Ascension (Poetry) - 1/2/2024 3:19:32 PM
Colleen,
I've only just read your poem for the first time and it is stunningly beautiful. It simply takes my breath away.
Gary
Ascension (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 5:01:43 PM
Not one to be generally drawn to poetic verse, this poem is truly beautiful, touching and poignant. It never fails to move me and give me a sense of hope each time I read it over the years.
Ascension (Poetry) - 9/30/2008 9:48:32 AM
Beautiful poem with a profound truth within it!-To this sentiment, may I add this quotation: "Those that trust in the Lord shll renew
their strength; they shall soar on wings as the eagles; they shall walk and not faint." (Isdaiah 40:31.)
Ascension (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 11:00:48 AM
Good advice and good sentimental poetry. Thanks for it and for caring to give people hope and faith.
Ascension (Poetry) - 12/10/2007 9:37:53 PM
Nicely done. The last line nurtures hope.
Ascension (Poetry) - 10/8/2006 5:21:01 PM
How beautiful...so touching. Michelle
Ascension (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 11:40:28 AM
Touching. Very much so. In the nineteen years which has passed since this writing I imagine it is even more profound to you than it was then.
Ascension (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 6:05:07 AM
Though I've never heard of the pen before, I do find it being one that would ease the minds of those left behind.
Ascension (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 6:39:31 PM
This poem was written 19 years ago?
How much life has changed since then. And how much we have grown in our understanding of life and the ramifications of such.
This is a heartfelt construct Colleen - I am looking forward to your next write.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Author/Poet
