Surviving an Alaskan Nightmare (Article) - 2/27/2002 9:41:21 PM
A very scary story of survival. I like the writers mentioning "denial" and "worrying about the expensive tent". That fact that he for some reason kept his clothes on before sleeping, which he never did, should be explored. Why did he change his routine. Phemonition? A great story. And I wasn't laughing like the guys he told the story to the next day were. I wonder what month it was. That should be put in the article. Because like Marty Robbins sings," When it's springtime in Alaska, it's 40 below."
The Last Oil Field (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 6:25:21 AM
But Texas, the Gulf of Mexico and Alaska are not!
Testing the Might of a Pen (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 6:23:31 AM
I disagree I think it is perfect, needs the adjectives, says it all.
Not to Be (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 6:19:57 AM
I too have suffered a lot of pain and loss, this is a very good write. Thank you for sharing it!
Charleen Burge
Eskimo Baseball (Poetry) - 5/21/2003 12:42:25 PM
i don't care if the words rhyme...I LOVE IT
courageous write of what you went through...i applaude you
well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Eskimo Baseball (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 8:23:24 AM
Pretty good for writer's block.
Charleen
After ANWR (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 8:20:49 AM
I like your piece. It states a point in fact. This comes from a Texan.
Charleen Burge
Eskimo Baseball (Poetry) - 9/14/2002 12:27:02 PM
it must have been interesting being the only white kid among the yupi'k eskimos. i know how you feel; at work, i feel like at times i am the only white one among a sea of non-english speaking mexicans (although i know that isn't exactly true; still, most of the back of the house help ARE mexican, and they don't speak english; it makes for a very frustrating time for me!!). good write, anyway!! :)
Eskimo Baseball (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 1:08:55 PM
I like this poem, although the words in it don't exactly rhyme.
After ANWR (Poetry) - 4/16/2002 1:32:33 PM
Very interesting write...
Trixie
After ANWR (Poetry) - 4/16/2002 12:57:59 PM
I think, "ANWR" is BOSS. Great poem...vls
The Last Oil Field (Poetry) - 2/19/2002 11:46:57 AM
Very powerful very powerful it has us take a good look at how our culture is about do as i say not as i do
Testing the Might of a Pen (Poetry) - 10/16/2001 10:42:19 PM
flows well until the last line, maybe just the sword minus the adjectives? The rest is so succinct that the last line seems to disturb the rhythm. Or maybe that was on purpose.
