Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 8/13/2007 8:22:46 PM
Bittersweet write full of love. Give your love freely every moment of every day because the time passes much too quickly and then they are grown and gone......
Be safe,
Karen
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 8/13/2007 6:57:57 PM
The beauty lies in watching them grow...each phase precious and only comes once in a lifetime. Beautiful write.
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 8/13/2007 6:45:09 PM
How true! Sadly we have not yet found a way to turn back that clock... Really enjoyed your poem!
R&B
Shadow Queen (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 8:52:53 PM
This is a very compelling poem, really loved it!
Love, R&B
Shadow Queen (Poetry) - 11/27/2006 1:13:28 PM
A melancholy tone pervades this fine write. Although the experience is usually debilitating, there are times when being subjugated to a stronger personality can offer us the input we need to reap a harvest of insight and creative acumen.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Through Double Panes Of Glass (Poetry) - 11/27/2006 1:08:53 PM
A fine skillful poem that speaks fluidly of the subjectivity of what we see, and how we interpret what we see.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Through Double Panes Of Glass (Poetry) - 11/27/2006 9:29:02 AM
Bonnie, that was beautiful. Your poetry is full of emotions. I would not have explained much bforehand. The test of a poem is to see if a reader understood it. You are very lucid and understood perfectly. Excellent poem and one of the best I've read today. I look forwards to reading you again and invite you to my poor den for you are a better poet. Victor
Through Double Panes Of Glass (Poetry) - 11/26/2006 10:15:20 PM
"Double Panes"
Twice the shattering?
Twice the pain?
Twice the strength?
The reader is left to contain.
Which one will remain?
Or will they reframe?
Or find great gains?
Honestly written
Beautifully worded
Great title.
DWB
