Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 8:57:56 PM
this is a great playful piece. I must write you about this one. You've really struck a chord.
j
You and I (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 8:55:38 PM
I feel cool... this is an icy piece. I think that if someones been here in there life... its a very heart felt cluster of thoughts, feelings... of pain. Raped is a good word. Only time wold heal this heart and scars would always remain.
j
You and I (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 7:01:14 PM
You were able to express your message with just a few words. Wonderful work!
Chanti
You and I (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 5:11:46 PM
well done ... enjoyed reading ...
You and I (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 11:49:45 AM
darkly she flows...
nice piece.
des
You and I (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 9:49:14 AM
Too many wear devious masks that pull us into false intrigues.
If this was a work of imagination Lara - I commend you. If this was an extrapolation of real life - I commend you strength and ability to hit the nail on the head!
Filled with bubbling emotion ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
You and I (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 4:31:30 AM
Lara
Never put your complete trust in another !
Peter
You and I (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 3:51:26 AM
Love has been known to wither and die on the vine, sometimes even seeking out other vines. It is a fact of life. that doesn't negate the hurt, however, nothing really does that . . . Even time, although it can be diminished.
Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 10:16:32 AM
We have something in common, Lara. A love of words and photography of which you are far better than I. I am a mere beginner at both!
Welcome,
Tayor
Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 8/9/2006 4:22:45 PM
I agree with Cynthia...this is a beautiful poem, and I just looked at some of your photography...amazing work. Welcome to Authors Den!
Blessings, Michelle
Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 8/9/2006 3:01:52 PM
Lara,
Welcome to the Den. You are a wonderful photographer. You capture the essence beautifully and your words are deep for someone so young.
I believe you have found yourself.
Cynthia
Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 8/9/2006 8:48:34 AM
Very good...had to look up "atony."
Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 8/9/2006 8:11:50 AM
Poignant read. R
Beautiful Agony (Poetry) - 8/9/2006 7:34:42 AM
Lara
Has a tender bittersweet feeling in this beautiful poem
Love that rose graphic
Peter
