sleepless (Poetry) - 6/10/2002 3:19:38 AM
I hope this ghost has dark hair, green-eyes and likes to write poetry and books. Hope you are well my officah.
Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/31/2002 9:17:01 PM
excellent piece, but you won't last long at that rate...;-)
Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/31/2002 8:41:50 PM
Heartfelt anguish of missing someone very dear! Joy, peace and guardian angels are constant companions to any who have worked so as to access such depth of feeling.
Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/31/2002 7:21:00 PM
It is always nice to have an imaginery friend. Nice write!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Angels Of Hell (Poetry) - 5/21/2002 8:51:58 PM
"all the demons are really angels just waiting to be set free" Meister Eckhart
Angels Of Hell (Poetry) - 5/20/2002 10:40:35 AM
Spoken with lots of strength and inspirations!!!!! I like this!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Dying Inside (Poetry) - 4/12/2002 5:44:40 PM
Your poem is very moving. You did a good job in expressing yourself.
Dying Inside (Poetry) - 4/11/2002 8:07:16 AM
I'm glad your heart turns to "mush" where the little ones are concerned--however, you should never feel guilty, only grief for the innocent children when their parents choose to love the drugs more than their children. A wonderful write...
Dying Inside (Poetry) - 4/10/2002 12:26:07 PM
Geez Jerry...this blows me away... This is so tragic.....
Jenni
Dying Inside (Poetry) - 4/10/2002 11:25:40 AM
SOOOO emotional. Beautiful expression of feeling.
Scada
Dying Inside (Poetry) - 4/10/2002 11:13:02 AM
Very well written...it must be hard to be part of ,but drugs are illegal, and that is the law of the land...
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/4/2002 2:47:14 PM
A great write--I like your honesty!
Scars Of War? (Poetry) - 4/4/2002 2:35:43 PM
A haunting tale...very well written. Monsters dwell amongst us...and some wear faces we know all too well...
Everyday Heroes (Poetry) - 4/4/2002 2:29:57 PM
As imperfect as they may be (and we all are!)--they are definitely heroes! "They are there on the front line, everyday" Wonderful theme, wonderful write!
Everyday Heroes (Poetry) - 4/4/2002 6:53:40 AM
Fantastic write...
*Trixie*
Everyday Heroes (Poetry) - 4/4/2002 5:12:52 AM
Great to see you again, Jerry... You have a masterpiece here!!!
Your Faithful Fan,
Jenni
Everyday Heroes (Poetry) - 4/4/2002 3:27:50 AM
Very interesting Jerry, and well-worth the reading.
Great write!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Reflection (Poetry) - 3/24/2002 7:47:15 AM
Jerry--All of us have pieces of us that are best left unseen..
Scars Of War? (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 4:42:31 PM
excellent poetry...
Scars Of War? (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 11:37:23 AM
Great poetry..Drugs are destroying our families as evidenced by the huge influx of children into foster care..Jerry, keep writing..
Scars Of War? (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 10:44:15 AM
Oh Jerry....I am so deeply moved....wonderful...
Scars Of War? (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 2:55:00 AM
Heartfelt and sad......and you've told it so well.
Great work Jerry!!!!! This is a poem everyone must read!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Scars Of War? (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 2:28:46 AM
Oh Jerry...when will this vicious cycle ever end!!!! This is fantastic writing...so real. And so very sad... Keep up your great work, Jerry, both here and out there!
Jenni
Reflection (Poetry) - 3/20/2002 5:19:37 PM
Hi Jerry...excellent piece... As a teacher in a depressed school, I too, wear many hats..Mother, Father even, lawyer, judge, baby sitter, nurse and so many more... I appreciate what youre saying here...
Jenni
Reflection (Poetry) - 3/20/2002 2:53:54 AM
I think at times the mirror tells us all more than we care to know. Excellent write.
