Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 1:16:02 AM
LOL that's funny i bet ma wrote that.
if she didn't then its very cleaver
to post about yourself like that.
I use to talk heaps as my parents would say
but i wouldn't dream of being so brave.
Well done lil' butterfly
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 1:13:40 AM
lol Well my dear lil' sis you can't
always have the best of both worlds.
However when you get older you will
love her that much more everyday.
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 1:11:23 AM
I love dolphins but that is just sad what happened to them all.
Sadly that happens to them (well maybe not all of them) It happens and it's sad that no one cars.
Love Me
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 1:07:49 AM
Hey lil' sis
this is a great poem it done really nicely, it almost goes with a grown up version i have called a just say no but it's not really a poem.
well catcha round
Acirč C (aka Big Sis)
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 5/21/2009 7:27:18 AM
Evie, you certainly got your own and your mom's sense of humor & as always I loved reading this as I do whatever you write...Hope your back to writing a bit every now and then...Give my love to Mom, Dad & your sisters and brothers...Ed & Rufuz [w00f]
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 10:19:28 AM
A sad but real account of what is happening globally to this planet. A most important and timely write, Evie. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 10:17:52 AM
A delightful poem, Evie. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 9:37:18 AM
EVIE... Well done!
My Dad used to say: "if they are making fun of me, that's good. it means they are leaving someone else alone!"
When you are able to 'make fun' of yourself - and enjoying it - that is even MORE GOODER!
TomKat.
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 9:24:43 PM
YOU got that right Evie
bullying is bad!
YOur mom should send ALL your poems into Highlights for kids, MOm- look up on internet, Highlighting.com or highlightingforchildren.com Good luck!
You amaze me with your writing flowwww and your writing talents Evie!
Warm hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!
and get into Hightlights, I know a few will make it!
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 9:21:29 PM
This poem is GREAT!
Wow, you have talent
and I found your Kookaburra a treat!
Warm hugs, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay happy and Positive!
I do know this song, the kids on my bus sing it! :)
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 9:19:10 PM
noisy, cute and adorable, you be Evie!
This chitter chattering that you do, will come in handy with all the writing that comes through you! as your future moves along happily~
I'm Proud of you! I really am! From a mom to a caring a little but important friend!
Warm hugs, Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive, Happy and SAFE!
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 9:15:35 PM
OH My Evie, your mind is playing dolphin tricks!
They better treat those dolphins right!
How old are you again?
I'm amazed at your shining talent!
I am a school bus driver, almost 10yrs. now, and hear many children's stories, and you astound me! little lady!
Have a great day! in the sun or shade!
Warm Hugs, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
BE Happy!
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 9:12:04 PM
Love this poem Evie!
You have a future in writing!
Now, go and get yourself your very own Wiggly retreat!
You write great and with a wonderful flowwwwwwww with your words!
WArm hugs, Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Happy and Positive!
I started TRAcking/Following your caring heart, after I read your Bio tonight~ Sweetie I know your mom!
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 7/10/2007 7:29:01 AM
Oooh, does your little sister mind that the whole wide world now knows that she, er, snorezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz?
I must read this delightful story to Mrs Dai and then offer to make her a Wiggle's retreat too. I wouldn't mind the cold but at least I could sleep zzzzzzzzzzoundly:)
Oh oh, now the big world also knows my missus snorezzz...
Regards
Dai
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 8:49:39 PM
Awwwwww this is just so adorable! Bet you wish she was back with you now??????
Be safe,
Karen
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 3:26:05 PM
Very good Little Evie, I love this look at how you love your little sister even though you don't like to admit it.
Fee
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 3:51:35 AM
Evie,
There's an old saying that goes like this, "you can't have your cake and eat it too." God Bless.
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 7:37:25 PM
So cute and funny too, Evie, you have your mommy's sense of humor...I was always an only child when I was little so I only knew of my own bed and room till my little brother was born...he only lived 12 years but he was a rascal, doing the same things as your little sister, stealing covers and such...enjoy having her, as you both are bright stars...Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 3:40:51 PM
They do require attention. Enjoyed
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 11:21:19 AM
Awwwww.....tell grandma to get you a tent too!!
Thanks for sharing your little secret Evie!!
Love Auntie Tinka
Rae's Wiggle Retreat (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 7:09:00 AM
ahhh, this is cute. i hated it when my grandson got too old to crawl in my bed and 'snugglebunny' as he called it...
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 7:57:02 AM
I've always wondered what a Kookaburra was, thanks...Ed
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 7:54:20 AM
I agree, Evie, unfortunately though bullying is part of growing up even for the bully...he will come around eventually, though not always as I remember a couple from High School that still to this day like to "act" tougher than the rest of us...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 7:22:18 PM
Quite a strong sense of right and might you have young Mz Evie, keep going like that and one day you may be a marine biologist and get to swim with the dolphins...best to your mommy & the doggies from Ed & Rufuz...;)
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 9:14:29 AM
Stunned. Amazing, unique poetry, telling a powerful message in such an amazing way. A lot of thought and work has gone in to this.
Worth sending it out to a magazine..
Top write...
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 6:15:14 AM
The one good thing about this generation, is they teach these environmental issues in schools mandatory. The amount of work they bring home is fantastic, and while Evie writes about these things, her younger sibs, well they likes to draw them...and I get a buzz out of encouraging these talents...I've got a fridge covered in pics, running outa door space LOL.
