A kid I knew (Short Story) - 5/18/2014 6:07:55 AM
He was in the wrong place at the wrong time? Or someone was jealous of his ability to charm others. Could be anything, but it's a terrible waste when a good kid like that doesn't make it a high school.
Ron
The thought of your presence (Poetry) - 11/29/2025 8:49:56 AM
Regardless of the form, very good. Shows humility and longing. We've all had those moments where we are in the presence of beauty and intelligence that we can't touch.
Ron
Stay strong young man![First Draft] working title (Poetry) - 5/20/2020 7:13:12 AM
"Multiple selfish shots," is like those who spend too much time looking in the near rather than looking outward in helping others without preconception of who or what they are. For some reason that little phrase that I took the liberty of changing a bit refers to our fearless leader of this country, so busy checking his tweets that he isn't paying attention to doing right by our country.
Strength is not reassuring oneself. But making the best of whatever situation comes up and facing it with positive action rather than negative thoughts.
Ron
Untitled (Poetry) - 6/1/2014 8:19:42 AM
Sounds like the spider, or the look of true love. We've all got our keys and some are the so simple it's scary. How easy to be ensnared are we? I loved the lines Marco. Bob
Sonnet 1 - If I could paint a saxophone (Poetry) - 6/1/2014 8:14:43 AM
As one would describe a painting or a series of quick pictures these lines hint at the curve of life, happiness, sadness and the ultimate end of life in joy. I did indeed enjoy this Marco. Well written. Bob
We complete me (Poetry) - 4/26/2014 5:23:04 AM
This is certainly something to ponder about. i enjoyed the verses in your poem. thank you for sharing.
We complete me (Poetry) - 4/25/2014 1:47:27 PM
It's tempting to deny "their"
significance...especially
for philosophers...the "we"
a vital part of ourselves...
...in exile...
Thank you Marco for sharing
your
We complete me (Poetry) - 4/25/2014 10:38:30 AM
Deep poetic thoughts that makes one think. Deserves a second and third read because so few words can still have many meanings. Very thought provocative Marco! Well done!
We complete me (Poetry) - 4/25/2014 7:42:38 AM
A nice little use of words.
Ron
Picture this (Poetry) - 2/18/2014 7:45:10 AM
The inconsistencies show some vacillation of thought.
Ron
Picture this (Poetry) - 2/18/2014 6:57:57 AM
Marco,
I hope the darkness you felt then has felt the sunshine. Excellent poetry.
Love and blessings,
Linda
Picture this (Poetry) - 2/17/2014 6:13:30 PM
Excellent poem with a "wake-up and die right" message!
Picture this (Poetry) - 2/17/2014 9:44:00 AM
happiness does blosom if we seek it truly in our heart
budd
Picture this (Poetry) - 2/17/2014 9:17:05 AM
When addiction kicks in, not a good place to be. Well-expressed darkness in this poem.
Sandie :o)
Transparency (Poetry) - 6/28/2013 4:58:31 PM
Thank you Evelyn and Budd...I am glad you enjoyed it!
Transparency (Poetry) - 6/28/2013 11:34:28 AM
Joy and laughter always make the pain go away. Awesome!
Transparency (Poetry) - 6/27/2013 7:39:22 AM
a wonderful walk of enlightenment
budd
Life After You (Poetry) - 3/10/2011 7:10:55 AM
Best friends ..true lovers oh yesssss maybe even soulmates very wise indeed sweet man...Hugssss..keep smiling OK
Life After You (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 3:55:41 AM
A wise pen. I doubt two can ever be true lovers unless they are friends.
Life After You (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 9:00:39 PM
Bittersweet when two come to a realization, an awakening, and find it is time to move forward...
Be always safe,
Karen
Life After You (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 7:27:16 AM
It is always very good- when there are survivors in the wreakage.
A fine poem.
John
She's Not A Threat, She's A Treat! (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 8:12:36 AM
This is playful, and sexy.......a bit of a tease here
well done
pax A
welcome to the den :)
A Poet’s Expression (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 8:09:18 AM
All experiences make you learn
even if they hurt or confuse
its a part of life
sadly
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this is so very well expressed
pax a
She's Not A Threat, She's A Treat! (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 7:49:30 AM
A thought provoking write with a sound message. I like this!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A Poet’s Expression (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 2:26:41 PM
Oh man! Not a good position. Just remember, some was with you simply because of 'the way you are'. That's the best person. Insightful write.
Rusty