Proud Mama
Ch'erie
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 5:03:32 AM
A very sad, true to life poem. Keep writing about the plight of earth's animals, Evie - your generation is their only hope for continued survival. Far too many adults no longer care.
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 2:27:57 AM
Evie,
I love the picture. Very good write. Not only the dolphins but many mammals and animals have been put on the endangered list by the insecurities and cruelties of man. Perhaps they'll come a day when the world will learn to appreciate all the blessings that they've been given and treat those blessings with respect. Keep writing and always remember that your talent is a blessing from God.
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 1:25:46 AM
Very well done and a good lesson on how quickly we can lose the beauty of this world and it's inhabitants that surround us. You captured your subject well here Evie and I know you put a lot of heart and soul into this one.
Hugs
Fee
Where did all the Dolphins go? (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 12:44:02 AM
A sad world we live in today. It appears there is no one left to care what is happening. Why? When will the people of the world begin caring again? A very good heartfelt piece.......
Be safe,
Karen
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 5:03:31 PM
hahaha cute picture thats my grandmother nickname
this is a really cute write
really nice share thanks!!
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 11:24:06 PM
OOOOH Yeah LOL
MUM
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 11:23:45 AM
Noise annoys an oyster, so make heapsa noise, fun fun fun...
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 10:01:54 AM
Wonderful to read you again Evie!!
I have a cat that looks like the one in the picture too!!
Love Auntie Tinka
Lil Ms Butterfly (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 4:20:59 AM
This is a lovely write Evie and I think sometimes it is good to be "chattie" I myself have always been on the chattering side and as you are a writer as you grow and talk to more and more people this will help you with your poetry and stories. Very well presented verse with smooth rhyming.
Felix L. Perry
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 6:50:53 PM
HOOO HOOO HOOOO, HAAA HAAA HAAA, oh they are rotters sometimes. And they do fair dinkum laugh at you, I know,I have been laughed at...one of Ozzies finest birds. Evie captures the essence here so keenly, well she ought too, they are in the tree's by her school lolol
Love Mom
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 1:27:04 PM
I love the name and look of the kookaburra, wish I could see one in person. This is a delightful poem, Evie! Thank you for sharing with us!
Eileen
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 11:35:08 AM
Such a beautiful offering!!
You go girly!!
Love Auntie-Tinka
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 9:47:34 AM
Delightful! :)
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 8:44:04 AM
We used to sing the same song....
My son wanted me to push him high on the swing, hoping he could go over the top..Not te brightest of ideas..
Keep flying, spinning and writing. But don't do an Icarus..
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 8:14:05 AM
Evie,
Welcome to AD, you're among friends.
No, bullying is NOT cool. Having been on the receiving end, I can attest to the long lasting effects on psyche. An important, potentially life saving write, very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 8:13:00 AM
Evie,
Enchanting, beautifully metered rhyme of the Kookaburra! They do have a certain engaging call, so I've heard. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 4:58:16 AM
You are grasping the rythem and rhyme of poetry well Evie and this poem is a good example at using your imagination and real life to create a lasting piece of literature. Well done.
Fee
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 4:36:25 AM
Evie:
This is a cutte write. I enjoyed it! The picture of the birds is so cute and adorable.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 4:13:12 AM
Love your Kooka poem and picture, Evie - and that song you sing in school!
Kookaburra's (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 3:11:02 AM
Excellent piece of poetry, such a funny name, Kookaburra, no wonder it lives uo a tree.
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 8:15:04 AM
For one so young you offer a wise and wonderful message that can not be repeated enough. Bullys are losers and friends are to be cherished. Like your mother I can see you have nowhere to go with your writing but into the future and I will look forward to your future works.
Felix
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 6:12:06 PM
Evie, you've got it going on! Great write, on a sore subject for so many kids. Bless you. Michelle
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/18/2006 3:45:16 PM
Very nice words about things which are not nice to do, and they were written so well . . . Plus it all rhymed. Great!
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/18/2006 2:51:54 AM
A-wow....this is really a cool write Evie...you tell them girl!!
Welcome to the DEN girl!!
Tell your mom I say thank you....and the girl from down under...is tracking you!!
Love Tinka
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 2:11:22 PM
Welcome Evie!
Your poetry carries a fine message... Your parents can be proud!
One of my special-needs grandsons was the object of horrifying bullying several years ago...we had to bring in the police, and finally, remove him from public schools. I understand, they have taken increased in-school measures to combat it now.
Prayer is a powerful weapon - and so is your pen. I hope many others join you
in renouncing bullying!
God bless you, Evie
Rhonda [ps. Evie is one of my little-known nicknames! that's what drew me here] LOL
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 12:37:21 PM
Evie, your parents taught you well! This is a fine poem!
Eileen
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 8:58:49 AM
Good advice, Evie; very well done! I have been there; and being bullied hurts. I still feel the pain years later and it is because of this that I don't have a very good sense of self esteem. There are plenty of times where I still feel I am ugly and am not worth anything.
(((HUGS))) and mcuh love, your new friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 8:10:36 AM
I would like to recommend that Peter LOL, as in our days at school it was acceptable, but it's hands off now, as Evie knows, and only these unacceptable bullies who are quick and cunning get one away without reprimand.
I just squeeeeeeel loud and long at the teachers till they sort it LOL.
Im proud as any Mom could be...Keep these coming my little sweetie.
MOM
Bullying is not Cool (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 7:16:41 AM
Evie
Bullies are just cowards..
Ignore them...and if that is not possible...Just bop them on the nose..:)
Peter
